1、八种万能功能段
2、九篇满分作文
3、两种特殊写作体裁
4、五种常见写作体裁
5、五种写作高频错误
6、写作主题词
7、写作高级词
120/150单词
分数:120~130分
时间:30分钟
第一段 3-5个句子
第二段 6-9个句子
第三段 2-4个句子
内容 50%
语言 40%
结构 10%
三八大盖:
①了解写作三段论
②熟悉八个功能段落
③灵活拼凑文章三段
选句型
背段落
套真题
一、现象解释型:
描述现象,引出话题
阐述正反观点
观点结论
二、问题解决型
问题描述
解决问题的原因
解决问题的措施
三、对比观点型
正反观点+理由
反正观点+理由
我的观点
四、应用文
写作目的
写信内容
五、 引语类
引语的解释+表明主题
分析引语现象的原因/阐述引语现象不同观点
展望未来/解决方法
六、漫画/图表类
描述漫画内容+过渡引申含义
分析漫画现象的原因/阐述漫画现象不同观点
展望未来/解决方法
现象描述
in recent years ,(+主题词)is becoming increasingly prevalent at an amazing rate.
近年来,....越来越流行
(+主题词) has attracted extensive attention of the society, which can be found in TV programs,newspapers,university classes and many aspects of our life
当今,...得到了大家的广泛关注,并可以在...被发现
(+现象主题词) is commonly one part of our life,which has long been under discussion in terms of its necessity/importance in universities.
...是我们生活中的一部分,对于我们大学的必要性(重要性)正在被讨论
A common phenomenon in college today is that students are highly involved in ...
如今,大学里一个常见的现象就是学生们...
in the past three decades,China has witnessed dramatic improvement in ...
在过去的30年里,中国人的...有了巨大的改善
A common phenomenon in colleges today is that students are highly involved in (+现象主题词)
如今,大学里一个常见的现象就是学生们
问题现象描述
Along with the development of society,more and more problems are brought to our attention,one of the most serious problem is (+主题词)
随着社会的发展,越来越多的问题已经得到关注,其中最严重的是...
it is generally agreed that the ...has been playing an increasingly important role in our life, which has brought us a lot of benefits but has triggered some enormous problems as well.One of the serious troubles facing us at present is +(主题句)
人们一致认为,...已经在我们的生活中扮演着越来越重要的角色,它给我们带来了许多好处,但也产生了一些严重的问题,目前,我们面临的严重问题之一是。。。
There is no denying that (+问题主题词) may have quite some bad influences on campus
毫无疑问,...可能会给校园造成许多不良影响
(+问题主题句) brings about some unexpected problems.One problem to note is that (+问题主题句) and manu complaints are heard among collage students.
...带来了意想不到的问题,其中一个问题是...,同时我们也时常能听到大学生抱怨
Complaints about(+问题主题词) can often be heard and many college students are dissatisfied with their ...
常能听到学生...抱怨,并且很多大学生...不满意
The last decades have witnessed ever-increasing attention paid on ... Therefore a question arises:...It is natural that people can nerver reach the same answers.
数十年来...的关注与日俱增,因此,引起一个问题:...自然,大家众说纷纭
分析原因功能段
1. 总原因
2. 分原因
- 总原因的阐述功能句
许多原因导致这个问题、现象
① A number of factors are accountable for this situation.
② A number of factors might contribute to /account for the phenomenon/problem
③ The answer to this problem involves many factors
④ The reasons can be listed as follows
⑤ Here are many reasons explainging /accountinh for contributing to ...
⑥ The reasons for ... mainly lie in the following two aspects.
⑦ This argument/situation/phenomenon/problem can be proved by the following facts.
- 分原因功能阐述句
第一个原因是…,第二个原因是…,第三方原因是…;最后一个是…
① One of the most common factor is ...
② Another contributing cause is ...
③ Perhaps the primary reason is ...
④ But the fundamental element is ...
⑤ ... comes first,The second reason is ...,Besides,...
