12-18浙江专升本英语真题作文书写教程

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2012英语作文

题目

Direction:For this part,you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic City Problems,You should write about 120 words following the Chinese outline given below.
1、越来越多的人涌入城市，产生了很多问题,
2、比较明显的问题有…;
3、如何解决这些问题

解题思路

文章要包含题目的given follow，一般这种英语作文属于解决问题类型。结构如下：

1. 提出某个现象(或问题)，并从总体上把握该问题或现象
2. 对该问题给出解释，并提出相关的解决方案
3. 总结

综上所述，博主准备尝试写四篇文章，进行示范作答，以求写此类作文，写出规律及套路，让读者心领神会，运用在胸。

范文

博主参考《赖世雄美语初级下册》后20篇文章仿写而成。

范文1–交通问题

参考：《赖世雄初极下》梵高137那篇，和应付考试132那篇
范文1思路：城市问题带来的一个问题是交通问题，交通会更加拥堵，结构如下

1. 首段利用比喻句：磁铁，引出交通拥堵的现象
2. 中间段：教育、短途出行倡导绿色出行、车牌限制三个措施进行降低
3. 结尾段：把握当下采取措施，才能拥抱未来.

    It cannot be denied that the city’s superior opportunities act as a magnet as a non-city dwellers.As a result,It cause many problems,one of which is the trafic jam.
    Traffic congestion takes a lot of time to commute.People must ,therefore,know how to deal with them.There are three important messures person can do to get ready for traffic jam.First,ride a bike rather than drive a car for a short distance,which can promote smooth roads.Second,education is a tool.The more traffic rule education,the fewer traffic accidents.And last but not least,limiting license plates could also traffic congestion.With fewer cars on the road,the traffic is smoother.
    Briefly speaking,it is time for us to take action,and only action can give us a better tomorrow.

点评：好的120词小作文，5-7个从句至少的吧。 本文使用的最多的是定语从句和目的状语，主体段扣住三个分论点，主题句+发展句+结论句进行写作
方便大家进行浏览，并将英语作文配以中文显示：
首段:不可否认，对于非城市居民来说，城市优越的机会就像一块磁铁。结果，它引起了许多问题，其中之一就是交通堵塞。
中间段:交通堵塞要花很多时间通勤。因此，人们必须知道如何应对它们。人们可以采取三种重要措施来为交通堵塞做好准备。首先，短途骑自行车而不是开车，这可以促进道路的畅通。第二，教育是一种工具。愈多教育交通规则，车祸就愈少。最后但并非最不重要的是，限制车牌也可能导致交通拥堵。路上的汽车越少，交通就越顺畅。
结尾段:简单地说，现在是我们采取行动的时候了，只有行动才能给我们一个更好的明天。

范文2–留守儿童问题

范文二讲越来越来多的人涌入城市人口会带来留守儿童问题，其作文结构如下：

1. 陈述城市人口现象，引出城市带来的问题
2. 指出问题的具体危害 1、留守儿童的身心健康大大受影响 2、外来务工父母会对子女的教育产生愧疚，没有履行好责任。
3. 必须采取允许子女在父母身边的措施，只有这样人生才能更加美好.

英文内容如下：
    Society is changing rapidly.As a result,more and more people are choosing to live in big cities to make money.The unusual phenonmenon can easily lead to serious problems,one of which is the problem of left-behind children.
    On the one hand,stay-at-home children always don’t get the attention of society,but this particularly cause unimaginable influences.For example,I have wintnessed with my own eyes that a left-behind child who lacks care and care develops depression and finally turns to crime. On the other hand,migrant workers who leave their children may feel guilty for not nurturing them in person.Less companionship will lead to more guilt,which will not only lead parents into deep sadness,but also lead to hate their parents.
     Accordingly,it is vital for us to derive positive implications from the thought-provoking phenonmenon.Only if the govements takes measures to raise the city’s attention to the children of migrant workers can non-urban people live in a more harmonious life in the city.

点评：文章内容紧紧扣住文章给出大纲结构，可谓是标准的三段文，首段，源于赖世雄的“社会急速变化”，一方面另一方面，说话也紧跟举例子，这样让观点得以落地，在另一方面中，文章又使用了not only but also增加字数，可谓不错的选择，最后一段，只有不断采取措施，才意味着更好，坚持让尾段扮演着蛇尾的形象！

作文中文翻译如下：
首段:社会正在迅速变化。因此，越来越多的人选择到大城市去挣钱。这种不寻常的现象很容易导致严重的问题，留守儿童问题就是其中之一。
中间段:一方面，留守儿童总是得不到社会的关注，这尤其会造成难以想象的影响。例如，我亲眼目睹了一个缺乏关爱的留守儿童患上了抑郁症，最终走上了犯罪的道路。另一方面，离开孩子的农民工可能会因为没有亲自抚养孩子而感到内疚。更少的陪伴会导致更多的内疚，这不仅会导致父母陷入深深的悲伤，也会导致他们恨父母。
结尾段:因此，从这一发人深省的现象中得出积极的启示是至关重要的。只有政府采取措施提高城市对外来务工人员子女的重视，非城市居民才能在城市里过上更加和谐的生活。

范文3–人才问题

范文3紧紧扣住人才聚集导致的就业问题。文章结构如下：

1. “发展的竞争意味着人才的竞争” 引出缺乏核心竞争力，会产生就业问题
2. 必须采取措施改变就业措施，第一方面 鼓励创业，增加就业机会。 另一方面 培训提升职业核心竞争力，增添就业机会。
3. 通过扩展就业途径，是时候改变一波不好的现象了

英文作文：
    There is an old saying that “the competition for development means the competition for talents”.As more and more people flock to cities,cities develop more rapidly,which further confirms the truth of the proverb.This unusual phenonmenon also leads to the problem of population employment.
    Unemployment will make the society unstable,so everyone should take measures to change this phenomenon.It is a good choice for the government to encourage entrepreneurship.Entrepreneurship can not only solve their own employment problem,but also create more jobs.The more jobs we have,the happier and safer our society will be.For the applicants,there is no doubt that taking vocational training is beneficial to their job development.For example,I have personally witnessed a candidate who received a high salary for training before an interview.
    Therefore,by considering expanding access to employment,it is high time that we increased people’s awareness to improve the situation.
点评：文章围绕三段论加给定的结构，越有固定的风格，举例子的时候，固定的句子：我亲眼目睹过什么，比较结构也常用。

