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Research has shown that musichas an important effect on one’s moods. So people use different kinds of musicto change moods. If you feel stressed and worry a lot, you can listen to popmusic. After you listen to it, you will feel relaxed. Some of the students arecrazy about computer games and feel over excited, they can listen to countrymusic. After listening to it, they will feel calm and peaceful. Some people feeltired and sleepy, they can listen to rock music. After they listen to it, theywill feel excited. Sometimes I feel lonely and sad, I often listen to discomusic, after I listen to it, I feel happy again. Music is so wonderful. I likeit very much.
【解析】本题要求写一篇音乐的议论文。本题所给材料较为详细，故动笔前先要认真阅读材料，确定写作内容。写作中主要将各种情绪状态及适合的音乐介绍清楚。结合语境可知本文主要是用一般现在时态进行叙述，人称问题较为复杂，注意主谓一致问题。写作中注意表达的条理性，用好连接词；为丰富文章的文采，可以多用一些复合句。最后，注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误，写好后反复读几遍，适当修改。
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