object confidence_「CET-6提纲作文」Self-confidence

【CET-6提纲作文]Importance of Self-confidence for Young Scientists

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Importance of Self-confidence for Young Scientists. Your composition should be no less than 160 words. It should be based on the following outline.

1.Self-confidence is important and necessary

for young scientists

2.If possible, present examples to support your

view

3.Reasons for the lack of self-confidence

4.Your suggestions for building up self- confidence

【范文】

Importance of Self-confidence for Young Scientists

The quality of self-confidence is very important and truly necessary for young scientists. Without self-confidence it would be impossible for the scientists to accomplish① their research projects. As we know, sometimes research is very difficult and needs one's confidence and strong will to carry it on.

Let us take Albert Einstein for example. He published his theory of relativity② when he was in his thirties. At that time, few scientists would accept this young man's idea. However, Einstein had great self-confidence and stuck to③ his discovery. As time went by, his idea on relativity gradually became popular, and has finally been adopted in the world.

Self-confidence is closely associated with one's education background and working environment. Young scientists sometimes lack confidence in themselves simply because they are young and not experienced. In addition, they haven't established their status④ in their fields of research, and they are not sure if they can succeed or not.

To gain self-confidence, one needs to have strong motivation⑤ and has to work very hard. If you could manage to be successful in even a simple task assigned to you, you will build up your confidence step by step⑥. Certainly you'll meet with some failures, but don't give up and keep on working. One day you will succeed and will have more confidence for any kind of work.

【注释】

①accomplish: 完成

②relativity: 相对论

③stuck to: 坚持

④status: 地位

⑤motivation: 动机

⑥step by step: 逐步

【简评】

这是一篇根据英文提纲提示展开的议论文。

本文根据提纲要求，分四个部分展开段落。第一段写自信对青年科学家是十分重要和必要的。缺乏自信，要完成科研项目是不可能的。第二段以爱因斯坦创立相对论为例，对自信的重要性加以证明。第三段用列举法分析了缺乏自信的原因。第四段，作者提出了建立自信的方法：To gain self-confidence, one needs to have strong emotion and has to work very hard.

这篇短文中心突出，主题明确，语言简洁通畅。举例精当，分析透彻，增强了文章的说服力。