英文作文中文翻译：
开头段：俗话说“发展的竞争就是人才的竞争”。随着越来越多的人涌向城市，城市发展得更快，这进一步证实了这句谚语的真实性。这一不寻常的现象也导致了人口就业问题。
中间段:失业会让社会变得不稳定，因此所有人都要采取措施去改变这个现象。对于政府来说，鼓励创业是个不错的选择。创业不仅可以解决自身就业问题，也可以产生更多的就业岗位。越多的就业岗位,越幸福安全社会。对于应聘者来说，毫无疑问的是参加职业培训利于人们工作发展。举个例子，我亲眼目睹看到过一个应聘者面试前参加职业培训获得高薪水。
结尾段:因此，通过考虑扩展就业途径，我们早该加强人们的意识来改进现状了。

范文4–环境问题

范文4紧紧扣住环境问题进行书写，提纲如下：

1. 十年前环境举例，引出如今坏境污染严重
2. 环境污染导致的危害 1.全球变暖 2.环境导致人类疾病越来越多
3. 鼓励人们提升意识，保护环境

英文作文：
    Ten years ago,the sky was blue,the water was clear and people lived a good life.But now,with the inlfux of people,the development is getting faster and faster,the air pollution is serious,the rivers are becoming smelly and people’s life is miserable.
    On the one hand,air popllution will lead to hotter and hotter.Scientists tell us th3at because of air pollution,the earth’s heat cannot escap.This is known as global warming.On the other hand,a great many people get headaches in a crowded,stuffy room.People who breathe bad air for a long time can get really sick.They may even get lung cancer and die.
    For our health’s sake,it is high time that we enhanced people’s awareness to recify this by taking the environmental protection into consideration.
点评：本篇作文源于《赖世雄初级美语下册》的拼凑而成，如果未来谈到环境可方便进行套写。结果令人惊讶。
英文作文中文翻译：
开头段:十年前，天是蓝色的，水是清澈的，人们过着美好的生活。但是现在，随着人们的涌入，发展越来越快，空气污染严重，河流变得很臭，人们的生活是悲惨的。
中间段:一方面，空气污染将导致越来越热。科学家告诉我们，由于空气污染，地球的热量无法逃逸。这就是所谓的全球变暖。另一方面，很多人在拥挤、闷热的房间里会头疼。长时间呼吸不良空气的人可能会生病。他们甚至可能患上肺癌而死亡。
尾段:为了我们的健康，现在是时候通过考虑环境保护来增强人们的意识来认识到这一点了。

2013英语作文

题目

Direction:For this part,you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic The most Important Influence on Young Adults you should write about 120 words following the Chinese outline given below.

1. 有些人认为父母对年轻人影响较大，也有些人认为朋友对年轻人的影响较大
2. 我的看法

解题思路

此类型作文属于A or B 类型，最好做出选择 ，从A or B中选择一个，多写优点少写缺点，才能详略得当。范文给出四篇，前两篇支持父母对年轻人影响较大，后两篇支持朋友对年轻人影响较大

范文

范文1–父母对年轻人的影响1

思路提纲：

1. 有些人，有些人 引出自己的选择
2. 一方面 父母对年轻人产生深远影响，三岁看老 另一方面 好父母产生深远影响
3. 最后 若改变年轻人的观点，要先尝试改变父母的观点。

英文作文：
    Some people think that parents have a great influence on yong people,while others think that friends have a profound influence on teenagers.But I choose the latter.
    On the one hand,as the old saying goes,parents are young people’s first teachers.So parents have more influence.For example,I have witnessed with my own eyes that a young man gets positive encouragement from his parents and becomes a promising youth of value to the society.On the other hand,the better the parents,the better the character of the youth.Look at how those elite young who have returned from abroad play a mainstay role in society.
    Briefly speaking,to have an impact on young people,it is necessary to change the minds of their parents.Only in this way can the relationship between them continue to be harmonious,and only in this way can young people easily achieve success.
点评：A or B选择类主要在于自身做出选择，选择好，然后分析原因即可，属于传统的两代关系类作文，可做警惕.一定要找出规律，才能写出感觉
英文作文中文翻译：
开头段:一些人认为父母对年轻人有很大的影响，而另一些人认为朋友对青少年有深远的影响。但我选择后者。
结尾段:一方面，俗话说，父母是年轻人的第一任老师。所以父母有更大的影响力。例如，我亲眼目睹一个年轻人得到父母的积极鼓励，成为一个对社会有价值的有前途的青年。另一方面，父母做得越好，青少年的性格就越好。看看那些从国外回来的精英年轻人是如何在社会中扮演着中流砥柱的角色。
末尾段:简单地说，要对年轻人产生影响，有必要改变他们父母的想法。只有这样，他们之间的关系才能继续保持和谐，也只有这样，年轻人才能很容易取得成功。

