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- 背景原则
例句:Along with the remarkable advancement of the science and technology in the contemporary society,随着科学技术在当代社会的飞速发展,
背景就是:Along with the remarkable advancement of…随着…巨大的进步,…怎么样。
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帽子原则
帽子一:
例句:Nobody could fail to notice the fact that an increasing number of Chinese are fond of celebrating some Western festivals today.没有人可以否认这样的事实那就是:越来越多的中国人喜欢庆祝一些西方节日。1.Nobody could fail to notice the fact that…没有人可以否认这样的事实那就是…
2.There is no denying that…
3.It is widely accepted that…
4.It is universally acknowledged that…帽子二:
例句: As is verified in a recent survey conducted by the China Daily / the Economist / the Chinese Academy of Science,…正如《中国日报》/《经济学人》/ 中科院 所做的趣味调查一样,…假设我们作文题目是关于旅游的,我们就可以这样写:As is verified in a recent survey conducted by the China Daily,people in expanding numbers are getting interested in traveling.正如《中国日报》所做的趣味调查一样,越来越多的人对旅游感兴趣。
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插足原则
万能插足语:- for my part
- from my own perspective
- undoubtedly
- definitely
插足条件:主谓之间
例句:
1.Writing,undoubtedly,makes an exact man.写作,毫无疑问,让人变得严谨。
2.Nobody could fail to notice the fact that the Internet , from my own perspective,is becoming increasingly popular.在我看来,没有人可以否认那就是互联网正变得越来越受欢迎。(这句话把帽子原则和插足原则用在一起了)
3.最后加一个上面三个原则一起使用的例子:Along with the tremendous advancement of the science and technology in contemporary city,nobody could fail to notice the fact that writing,undoubtedly,makes an exact man. 随着科技在当代城市的飞速发展,毫无疑问,没有人可以否认一个事实那就是写作使人严谨。当你把几个想法先用短句描述一遍,在加上帽子,背景什么的,要能合在一起最好了,不能也没关系;而且这些方法可以反复用而不出现重复,但很可惜背景法则只能用一次。
加工部分先这样,到时候考前再在刘晓艳那个视频里总结一下。