四级作文之观点评述型文章

观点评述型文章

1.写作步骤

Step 1:  提纲所给观点或事实评述
Step 2：观点所含要素展开论述（结果分析，利弊分析）
Step 3：我的看法，意义阐述

2.写作步骤详解

2.1 提纲所给观点或事实评述

2.1.1 诠释题干中的观点或言论

case：戒烟往往被认为是世界上最容易做到的事情，但是很少有人能够做到。很明显，他们缺乏的是坚强 的意志。

Quitting smoking is regarded as the easiest thing in the world, but nearly no one can achieve it. Obviously, they are lacking of strong will. 

2.1.2将具体的现象提炼为共性规律

case：事实上，除了戒烟外，生活中的很多事情，没有坚强的意志，是没有办法成功的。

Besides quitting smoking, many things in our life can hardly be achieved without strong will.

2.2.1 观点所含要素展开论述（结果分析，利弊分析）

坚强的意志的好处； 培养良好的生活和学习习惯；遇到困难时自信得以加强；处理问题有积极的心态

Those who own strong will are more likely to accomplish great achievement in future. To begin with, their strong mind would bring them a good habit in coping with difficulties. More importantly, self-confidence may be enhanced during their daily life, compared with those of weak      mind, they are more willing to encounter the coming challenges with positive attitude.

As a result, with great mind, those people achieved great success after conquering challenges one after another.

2.3 我的看法，意义阐述

2.3.1 个人观点+评价或让步+升华主题

Case: ： 大学生创业

In my perspective, we should encourage college graduates to start their own business.Although there are numerous risks like lacking of funds and experience,yet their behaviors would be playing a vital role in employment trend.As a college student, strong mind should be playing a vital role in our daily life and study. Although there will be a host of potential turns and toils, even dangers waiting for us in advance,yet strong mind, the key to success, would provide us with great determination and confidence to attain further success.

Case ： 责任心

From my perspective, the sense of responsibility is vital to one’s improvement and further development. Even though temporary downturns/sacrifice may block our way, yet in the long run, the sense of responsibility does lay greatest stress on one’s long-lasting development.