范文2–父母对年轻人的影响2

思路提纲：

1. A or B型立马做出选择,阐述其中一个原因
2. 一方面 亲情影响改变我们，使我们成功 另一方面 亲情给予我们很大的精神财富
3. 最后 回文点睛

英文作文：
    There are many reasons for my decistion to choose parents have great influence on yong people,one of which is the value of domestic affection.It ensures me a fantastic future in a society in which it’s easy to be defeated by setbacks.
    On the one hand,family affection is a valuable asset.Young people who are cared for by family will avoid going astray.For instance,I have witnessed the love of family and finally become a valuable person to the society.On the other hand,It is generally accepted that parents always want young people to excel.Therefore,they will pay more attention to the young people.They will not only create rich material conditions for young people,but encourage them to pursure their spiritual wealth.
    Briefly speaking,Considering the effect of family affection on young people,it is not difficult to find the profound influence on youngsters.
点评：开篇给出自己的选择，然后两方面分析原因，最后回文总结。
英文作文中文翻译：
开头段:我决定选择父母对年轻人有很大影响的原因有很多，其中之一就是家庭感情的价值。在一个容易被挫折打败的社会里，它保证了我美好的未来。
结尾段:一方面，亲情是宝贵的财富。由家庭照顾的年轻人可以避免误入歧途。例如，我见证了家庭的爱，最终成为一个对社会有价值的人。另一方面，人们普遍认为父母总是希望年轻人出类拔萃。因此，他们会更加关注年轻人。他们不仅会为年轻人创造丰富的物质条件，也会鼓励他们追求精神财富。
末尾段:简单地说，考虑到亲情对年轻人的影响，不难发现它对年轻人的深远影响。

范文3–朋友对年轻人的影响1

思路提纲：

1. 有些人，有些人 引出自己的选择
2. 一方面 朋友对年轻人产生深远影响，朋友是一面镜子 另一方面 好朋友圈受益众生。
3. 最后 若改变年轻人的观点，要先尝试改变年轻人的圈子。

英文作文：
    Some people think that parents have a great influence on yong people,while others think that friends have a profound influence on teenagers.But I choose the latter.
    On the one hand,as the old saying goes,a friend is like a mirror.So friends have more influence.For example,I have witnessed with my own eyes that a young man gets positive encouragement from his friends and becomes a promising youth of value to the society.On the other hand,the better the friends ,the better the character of the youth.Look at the circle of friends of brilliant youngasters.
    Briefly speaking,to have an impact on young people,it is necessary to change the circle of their youngasters.Only in this way can the relationship between them continue to be harmonious,and only in this way can young people easily achieve success.
点评：A or B选择类主要在于自身做出选择，选择好，然后分析原因即可，属于传统的两代关系类作文，可做警惕.一定要找出规律，才能写出感觉
英文作文中文翻译：
开头段:一些人认为父母对年轻人有很大的影响，而另一些人认为朋友对青少年有深远的影响。但我选择后者。
结尾段:一方面，俗话说，朋友就像一面镜子。所以朋友有更大的影响力。例如，我亲眼目睹一个年轻人得到朋友的积极鼓励，成为一个对社会有价值的有前途的青年。另一方面，朋友越好，年轻人的性格就越好。看看那些才华横溢的年轻人的朋友圈。
末尾段:简单地说，要对年轻人产生影响，就必须改变年轻人的圈子。只有这样，他们之间的关系才能继续保持和谐，也只有这样，年轻人才能很容易取得成功。

范文4–朋友对年轻人的影响2

思路提纲：

1. 开门见山做出选择观点：不同的朋友能给青年人不同程度的影响
2. 一方面 好的朋友是一面镜子，走向成功 另一方面 糟糕朋友让年轻人迷失 举例子
3. 最后 通过考虑不同朋友对年轻人的作用，回扣观点

英文作文：
    There are many reasons why my choice of friends has a greater influence on yong people,one of which is the value of different qualities of friends will change the young people.It ensures themselves a fantastic future in a society in which it’s easy to be defeated by setbacks.
    On the one hand,What kind of friends will have what kind of yourself, a friend is a mirror.They can have a positive impact on our lives by encouraging us to overcome our difficulties and rise to success, regardless of our dark lows, sadness and anxiety.On the other hand,there is no denying that bad friends will make young people lose themselves.I have seen with my own eyes how young people make the wrong friends, commit crimes and end up destroying their careers.Because he only makes friends with those who give him excitement, bad friends have an unimaginable effect on young people.
    Briefly speaking,Considering the qualities of friends on young people,it is not difficult to find the profound influence on youngsters.
点评：开篇给出自己的选择，然后两方面分析原因，最后回文总结。
英文作文中文翻译：
开头段:我对朋友的选择对年轻人影响更大的原因有很多，其中之一就是朋友的不同品质会改变年轻人的价值观。在一个容易被挫折打败的社会里，它确保了自己美好的未来。
结尾段:一方面，什么样的朋友就会有什么样的自己，朋友是一面镜子。他们可以对我们的生活产生积极的影响，鼓励我们克服困难，取得成功，不管我们的黑暗低谷，悲伤和焦虑。另一方面，不可否认的是，坏朋友会让年轻人失去自我。我亲眼目睹了年轻人如何结交错误的朋友，如何犯罪，最终如何毁掉自己的事业。因为他只和那些给他带来刺激的人交朋友，坏朋友对年轻人有难以想象的影响。
末尾段:简单地说，考虑到朋友对年轻人的品质，不难发现朋友对年轻人的深远影响。

2014英语作文

题目

Direction:For this part,you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Trationational school or online schools you should write about 120 words following the Chinese outline given below.

1. 有人喜欢传统学校
2. 有人喜欢网络学校
3. 我的选择

解题思路

此类型作文属于A or B 类型，最好做出选择 ，从A or B中选择一个，多写优点少写缺点，才能详略得当。范文给出四篇，前两篇支持传统学校,后两篇写网络学校.

