0324写作01

 

1.Appearance of the Internet has changed people’s styles of work and life.

1.The emergence of the Internet has changed way people work and their lifestyles.

 

2.More and more people are considering distance-learning now,this kind of teaching system allows people to finish a degree at home.

2.Now more and more people are thinking about distance education,this education system allows people to complete a degree at home.

 

3.Although the distance-learning is different to the traditional college education,the distance education has advantages in some respects.

3.Although the distance learning is different from the traditional college education,the distance education has advantages in some aspects.

 

4.Compare to traditional education,distance education is more flexible,thus making it possible for more people to receive education.

 

5.Students need to read relevant information,and can also have video lessens.

 

6.When they have some problems,they can press the pause button to playback the lesson until they completely understand all the content.

 

7.These courses are open 24 hours 7days a week,so it is ideal for people who are busy as long as they can surf the Internet.

 

8.Development of distance learning allows students have opportunities to interact with lecturers.

 

9.Students can use interactive tools to ask questions in the virtual classes as well as sending email.

 

10.As thus,they can receive guidance from lecturers and complete all courses better.

 

11.Sometimes,they even can communicate with some scholars from world-famous universities despite living in their own countries.

 

12.There is a main flaw of distance learning that students cannot improve their communication skills,because it generally does not have group work.

 

13.Students finish their studies independently,it is difficult for them to know other students.

 

14.They have no opportunity to expand network,it will have a influence on their career development.

 

15.The distance learning makes college education more widespread because of flexibility.

 

16.Nevertheless,it has some drawbacks like the lack of interactivity,so it cannot have the same learning effects as traditional university education.

 

 

 

 

 

1.The emergence of the Internet has changed ways people work and their lifestyles.

 

1.The advent of the Internet has changed the ways people live their lives and complete work.

 

2.Now more and more people are considering distance learning,this kind of teaching system allows them to complete a degree at home.

 

2.A growing number of people are now considering distance education,which allows them to complete a degree at home.

 

3.Although the distance learning is different from traditional college education,it has advantages in some aspects.

 

3.Even though distance learning is different from traditional college education,distance learning has some advantages in some aspects.

 

4.Compared with traditional education,distance learning is more flexible,thus making it possible for more people to receive education.

 

4.Distance education is more flexible than the traditional way of receiving education,thereby offering learners more educational opportunities.

 

5.Students can read relevant information and have video lessons.

 

5.Students can read relevant materials and attend lectures by watching videos.

 

6.When they have some problems,they can press the pause button and playback the lesson until they completely understand all the content.

 

6.When they have problems in digesting information,they can click the pause button and replay the video until they fully understand the content.

 

7.These distance learning lessons are open 24 hours and 7 days a week,therefore it is ideal to those people are busy as long as they can surf the Internet.

 

7.These distance education courses are available 24 hours a day,7 days a week,and therefore suitable for those who lead a hectic life,as long as they have Internet access.

 

8.The development of distance learning allows students have opportunities to interact with lecturers.

 

8.The improvement in online education also make it possible for students to communicate with their lecturers whenever necessary.

 

9.Students can use interactive tools to ask questions in the virtual class as well as sending email.

 

9.Students can use interactive communication tools to ask questions in virtual classes or talk to lecturers via email.

 

10.As thus,they can receive guidance from lectures and complete all courses better.

 

10.In this way,these learners can get lecturers’ guidance immediately,thereby completing all courses more effectively.

 

11.Sometime they can even communicate with some scholars from world-famous universities despite living in their own countries.

 

11.Despite living in their own countries,they can even communicate with scholars from top universities around the world.

 

12.There is a main imperfection of distance learning that students cannot improve their communication skills,because distance learning generally does not have group work.

 

12.A main drawback of online education is that students have found it difficult to improve their social skills because there are few group assignments.

 

13.Students finish their studies independently,it is difficult for them to know other students.

 

13.Students complete their degree independently and do not have opportunities to meet each other and socialize together.

 

14.They have no opportunity to expand network,it will have a influence on their career development.

 

14.They do not have opportunities to build up a network of contacts,which can have a negative impact on their career development.

 

15.The Distance learning has made college education more widespread because of its flexibility.

 

15.Distance learning has made university education more accessible,because of its flexibility.

 

16.However,it also have some drawbacks like the lack of interactivity,so it cannot have the same learning effects as traditional university education.

 

16.However,it has some drawbacks,such as lack of interaction,so it is not able to achieve the same learning outcomes as traditional college education.

 

 

 

 

1.The advent of the Internet has changed the ways people live their lives and complete work.

2.A growing number of people are now considering distance education,which allows them to complete a degree at home.

3.Even though distance learning is different from traditional college education,distance learning has some advantages in some aspects.

4.Distance education is more flexible than the traditional way of receiving education ,thereby offering learners more educational opportunities.

5.Students can read relevant materials and attend lecturers by watching videos.

6.When they have problems in digesting information,they can click the pause button and replay the video until they fully understand the content.

7.These distance education courses are available 24 hours a day,7 days a week,and therefore suitable for those tho lead a hectic life,as long as they have Internet access.

8.The improvement in online education also make it possible for students to communicate with their lecturers whenever necessary.

9.Students can use interactive communication tools to ask question in the virtual classes or talk to their lecturers via email.

10.In this way,these learners can get lecturers’ guidance immediately ,thereby completing their all courses more effectively.

11.Despite living in their own country,they can even communicate with scholars from top universities around the world.

12.A main drawback of online education is that students have found it difficult to improve their social skills because there are few group assignments.

13.Students complete their degree independently and do not have opportunities to meet each other and socialize together.

14.They do not have opportunities to build up a network of contacts,which can have a negative impact on their career development.

15.Distance learning have made university education more accessible because of its flexibility.

16.However,it has some drawbacks,such as lack of interaction,so it is not able to achieve the same learning outcomes as traditional college education.

 

 

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