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The graph give information about the quantities of XXX from 1987 to 1973 in XX.
The graph illustrate how XXX changed.
The graph compares XXX in terms of XXX
The chart (graph/ bar chart/) reveals the percentage (proportion) of different types of(variety of) XXX who … in 1999
Eg:
- The graph reveals that the proportion of households both in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales from 1918 to 2011
- The graph reveals that the percentages of variety of categories of families who lived in poverty in Australia in 1999
- The chart reveals that the amount of electricity that was produced and consumpted by the top ten contries in
中间:
找两组特殊的进行比较,描写变化
将没写到的进行补充,先做比较,再写变化
静态饼图
中美(主体段1):
①从图表中可以看出中国与美国的产电用电量都远远高于其他国家,
②然而,中国的在持续增长,(对比)
③while 美国的在逐渐下降,甚至在某时跌到了最低点。
① 描述一下最大的数据
It is clear to see in the graph that the brands of Samsung and Nokia sold the most mobile phones between 2009 and 2013.
② 对比提到的两个,一个持续增长,达到顶峰
However, the global mobile phone sales number saled by Samsung grew steadily((急剧上升)increased sharply), it reached] the peak in 1900.
The proportion of women engineers in XXX rose consistently from 7% in 2009 to 21% in 2020.
③ 逐渐下降,到达最低
While the Nokia’s sales fall down gradually, even drop from 420 million to 250 million between 2011 and 2013.
其他国(主体段2):
上升下降再趋于平稳
According to the data, the year from
①其他的三个国家分别是XXXX。
The other three top selling mobile phone brands between 2009 and 2013 were LG, ZTE and Apple.
②In 2009,他们的产电量分别大概是,
In 2009, these companies sold approximately 125 million, 50milllion and 25 million mobile handsets respectively,
③但是A在2011年超过了其他两个。
but Apple overtook the other two brands in 2011.
④在某年,A达到了多少,While 其他的下降了。
In 2013, purchases of Apple handsets reached 150 million units, while LG declining sales and the figures for ZTE rose slightly.
上升或下降后趋于平稳
According to the data, from 2000 to 2001 saw a rise/climb/drop in the number/percentage/proportion of XX from 2 to 4, which was followed by a rapid decrease/reduce/increase over the 2003.
Also, it can be noticed that in 1987. The number of XXX reached the bottom.
结尾:
总结数值大小:某某占据最大比例
总结趋势特征:某某上升下降
Overall, the graph shows how consumption of
练习:
题目1
The bar chart compares men or women in terms of the time they devoted to housework in three different years.
(①描述最大数据)It is clear to see in the chart that women who has no job unemployed done most housework. The time they spent on housework between 1985 and 2005 never less than 6 hours one day. (②描述最大数据的变化)The figure from 7 hours in 1985 dropped to 6.3 hours in 1995, and soon increased to 7.2 hours in 2005. (③描述接近的数据)There was a similar trend in the figure for women who worked part-time and full-time. The figures both decreased slightly in 1995 and then growth moderately in 2005.(缓慢下降再缓慢上升)
(①描述最小数据)It also be noticed that the people with full-time work no matter wen or women done the shortest time housework. (②比较几个小数据)As shown in chart, the times done by women who worked full-time spent 2 hours on housework in 1985, 1.6 hours in 1995, 2.3 hours in 2005 perspectively. (③分别比较)And according to the data, from 1985 to 1995 saw a climb in the time of men with full-time job spent on housework from 1 hours to 1.3 hours.
Overall, women, regardless of employment status, spent more time on housework than men. For all of them, the number of hours related to domestic duties did not experience significant changes over the same period.(①女性时间普遍多于男性②变化都不大)
题目2
The bar charts compares the average retirement age of men and women between different countries in 2004 and 2008.
It is clear to see in the first chart that except Italy, all of the countries’ retirement age of wen were increased from 2004 to 2008. As is shown that Sweden men retired at an older age than their counterparts in other countries in both years, which reach 63 years old in 2004 and nearly 64 years old in 2008. The figure for men in Neitherlands and the UK were also relatively high and showed a similar trend, reaching over 62.2 and around 61.8 respectively in 2008. Other countries had lower figures, and nearly all of them rose to some extent, while the figure for Italy remained unchanged at 58.
And it also can be noticed in the second chart that Women in Sweden retired at an older age than other countries, which followed by the women in Netherlands and the UK, All of these countries’ retirement age older than 60 years old. And same as men, Italy women retired at younger age.
Overall, all of the countries retirement age were slightly rose between 2004 and 2008 except Italy. And in general, men had l