范文

范文1–选择传统学校1

思路提纲：

1. 有人…,有人…给出选择
2. 一方面 老师上课将具有互动性 另一方面 同学不懂可以下课问老师同学，交流促进同学友谊提升感情。
3. 通过考虑真实上课参与感，选择传统学校

英文作文：
    Some people choose online schools because they like to have multiple classroom reviews, while others who like the interaction of real classes choose traditional schools.In my opinion,I prefer the latter.
    To start with,the teacher is interactive in class.On the one hand, teachers know whether students really understand the knowledge through their eyes, and on the other hand, they modify the course content, adjust the teaching methods, increase the number of interactions, and promote the teaching effect.In addition,students can ask teachers and students if they don’t understand the content after class.For instance, I have witnessed students got first place by actively asking questions about something they don’t understand.
    Briefly speaking,by considering the real sense of participation in class, it is not difficult to find that many people choose online courses.
点评：开篇有人…有人…给出自己选择，
英文作文中文翻译：
开头段有些人选择在线学校是因为他们喜欢多种课堂评价，而另一些人则喜欢真实课堂的互动，他们选择了传统学校。在我看来，我更喜欢后者。
中间段:首先，老师在课堂上是互动的。一方面，教师通过自己的眼睛来了解学生是否真的理解了知识，另一方面，教师通过修改课程内容，调整教学方法，增加互动次数，促进教学效果。此外，如果学生不明白内容，可以在课后向老师和学生提问。例如，我曾亲眼目睹学生通过积极提问他们不懂的问题获得第一名。
末尾段:简单地说，考虑到课堂的真正参与感，不难发现很多人选择传统学校。

范文2–选择传统学校2

思路提纲：

1. 有人…,有人…给出选择
2. 首先与传统学校相比，网络学校的优缺点 其次 传统学校的好处
3. 通过考虑真实上课参与感，选择传统学校

英文作文：
    Society is changing rapidly.Online school is becoming more and more popular and is becoming one of our learning methods.But I still choose the traditional school.
    On the one hand,compared with traditional schools,oneline schools have a large number of learning resources for us to choose from.The more choose you have,the faster you learn.While it can not ignored that people are additcted to the Internet but can not do focus.Traditional types avoid this disadvantage entirely.On the other hand, people choose traditional schools in pursuit of immersive classroom experience.I have witnessed students achieve top marks by asking their teachers and classmates questions face-to-face after class.
    Briefly speaking,considering the sense of classroom engagement and student concentration, it is not surprising to choose a traditional school.
点评：开篇有人…有人…给出自己选择，结尾不要太长，一个从句收尾。
英文作文中文翻译：
开头段社会正在迅速变化。网络学校变得越来越受欢迎，并成为我们的学习方法之一。但我还是选择了传统的学校。
中间段:一方面，与传统学校相比，在线学校有大量的学习资源可供我们选择。你的选择越多，你学习的速度就越快。然而，不能忽视的是，人们沉迷于网络，但不能做到专注。传统类型完全避免了这一缺点。另一方面，人们选择传统学校是为了追求沉浸式的课堂体验。我见证了学生通过课后面对面的向老师和同学提问获得了高分。
末尾段:简单地说，考虑到课堂参与感和学生注意力的集中，选择传统学校并不奇怪。

范文3–选择网路学校1

思路提纲：

1. 有人…,有人…给出选择
2. 首先与网络学校相比，传统学校的缺点 其次 网络学校的好处
3. 通过考虑不受环境限制与扩展知识广度，选择网络学校

英文作文：
    Society is changing rapidly.Online school is becoming more and more popular and is becoming one of our learning methods.In order to conform to the trend of the The Times,I choose online school.
    On the one hand,compared with traditional schools,oneline schools have a large number of learning resources for us to choose from.The more choose you have,the faster you learn.This will be a good way for us to become good learners.On the other hand, many people will learn without being constrained by their environment.For instance,we can not only study while waiting for the transportation, but also improve ourselves by listening to books while traveling.This has never been done before.
    Briefly speaking,considering the lack of environmental constraints and the vast amount of knowledge available, it is not surprising to choose a online school.
点评：开篇有人…有人…给出自己选择，结尾不要太长，一个从句收尾。
英文作文中文翻译：
开头段社会正在迅速变化。网络学校变得越来越受欢迎，并成为我们的学习方法之一。为了顺应时代的潮流，我选择了网络学校。
中间段:一方面，与传统学校相比，在线学校有大量的学习资源可供我们选择。你的选择越多，你学习的速度就越快。这将是我们成为优秀学习者的好方法。另一方面，很多人会学习而不受环境的限制。例如，我们不仅可以在等待交通的时候学习，而且也可以在旅行的时候通过听书来提高自己。这是前所未有的。
末尾段:简单地说，考虑到缺乏环境约束和可选择大量可用的知识，选择一所网络学校并不奇怪。

范文4–选择网路学校2

思路提纲：

1. 有人…,有人…给出选择
2. 首先与传统学校，网络学校的好处 其次 网络学校的举例子进行深入
3. 通过考虑不受环境限制与多次听放，选择网络学校

英文作文：
    Society is changing rapidly.Online school is becoming more and more popular and is becoming one of our learning methods.In order to conform to the trend of the The Times,I choose online school.
    First of all,in our opinion,compared with traditional schools,online schools can listen to videos more than once ,deepen knowledge understanding,and thus improve the learning level.In addition,students can meet the needs of different people.For instance,professionals can improve their competitiveness through online learning,teachers can improve their teaching and students can also improve their academic performance.
    Briefly speaking,considering repeated playback and satisfying different levels of needs,it is not surprising to choose online school.
点评：开篇有人…有人…给出自己选择，结尾不要太长，一个从句收尾。
英文作文中文翻译：
开头段社会正在迅速变化。网络学校变得越来越受欢迎，并成为我们的学习方法之一。为了顺应时代的潮流，我选择了网络学校。
中间段:首先，我们认为，与传统学校相比，在线学校可以多次听视频，加深对知识的理解，从而提高学习水平。此外，学生可以满足不同人的需求。例如，专业人士可以通过在线学习提高他们的竞争力，教师可以提高他们的教学，学生也可以提高他们的学业成绩。
末尾段:简单地说，考虑到重复播放和满足不同层次的需求，选择在线学校并不奇怪。

2015英语作文

题目

Direction:For this part,you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic **A hero in My eyes ** you should write about 120 words following the Chinese outline given below.

