BODY1
雅思Part 2作文中往没有特别偏激的论述,经常是取中间立场,因此,body 1主要给出论述主体的一些积极点,在body 2中则会论述主体的一些消极点。下面就是关于Body 1的一些写作技巧。
logic chain1
做某件事或者某个趋势或者某个行为对于某类人的好处
The reason for this trend may involve the recognition
that a young adult passes directly from school to university
is rather restricted in terms of general knowledge and experience of the world
In contrast, those who have spent some time earning living or traveling to other places
have a broader views of life and better personal resource to draw on(利用)
They tend to be more independent, which is a important factor in academic study and research,
as well as giving them an advantages in terms of coping with the challenges of student life.
logic chain2
某类行为/某类人/某种趋势能够产生的好的影响
Advocates of this believe that today’s sedentary lifestyle and stressful working conditions mean that
physical activity is no longer part of either our work or our leisure time.(negative results)
If there were easy-to-reach local sports centers,(虚拟语气)
we would be more likely to make exercise a regular part of our lives (positive trends)
rather than just collapsing in front of a screen every evening (against the previous)
logic chain3
攻击某方观点
The obvious argument in its favor is that
young children pick up languages much more easily than teenagers.
Their brains are still programmed to acquire their mother tongues
which facilitates learning another language, and unlike adolescents they are not inhibited by self-consciousness
BODY2
body 2往往会给出一些补充性的内容,往往是提出观点的一些不足,逻辑链整理如下
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There are, however, some disadvantages.
If the primary language teaching is not standardized, secondary schools could be faced with a great variety of levels in different languages within their intake, resulting in a classroom experience which undoes the earlier gains.
There is no advantage if enthusiastic primary pupils become demotivated as soon as they change schools.
However, these issues can be addressed strategically within the policy adopted.
logic chain2
However, there are certainly dangers in taking time off at that important age.
Young adults may end up never returning to their studies or finding it difficult to readapt to an academic environment.
They may think that it is better to continue in a particular job, or to do something completely different from a university course.
But overall, I think this is less likely today, when academic qualifications are essential for getting a reasonable career.
logic chain3
If the relentless advance of international brands into every corner of the world continues,
these bland packages might one day completely oust the traditional objects of a nation, which would be a loss of richness and diversity in the world, as well as the sad disappearance of the manifestations of a people’s character.
What would a Japanese tea ceremony be without its specially crafted teapot? or a Fijian Kava ritual without its bowl made from a certain type of a tree bark?
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