【雅思大作文考官范文】——第三篇：essay 'skeleton'（散文“骨架”）

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题目：

Some people believe that developments in the field of artificial intelligence will have a positive impact on our lives in the near future. Others, by contrast, are worried that we are not prepared for a world in which computers are more intelligent than humans. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.

范文：

Introduction
People seem to be either excited or worried about the future impact of artificial intelligence. Personally I can understand the two opposing points of view; I am both fascinated by developments in artificial intelligence and apprehensive about its possible negative effects.

Topic sentence, paragraph 2
On the one hand, the increasing intelligence of technology should bring some obvious benefits.

Topic sentence, paragraph 3
On the other hand, I share the concerns of people who believe that artificial intelligence may harm us if we are not careful.

Conclusion
In conclusion, while intelligent machines will no doubt improve our lives in many ways, the potential risks of such technologies should not be ignored.

Remember:
The essay ‘skeleton’ should make sense on its own, providing the reader with a summary of your answer. The only thing missing is a detailed explanation after each main paragraph topic sentence.