1. 介绍一位你心中的英雄人物
2. 说明他/她被认为是英雄的理由

解题思路

给出自己的英雄人物，阐述原因，最后总结。

范文

范文1—英雄人物：英语老师

思路提纲：

1. 给出选择
2. 解释原因
3. 总结回文

英文作文：
    In my life,I have met many people who really deserve to be called heroes,but in my heart,the person who deserves to be called heroes most is my English teacher.
    What always reminds me of a hero is his special qualities.First of all,he gave us the most valuable gift a teacher can offer–an awakening of a passion for learning.He not only led us to an appreciation of the beauty and perfection of the English language and literature,but also aroused our great interest in exploring something deeper in this field.Second,His lively wit made me think of her as my hero.I still remember that we students always anticipated his class with great eagerness because his lectures were humorously delivered,never failing to provoke chuckles or loud laughs.
    All in all,considering his awakening of my passion for learning and his keen intelligence, it is not surprising that the English teacher is my hero.
点评：开篇做出选择，中间给出理由，最后闪电收尾。
英文作文中文翻译：
开头段在我的一生中，我遇到了很多真正值得被称为英雄的人，但在我的心中，最值得被称为英雄的人是我的英语老师。
中间段:总是让我想起英雄的是他的特殊品质。首先，他给了我们一个老师能给我们的最有价值的礼物——唤醒对学习的热情。他不仅引导我们欣赏英语语言和文学的美丽和完美，也激发了我们在这个领域更深入的探索的兴趣。其次，他的活泼机智使我认为他是我的英雄。我还记得，我们学生总是热切期待他的课，因为他的课讲得很幽默，总是会引起笑声或大声笑。
末尾段:总而言之，考虑到他唤醒了我对学习的热情和他敏锐的智慧，英语老师成为我心目中的英雄也就不足为奇了。

范文2—英雄人物：凡尔纳

思路提纲：

1. 给出自己的内心英雄
2. 解释原因
3. 总结回文

英文作文：
    In my life,I have met many people who really deserve to be called heroes,But in my heart, the person who most deserves to be called a hero is the science fiction writer Jules Verne
    Junles Verne(1828-1905) was born in Nantes,French.He had an innate love for the sea and for travel and adventure when he was a child.Later,he devoted himself to literature and wrote many scientific romances,which gained him the name–Father of Modern Science Fiction.I was fascinated by him because I had read his novels.From this story,we can see the author’s deep love for the sea,travel and adventure,which played an important role in his life.
    Briefly speaking,We are astonished and convinced by his fertile imagination and scientific and geographical knowledge.It convinced me that he was my hero.

英文作文中文翻译：
开头段在我的生命中，我遇到了很多真正值得被称为英雄的人，但在我的心里，最值得被称为英雄的人是科幻作家儒勒·凡尔纳.
中间段:儒勒·凡尔纳(1828-1905)出生于法国南特。当他还是个孩子的时候，他就对大海、旅行和冒险有一种天生的爱。后来，他投身于文学，写了许多科学爱情小说，这使他获得了“现代科幻小说之父”的称号。我被他迷住了，因为我读过他的小说。从他的小说中，我们可以看到作者对大海、旅行和冒险的热爱，这在他的生活中扮演了重要的角色。
末尾段:简单地说，我对他丰富的想象力和科学地理知识感到惊讶和信服。这让我相信他是我心目中的英雄。

范文3—英雄人物：父亲

思路提纲：

1. 给出自己的内心英雄
2. 解释原因
3. 总结回文

英文作文：
    In my life,I have met many people who really deserve to be called heroes,But in my heart, the person who most deserves to be called a hero is my father.
    What always reminds me of a hero is his special qualities.First of all,he gave us the most valuable gift a father can offer–an awakening of a passion for learning.He not only cultivated my attitude of serious study, but also taught me how to analyze problems in study.Second,His serious and careful style of doing things deeply impressed me.For example, when he was teaching me how to cook, he always gave me instructions.From the preparation before cooking to the kitchen tidied up after cooking, these small details teach me how to perfect a cooking this little thing.
    Briefly Speaking, he awakened my learning passion and taught me the attitude of doing things, and convinced me that he was the hero in my heart.

英文作文中文翻译：
开头段在我的一生中，我遇到了很多真正值得被称为英雄的人，但在我的心中，最值得被称为英雄的人是我的父亲。
中间段:总是让我想起英雄的是他的特殊品质。首先，他给了我们一个父亲能给我们的最有价值的礼物——对学习热情的唤醒。他不仅培养了我认真学习的态度，也教会了我在学习中如何分析问题。其次，他认真细致的做事风格给我留下了深刻的印象。例如，当他教我如何做饭时，他总是给我指示。从做饭前的准备到做饭后的厨房收拾，这些小细节教会了我如何完美的做一件做饭的小事。
末尾段:简而言之，他唤醒了我的学习热情，教会了我做事的态度，让我相信他就是我心中的英雄。

范文4—英雄人物：母亲

思路提纲：

1. 给出自己的内心英雄
2. 解释原因
3. 总结回文

英文作文：
    In my life,I have met many people who really deserve to be called heroes,But in my heart, the person who most deserves to be called a hero is my mother.
    What always reminds me of a hero is her special qualities.First of all,she gave us the most valuable gift a mother can offer–an awakening of a passion for learning.She not only cultivated my attitude of serious study, but also taught me how to analyze problems in study.Second,Her serious and careful style of doing things deeply impressed me.For example, when she was teaching me how to cook, she always gave me instructions.From the preparation before cooking to the kitchen tidied up after cooking, these small details teach me how to perfect a cooking this little thing.
    Briefly Speaking, she awakened my learning passion and taught me the attitude of doing things, and convinced me that she was the hero in my heart.

英文作文中文翻译：
开头段在我的一生中，我遇到了很多真正值得被称为英雄的人，但在我的心中，最值得被称为英雄的人是我的母亲。
中间段:总是让我想起英雄的是她的特殊品质。首先，她给了我们一个母亲能给我们的最有价值的礼物——对学习热情的唤醒。她不仅培养了我认真学习的态度，也教会了我在学习中如何分析问题。其次，她认真细致的做事风格给我留下了深刻的印象。例如，当她教我如何做饭时，他总是给我指示。从做饭前的准备到做饭后的厨房收拾，这些小细节教会了我如何完美的做一件做饭的小事。
末尾段:简而言之，她唤醒了我的学习热情，教会了我做事的态度，让我相信她就是我心中的英雄。

2016英语作文

题目

Direction:For this part,you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic **Why Did I stop Driving the Car ** you should write about 120 words following the Chinese outline given below.

