第一段3~4
第二段5~7
第三段1~2
222~250
开头段
组织结构
段首:提出图画的话题活动(正在做什么,正在表现什么,处于什么情景等)
段中:描述重要的细节(具体信息是什么,人物的表情、衣着、身材等是什么)图中存在的逻辑关系是什么,表达的环境是什么,等等)
段尾:提出图画的内在含义(从图中得到了什么启发,指出图中暗示的寓意)为下文的发展做出铺垫等)
模板
What greets the eye is an exquisite and thought-provoking image. The characters within the picture are meticulously depicted, capturing the theme the artist intends to convey: XXX. Undoubtedly, this contemplative and educational scene offers us numerous insights into learning and life.
引入眼帘的是幅精美且令人深思的图画。图中人物的动作精准描绘了作者想要传递给我们的主题: XXX。毫无疑问,这一令人深思和具有教育意义的场景能给我们很多关于学习和生活上的启发。
2.
Emerging from the cartoon is an eye-catching scene that一个人的具体动作状态描述,while另一个人的具体动作状态描述 Undoubtedly,this contemplative and educational scene offers us numerous insights into learning and life.
开场句(三选一):
"The drawing above depicts a thought-provoking scene:…“
上图描绘了一个发人深省的场景
"This is surely a witty and thought-provoking picture that …”
这的确是一幅设计巧妙、引起关注的图片…
"Emerging from the cartoon is an eye-catching scene that…“
从漫画中浮现出来的是一个引人注目的场景
最大动作,细节动作
例
When: at this moment
Who: a beautiful girl
Where/how: who is sitting at a desk
What(谓语): is listening to an onlinelecture
How (with) : with a cell phone in her hand
无明显地点
Stand in front of us
Stand in the sunshine/darkness
Stand in the middle of the picture
细节
With/having a smile on her face
With/having a sweat pouring down her cheek
With a pair of sun glasses
Without any communication
With garbage floating on the lake
过渡句总结句
Undoubtedly,this contemplative and educational scene offers us numerous insights into learning and life.
毫无疑问,这一令人深思和具有教育意义的场景能给我们很多关于学习和生活上的启发。
We are informed that…
Below the drawing, there is a caption which says, “…"
The caption indicates that…
The picture intends to conveyus that…
图表作文第一段
第一句
The data presented in the chart above shows that A of B demonstrate(s) evident distinctions in C(t地 点) from 年份 to 年份.
静态图
According to the data, 内容 1 accounts for the largest share, approximately xx%. 内容 2 and 内容 3 follow, making up around xx% and xx% respectively. Meanwhile, the smallest proportions are attributed to 内容 4 and 内容 5,at roughly xx% and xx%.
根据数据,内容1所占的份额最大,约为xx%。内容2 和内容3紧随其后,分别约占xx%和xx%。同时,最小的比例归于内容4和内容5,大约为xx%和 xx%。
数据增加
增加/上升/提高:
- 动词: increase, grow, rise, climb, expand, jump, skyrocket, surge, soar, ascend, accumulate, swell + to/by,
- 词组: go/push up, continue its upward trend, on the rise/increase, manage a moderate/small gain
- 名词: increase, rise, growth, expansion, gain, jump, climb (show/witness/experience)
数据下降
减少/下降:
- 动词:decrease,decline,fall,drop,reduce,descend,diminish, slide, slump, shrink, collapse + to/by…
- 词组: go down, drop/fall off, continue its downward trend,on the decline,slow down
- 名词:decrease,decline,slowdown,drop,fall,shrinkage, diminishment
数据不变
保持平稳/不变:remain stable/steady/unchanged at…,stabilize at…
下降后保持平稳:bottom out at…
上升后保持平稳:level off at.