解决问题功能段
总+分+(总)
① 我们要采取措施解决这个问题
② 具体的措施
③ 措施的总结
- 措施主题句
In view of the seriousness of the problem of (+问题主题词) effective measures should be taken
面临这个问题的严重性,我们一定要采取措施解决
Confronted with (+问题主题词) ,we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation
面对...问题,我们需要采取一系列的措施加以解决
we should solve the problems that we are confronted with
我们应该采取措施来解决我们正在面临的问题
Therefore,i think there are many things people can try to cope with this problem completely
所以,我认为在日常生活中有许多事人们应该尝试去做来彻底解决这个问题
Indeed,having the courage to take the first step to act is quite essential for changing this phenomenon.As we all know ,human beings are great thinkers,capable of ....(+措施)
有迈出第一步行动的勇气确实是很重要的,众所周知,人类是伟大的思想者,能够...
As college students,we should be fully aware of (+解决问题的必要性) making full use of our valuable college years to (+具体解决问题的措施)
作为大学生,我们应充分意识到……。此外,我们应充分利用宝贵的大学时光尽可能……
Facing these problems,some advice may be helpful
面对这些问题,一些建议或许有帮助,最重要的是,……此外,……
Considering the seriousness of the problem,it is necessary for sb. to do sth.(+解决问题措施)
考虑到问题的严重性,……做……是十分必要的
- 分措施
First and foremost
What’s more
After
To address
Besides
From my standpoint / from my point of view
From what has been discussed above
First and foremost,government should establish some regulations to (+解决问题措施) What's more,people should get ready to ……After all ,it is necessary to advocate the whole society to (+解决问题措施)
首先,政府需要建立规则……,老百姓需要做……整个社会需要做……
To address this problem,from my standpoint,univerisities should (+具体措施) Besides,it is necessary to (+具体措施) What's more,students should ubderstand that it is more important to +(具体措施)
从我的观点来看,为了解决这个问题,大学应该采用……此外……也是必要的,另外,学生应该明白在大学里更重要的是……
From my point of view,the key to this problem lies in (+[动名词]具体措施动作)) All that a student needs to do is to (+具体措施动作) When there is (+具体措施名词) I believe students will do better [when +(时间状语)]
在我看来,解决这个问题的关键在……,学生需要做的就是……当有了……我相信学生们就会……
From what has been discussed above,i believe (+具体措施句子) To be more specific ,it will be advisable for the universities to (+具体措施动作) among students by setting strict regulations
综上所述,我认为……更具体地说,大学通过设立严格的规定……是明智的做法
- 解决问题总结句
In summary ,if we continue to ignore the above-mentioned issue,more problems will crop up
总之,如果我们继续忽略上述问题,会有更多问题出现
With the efforts of all parts concerned ,the problem will be solved thoroughtly
在大家的共同努力之前,问题一定会被解决
All in all ,we must keep highly alert of the problems evoked by it ,becaouse once the harmful influence accumulates to a certain degree,it will surely threaten the development of the whole society
总之,我们一定要警惕它给我们带来更多的问题,因为这个负面影响积聚到一定的程度,它一定会威胁我们社会的发展
From my point of view,College students should (+具体措施动作) when it comes to (+问题主题句) what's more,we should always bear in mind that (+具体措施动作)
我认为,……大学生应该自己……,此外,我们应牢记……
To (solve the problem/change this situation) is not an easy task,and it requires the concerted effects of all citizens
要扭转这一趋势并不容易,它需要所有公民的共同努力
观点阐明功能段
1、不同的人有不同的观点
2、一些人认为……
3、两个观点直接的衔接句
4、另外一些人认为……
5、观点结论段
- 不同的人有不同的观点
①people have(take,adopt,assume)different attitudes towards (+具体问题)
②people have different opinions on this problem
③people take different views on the question
④There have been different opinions on this isuue
⑤ Students,of course,hold different views in regard to (+具体问题)
⑥when it comes to (+具体问题),there is no complete agreement among people
⑦with the fantastic rise of economy in China,the number of people who ……on the rise
⑧in recent years,many students find that (+问题、现象描述主题句) interested but also puzzled ,students present divided opinions toward (+文章主旨句)
- 观点1
According to a survey:根据
be in favor of :认为
According to a survey,some people are in favor of the idea of doing ……They point out the fact that (+支持……的第一个原因)they also argue that (+支持……另一个的原因)
根据调查,一些人支持……,他们认为……,他们还认为……
In an age where (+定语描述时代)(to be questioned at every turn ),some people hold that (+观点描述句)
在一个( 不断被质疑的)年代,有一些人认为……
Some people are in favor of this phenomenon in that (+支持观点的理由)
一些人赞同这种现象因为……
- 两个观点之间的衔接句
There is a grain of truth in these statements ,but they ignore a more important fact
上述阐述有很多正确性,但是他们忽略了一个重要的事实
A close examination would reveal how ridiculous the statement it
最近的调查会显示出这个观点有多么的荒谬
Nevertheless ,the opposing voice ,mainly from the students,can be heard.