1. 城市里越来越多的人以车代步
2. 而我决定不再开车，其原因是…
3. 结论或建议

解题思路

扣住环境的影响就很nice

范文

范文1—不开车原因1

文章提纲：

1. 社会经济发展，人们喜欢开车，引出自己不开车
2. 指出缘由 第一： 畅快通行 第二：绿色出行
3. 进行闪电总结

英文作文：
    With the continuous development of economy,people’s living standard is constanttly improving.While more and more people are driving,I’m choosing not to.
    There are many reasons why I choose to stop driving.To start with,not driving means relying on public transportation to get around.I can get anwhere unless public transportation doesn’t get me.Not worry about finding a parking space,not worry about traffic jams,not worry about driving to pollute the environment.In addition,I like green travel because it can exercise my body.When I no longer drive,I will ride a shared bike.It is not only good for my health,but also allows me to enjoy the scenery along the way.
    Briefly Speaking,Considering the free travel and green travel,it is not surprising to stop driving.

英文作文中文翻译：
开头段随着经济的不断发展，人们的生活水平也在不断提高。当越来越多的人开车的时候，我选择不开车。
中间段:我选择不开车有很多原因。首先，不开车意味着依赖公共交通出行。除非公共交通不方便，否则我到哪儿都可以。不用担心找不到停车位，不用担心交通堵塞，不用担心开车污染环境。此外，我喜欢绿色旅行，因为它可以锻炼我的身体。当我不再开车时，我将骑共享自行车。这不仅对我的健康有好处，而且还可以让我欣赏沿途的风景。
末尾段:简单地说，考虑到畅通出行和绿色旅游，不再开车并不奇怪。

范文2—不开车原因2

文章提纲：

1. 开车的好处，然后开始转折
2. 指出缘由 第一： 大气缘由 第二：堵车
3. 进行闪电总结

英文作文：
    Driving has become a daily choice for many people.It not only saves our time,but expands the distance we travel as well.But for me,I chose not to drive.
     There are many reasons why I choose to stop driving,one of which is air pollution.Scientists tell us that because of air pollution,the earth’s heat cannot escape.This is known as global warming.If his situation is allowed to continue,it will just keep getting hotter and hotter.In addition,traffic jams are also a killer for me to keep driving.The more cars there are,the more traffic there are.Look at all the traffic on the freeway between eight and nine in the morning.
    Briefly Speaking,Considering air pollution and traffic jams,it is not surprising to choose to stop driving.

英文作文中文翻译：
开头段开车已经成为许多人的日常选择。它不仅节省了我们的时间，也扩大了我们旅行的距离。但对我来说，我选择不开车。
中间段:我选择不开车的原因有很多，其中之一就是空气污染。科学家告诉我们，由于空气污染，地球的热量无法逸出。这就是所谓的全球变暖。如果他的情况继续下去，它只会变得越来越热。此外，交通堵塞也是我继续开车的一个杀手。汽车越多，交通就越多。看看早上8点到9点高速公路上的车辆。
末尾段:简单地说，考虑到空气污染和交通堵塞，选择停止开车并不奇怪。

范文3—不开车原因3

文章提纲：

1. 指出现象，找出问题 给出看法
2. 停车难 1 总是爆满 2 车越多停车位必须也越多
3. 进行闪电总结

英文作文：
     The scooter has become a part of life.More and more people are using their cars to get around,but many drivers are having trouble finding parking Spaces.That’s why I chose not to drive anymore.
    First of all,scenic spots tend to flood with a lot of tourists,so the cars in scenic parking Spaces are full.Many tourists are angry about this situation.Secondly,more cars mean more parking Spaces are needed.Even if there are more cars but too few parking Spaces,it will make us less willing to drive.
    Briefly Speaking,Considering the parking space,it is not surprising that I finally chose to stop driving.

英文作文中文翻译：
开头段代步车已经成为生活的一部分。越来越多的人开着车到处跑，但许多司机却找不到停车位。所以我决定不再开车了。
中间段:首先，景点往往挤满了大量的游客，所以景区停车场的汽车都是满的。许多游客对这种情况感到愤怒。其次，更多的汽车意味着需要更多的停车位。即使有更多的车，但太少的停车位，这将使我们不愿意开车。
末尾段:简单地说，考虑到停车位，我最终选择停止开车也就不足为奇了。

范文4—不开车原因4

文章提纲：

1. 承认当前的车现象，开始陈述自己:环境污染
2. 环境污染 1.空气导致人疾病增加 2. 环境导致全球变暖
3. 进行闪电总结

英文作文：
     There are many reasons why people decide to use cars instead,such as reducing commuting distances and increasing travel distances.But the reason why I do no longer drive is very simple.The main reason is to protect the environment and avoid aggravating air pollution.
    On the one hand,people who breathe bad air for a long time can get really sick.They may even get lung cancer and die.People need fresh air.Fresh air cleans the blood.On the other hand,warm weather in recent years has been linked to air pollution.Scientists tell us that because of air pollution,the earth’s heat cannot escape.This is known as global warming.If this situation is allowed to continue,it will just keep getting hotter and hotter.
    Briefly Speaking,by considering driving to increase air pollution,it is not surprising that I no longer drive.

英文作文中文翻译：
开头段人们决定用汽车代替的原因有很多，比如减少通勤距离和增加旅行距离。但我不再开车的原因很简单。主要原因是为了保护环境，避免加剧空气污染。
中间段:一方面，长时间呼吸糟糕空气的人可能会生病。他们甚至可能患上肺癌而死亡。人们需要新鲜空气。新鲜空气能净化血液。另一方面，近年来的温暖天气也与空气污染有关。科学家告诉我们，由于空气污染，地球的热量无法逸出。这就是所谓的全球变暖。如果这种情况继续下去，地球会变得越来越热。
末尾段:简单地说，考虑到开车会增加空气污染，我不再开车也就不足为奇了。

2017英语作文

题目

Direction:For this part,you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic **Why Is online shopping so popular? ** you should write about 120 words following the Chinese outline given below.