数据变化
起伏/波动:fluctuate(slightly/dramatically)(between…and…) rebound(反弹)/recoverfrom…
rise and fall,smallrises and falls,a minor fluctuation,ups and downs
达到顶峰:reach thepeak/summit at…//peak at…
降到最低:reach the bottom at…//bottom at…
程度修饰
- 变化巨大
迅速的,飞快的rapid/rapidly
戏剧性的,生动的dramatic/dramatically
有意义的,重大的significant/significantly
锐利的,明显的 sharp/sharply
急剧升降的steep/steeply - 变化微小,平缓
稳固的,坚定不移的 steady/steadily
渐进的,逐渐的 gradual/gradually
缓慢的,不活跃的 slow/slowly
轻微的,略微的 slight/slightly
稳定的 stable/stably
动态图
There was a slight(轻微的)/sharp(急剧的)/stable(稳定的)growth(增长)/decline(下降) in the A of B from 数字 + 单位 to 数字 + 单位 over the period from 年份 to 年份,while it was also pronounced that the A of B increased(上升)/decreased(下降)sharply(急剧地)/slightly(轻微地)/stably(稳定地)from 数字 + 单位 to 数字 + 单位during this period.
在从XX年到XX年的这段时间里,B中的A 出现了轻微的/急剧的/稳定的增长/下降,从数 字+ 单位增加/减少到数字+单位。同时,也明显看出,在这一时期,B中的A从数字单位急剧上升/轻微上升/稳定上升至数字+单位。
第二段
品质或现象
品质类理由 一:
XX is not only a manifestation of individuality but also a catalyst for spiritual growth. It fosters the healthy development of our mindset, granting us greater resolve and self-assurance on the path to success. Within specific domains, those who maintain their authenticity and preserve their unique traits are often more likely to emerge as ultimate victors.
xx不仅是个性的体现,更是心灵成长的催化剂。它能够促进我们心态的健康发展,让我们在追求成功的道路上更加坚定和自信。在特定领域内,那些能够坚守自我、保持个性的人往往更有可能成为最终的赢家。
品质类理由二:
When an individual can genuinely express XX in their work and life, their growth trajectory becomes distinctly visible: they either flourish amidst challenges or wither in the face of adversity. If the latter is the case, giving up may be just a matter of time.
当一个人在工作生活中展现XX,他的成长轨迹将变得清晰可见:要么在挑战中茁壮成长,要么在逆境中逐渐枯萎。如果选择了后者,那么放弃或许只是时间问题。
社会现象
社会现象理由一:
The symbolic significance of this painting serves as a reminder that we should pay greater attention to XX. On one hand, XX, as a key positive factor in propelling the benign development of society, if widely implemented, will undoubtedly enhance our international influence and competitiveness.
这幅画的象征意义在于提醒我们,应更多地关注XX。一方面,xx 作为推动社会良性发展的关键积极因素,若能广泛实施,必将显著提升我们的国际影响力和竞争力。
社会现象理由二:
On the other hand, in the course of globalization, the impact ofXX is extensive and profound, as it not only delivers the benefits of XX but also the advantages of XX . In other words, in the construction of a highly civilized and harmonious society, the advantages of XX are apparent, playing an indispensable role.
另一方面,在全球化的进程中,xx 的影响是广泛而深远的,它不仅带来了xx 益处,还带来了xX的益处。换言之,在构建一个高度文明和谐的社会中,xX的优势显而易见,扮演着至关重要的角色。
过渡句
In fact, the phenomenon depicted in the image carries various implications, but to my knowledge, the following two points are particularly important. Firstly,…Secondly,…
事实上,这个图片所描绘的现象背后有着各种启示,但据我所知以下两点非常重要。首先,理由一;其次,理由二。
第三段
Therefore, it is advisable to consciously cultivate 主题词, which, in the long run, will aid in the realization of our life goals. More importantly, we should also disseminate this positive energy to everyone around us, thereby infusing our society with vitality and happiness.
因此,可取的做法是有意识地培养_ ,从长远来看这有助于我们实现人生目标。更重要的是,我们还应该将这种正能量传递给周围所有人,以使我们的社会充满活力与幸福。