1. 越来越多的人在网上购物(如:淘宝、亚马逊)
2. 网上购物为什么受欢迎
3. 我的看法

解题思路

重点强调在原因，原因是文章的第二段也是主体。

范文

范文1—网购受欢迎1

文章提纲：

1. 指出现象 给出自身认同
2. 网购原因 1、不受空间限制 2、价格便宜
3. 进行闪电总结

英文作文：
     With the continuous development of science and technology,people’s living keeps improving.More and more people use Taobao for online shopping,for example,I quite agree with this situation.
    There are many reasons for the popularity of online shopping ,one of which is that it is not limited by space.Specifically,after work,you don’t have to go shopping at a nearby mall.After the meal,you can choose what you want to buy at home.In addition,low price is also one of the important factors for the popularity of online shopping.The more affordable the price,the more people choose.Look at all the hot style products on the web.
    Brifely speaking,it is not surprising that we choose to shop online by considering not limited by time and space as well as affordable price.
英文作文中文翻译：
开头段随着科学技术的不断发展，人们的生活水平不断提高。例如，越来越多的人使用淘宝网上购物，我非常赞同这种情况。
中间段:网购流行的原因有很多，其中之一就是它不受空间的限制。具体来说，下班后，你不必去附近的购物中心购物。饭后，你可以在家选择你想买的东西。此外，低廉的价格也是网购流行的重要因素之一。价格越实惠，选择的人就越多。看看网上所有的热门产品。
末尾段:简单地说，这并不奇怪，我们选择网上购物，考虑不受时间和空间的限制，以及实惠的价格。

范文2—网购受欢迎2

文章提纲：

1. 指出现象 给出自身认同
2. 网购原因 1、快捷舒适 2、时尚
3. 进行闪电总结

英文作文：
     Online shopping has become a living habit is gradually entering thousands of families.It makes it a part of our lives,and I’m one of them.
    We like to use shopping software like Taobao for many reasons,one of which is that it is fast and comfortable.Not only can you browse the goods in the store without leaving your home,but you can also easily observe the progress of goods shipping on your phone.On the other hand,there is another reason why people like online shopping because of fashion.People can buy hot style and the same style as the celebrities through the Internet.This has never happened before.
    Brifely speaking,By considering the speed,comfort and fashion,it is not surprising that we choose to shop online.
英文作文中文翻译：
开头段网上购物已经成为一种生活习惯，正逐渐进入千家万户。这使它成为我们生活的一部分，而我也是其中一员。
中间段:我们喜欢使用淘宝这样的购物软件有很多原因，其中一个原因就是它快捷舒适。不仅足不出户就能在店里浏览商品，在手机上也能轻松观察到商品的发货进度。另一方面，人们喜欢网上购物还有另一个原因，因为时尚。人们可以通过互联网购买热门款式和名人相同的款式。这种情况以前从未发生过。
末尾段:简单地说，考虑到速度、舒适和时尚，我们选择网上购物并不奇怪。

范文3—网购受欢迎3

文章提纲：

1. 指出现象 给出自身认同
2. 网购原因 1. 时代所需 2、顺应时尚
3. 分析弱点，总结全文

英文作文：
    In recent years, with the development of economy, online shopping has become more and more popular topic, and I like online shopping very much.
    On the one hand,people choose online shopping is the need of The Times.For example,when shopping malls became a necessarity fifteen years ago,people needed to go shopping far from their homes.Now,you can just surf the Internet and enjoy shopping,which was never done before.On the other hand,the more promotion and popularity the higher,the more people choose.By promoting online software that provides a platform for business,people are following the trend.
    Despite these obvious benefits,we should not overlook nagatives.I suppose the biggest problem is buying fake goods, the experience is so profound that many people can’t stand it.
英文作文中文翻译：
开头段近年来，随着经济的发展，网上购物已经成为越来越受欢迎的话题，我非常喜欢网上购物。
中间段:一方面，人们选择网上购物是时代的需要。例如，15年前，当购物中心成为必需品时，人们需要去离家很远的地方购物。现在，你可以在网上冲浪，享受购物，这是前所未有的。另一方面，促销和知名度越高，选择的人就越多。通过推广为商业提供平台的在线软件，人们正在跟随这一趋势。
末尾段:尽管有这些明显的好处，但我们不应忽视其负面。我认为最大的问题是买假货，这种经历太深刻了，很多人都无法忍受。

范文4—网购受欢迎4

文章提纲：

1. 指出现象 给出自身认同
2. 网购原因 1. 购物便捷 2、科技印象深刻
3. 闪电总结总结全文

英文作文：
    The habit of online shopping has gradually entered people’s life.This habit not only allows people to enjoy the shopping experience without leaving home,but also makes people feels the progress of The Times and the development of technology.I can’t agree more with that.
    Firstly,it is generally believed that shopping online is more convenient than shopping in general stores in business,we may be faced with a difficult choice of eye–catching goods.But shopping on the Internet is different,we can compare the good comments of the goods,the price to choose.This has never happened before.Second,technology is becoming more and more personal.Twenty years ago,when people wanted to buy something,they had to go far from home to buy it.Now,they can easily get it by placing an order on their mobile phone.
    Briefly speaking,considering the convenience of online shopping and how technology has improved people’s experience,it is not surprising that online shopping has become popular.
英文作文中文翻译：
开头段网上购物的习惯已经逐渐走进人们的生活。这一习惯不仅让人足不出户享受购物体验，也能让人感受到时代的进步与科技的发展。我也深深赞同这一点。
中间段:首先，人们普遍认为网上购物比普通商场购物更加便捷。在商场中，我们可能会面临吸人眼球的商品进行困难选择。但在网上购物就不一样了，我们可以比较商品的好评，价格进行选择。这在以前从来没有过。其次，科技的发展越来越让人亲身体验到。二十年前当人们有要买的商品时，要去离家很远的地方去购买，而现在只需手机下单便可轻松获得该商品。
末尾段:简单地说，通过考虑网购的便捷与科技发展人们体验，网上购物流行一点也不足为奇。

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2018英语作文

题目

Direction:For this part,you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic **Population Transformation in China ** you should write about 120 words following the Chinese outline given below,taking the infromation available in the following table as evidence.Please write your composition on The Answer Sheet

Population Transformation in China

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Major indexes	Years of transition	Trend
Population below 15	1975	decrease
Population of labor between 15 and 65	2015	decrease
Population above 65	1975	increase

1. 简述表格内容，概括中国人口变化趋势；
2. 简要说明中国人口变化可能带来的社会影响，如居民养老，代际关系，劳动力人口下降等;
3. 提出相应的建议和措施

解题思路

重点在第二三，给定的三点最好都要论述到位

范文

范文1—养老与劳动力

文章提纲：

1. 指出表格内容，总领文章大意
2. 简述社会现象 1、劳动力 2、养老
3. 提出相应的建议和措施

英文作文：
    The table describes a scenario in which the number of people aged 15 to 65 gradually decreased from 1975 to 2015,while the nuber of prople aged over 65 continued to increase since 1975.I consider this table tells us that China is entering the age of aging,and we must take measures.
    First, the biggest social impact of aging is the shrinking of the workforce.Thirty years ago, when the young and middle-aged made up the majority of the population, China’s economy was growing and was among the top in the world.Now it’s growing only slowly, not as fast as it used to.Second, there is an impact that has not been ignored is the issue of residents’ pension.The more old people there are, the more stable the retirement measures.Look at old age benefits in developed countries.
    Briefly speaking,by making measures to guarantee old–age welfare and advocate caring for the elderly,our society will surely be more harmonious.
英文作文中文翻译：
开头段该表格描述了一个情景，从1975年到2015年，15 - 65岁的人口数量逐渐减少，而65岁以上的人口数量自1975年以来持续增加。我认为这个表格告诉我们，中国正在进入老龄化时代，我们必须采取措施。
中间段:首先，老龄化最大的社会影响是劳动力的萎缩。30年前，当中青年人口为大多数的时候，中国经济持续增长，处于世界前列。现在它增长缓慢，不像过去那么快了。其次，还有一个不容忽视的影响，那就是居民养老金问题。老年人越多，退休措施就越稳定。看看发达国家的老年福利吧。
末尾段:简而言之，通过制定措施来保障老年福利和提倡关爱老人，我们的社会一定会更加和谐。

范文2—养老与生活压力

文章提纲：

1. 指出表格内容，总领文章大意
2. 简述社会现象 1、养老 2、青年人压力
3. 提出相应的建议和措施

英文作文：
    As the table explains,the population under 15 and population of labor between 15 and 65 from 1975 to 2015 is decreasing.But the number of people over the age of 65 has increased since 1975.This form accurately points out that China is facing an aging phenomenon.
    There are many social influences of aging,and one of the effects is the problem of residents’ retirement.First,forty years ago,when the light man made up the majority of the population,people didn’t have to worry about the retirement of the population.They work hard to create wealth for society.Now things are different,they need to be taken care of.Second,there is no doubt that the life pressures of young people with aging have become more stressful.Because young people need to create value to raise the old people so that the family can be harmonious and the society can be stable.
    In general, the government needs urgent measures to change the status quo by thinking about the pressure of residents and young people living. Only in this way can the country grow.
英文作文中文翻译：
开头段正如表格阐述的那样，从1975年到2015年以来，65岁以下的人口正逐步减少。但是65岁以上的人口数量从1975年以来不断增多。这个表格准确地指出中国正面临着老龄化现象。
中间段:老龄化带来社会影响有很多，其中一个影响就是居民养老问题。首先，四十年前，当年轻人占总人口大多数时，人们无需担心居民养老问题。他们努力工作，为社会创造财富。而如今情况不同了，他们需要被社会照顾。其次，毫无疑问的是老龄化带来的年轻人的生活压力变大。因为年轻人需要创造价值养育老年人，这样家庭才能和睦，社会才能稳定。
末尾段:总而言之，通过思考居民养老与年轻人生活压力问题，政府需要迫切采取措施改变现状。只有这样国家才能发展壮大。

范文3—养老与生活压力

文章提纲：

1. 指出表格内容，总领文章大意
2. 简述社会现象 1、劳动力 2、机器化
3. 提出相应的建议和措施

英文作文：
    The table describes the number of people under the age of 65 from 1975 to 2015, and the number of people over the age of 65 is increasing. This form shows that China is facing an aging phenomenon.
    Aging, the trend of Chinese attitudes, has brought a lot of social impact, one of which is the decline of the labor force. First, advances in technology have led many companies to choose to replace employees with robots. The more robots, the more the problem. Look at the company production line. Second, many people think it will also bring residents’ pension problems. For example, I have seen a child who can’t work without ability to support parents and beg for the road because of his disability.
    In general, by thinking about solving the decline of the labor force and the retirement of residents, the government needs to formulate relevant measures to ensure the stable development of the society, and only such a country can grow

英文作文中文翻译：
开头段表格描述的情形是，65岁以下的人口从1975到2015年以来不断在减少，而65岁以上的人口不断在增加。这个表格表现了中国正面临着老龄化现象。
中间段:老龄化，中国人口变化趋势，带来了不少的社会影响，其中一个社会影响是劳动力人口下降。首先，科技的进步让许多大公司选择用机器人代替员工。越多的机器人，越缓解难题。看看那些大公司生产流水线吧。其次，不少人认为还会带来居民养老问题。举个例子，我亲眼目睹过一个子女因自身残疾无法工作没有能力赡养父母而去马路乞讨的。
末尾段:总而言之，通过思考解决劳动力人口下降与居民养老问题，政府需要制定相关措施保证社会稳定发展，只有这样国家才能壮大

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