但是,我们也能听到主要来自学生的反应意见
- 观点2
①other people who stand on a different ground consier that (+观点2) . They firmly point out that (+反对x的第一个理由)
②However,more people believe in (+观点) which indicates that (+对观点的解释)
③However,other people hold a quite different point of view (+观点2)
④Nevertheless,others are not so supportive of Sinology.For these students,they hold the opinions that (+观点2)
- 观点结论
① From what has been discussed above,we many safely draw the conclusion that (+观点结论句)
② It is diffcult to say whether (+主题词) is good or not in general as it depends very much on the situation of (+取决于的情况词) 。However,from a personal point of view (+个人观点)
③ As I see it,……indeed of great importance as they not only help to …… but also contribute to more …… Therefore,i am in favor of ……
高频命题类型
the importance of …
2+3 漫画
A or B
引语
图表
告示
书信
记述文
品质类模板
- 1.the importance of (…重要性)
①品质类
合作,创新,尊敬,包容,信任,信心
②现象类
传统文化,语言,节日,环保
主题词
中 | 英 |
---|---|
合作 | cooperation/collaboration |
坚持 | perseverance /persistence |
诚信 | integrity |
创新 | innovation |
包容 | inclusiveness |
信心 | confidence |
尊重他人 | being respectful |
范文:坚持
①引出主题
②阐述原因
③展望未来
第一段:引出主题
underestimate:低估
An old saying goes that “we have to persist until we success(引语)” which converys the idea that the importance of 主题词 can never be understimated.It’s actually the experience of our forefathers, however ,it makes sense in many cases even today俗话说:“成功之前需要坚持”,这表达了xxx的重要性是不可低估的,它实际上是我们祖先的经验,然而,即使在今天,它在许多情况下也是有意义的
第二段:阐明原因
undoubtedly
undoubtedly,it’s that rather plain truth that we should place a high value on fostering a spirit of perseverance毫无疑问,我们应该高度重视培养坚持的精神,这就是一个相当明显的事实
To begin with
解决:solve,settle,tackle,handle ,address,resolve
there is no denying that :不可否认
counteract:抵抗,对抗To begin with,there is no denying that being persistent in attaining a goal is an efficient approach for people to achieve the best result in a competition or when they are counteracting difficulties in daily life.
首先,不可否认,坚持不懈地实现一个目标是人们在竞争中或在日常生活中客服困难时取得最佳成绩的有效途径
On top of that /plus 除…之外
进程,过程:course
使最优化:optimize
落后:lag behind
On top of that,during the course of cultivating people’s sense of persistence,they can also optimize what they are really good at and avoid lagging far bebind others.除此之外,在培养人的坚持意识的过程中,也可以优化自己真正擅长的东西,避免远远落后于别人
第三段:展望未来
In view of all factors,recognizing the importance of beging (persistent) is crucial for every individual to pursue success,It is not only an indispensable quality in such a competitive society,but serves as an efficient instrument for indiviauals to achieve a well-round development with their partners
考虑到所有因素,认识到(合作)的重要性对于每个人追求成功至关重要。在这样一个竞争激烈的社会中,它不仅是一种不可或缺的品质,而且是一种有效的工具,使个人能够与合作伙伴实现全面发展
类型2+3 漫画类
①描述漫画
②引申含义+分析原因
③建议措施
a.社会现象
森林砍伐,环境破坏,代沟,偶像崇拜,孝顺父母,沉溺网络
主题词
中 | 英 |
---|---|
啃老族 | the NEET group(Not in Education,Employment or Training) |
代沟 | generation gap |
沉溺网络 | indulge in /be addicted to sth(doing sth.) |
偶像崇拜 | idol worship |
孝顺父母 | fulfill filial duty |
砍伐森林 | deforestation |
过度捕捞 | overfishing |
节约资源 | conserve/save resource |
资源短缺 | lack of resources/resource shortage |
野生动物 | wildlife |
考研 | take postgraduate entrance exam |
汽车限购 | vehicle purchase restriction |
信息安全 | information security |
隐私泄露 | privacy leak |
范文:森林砍伐
第一段:描述漫画
component :成分,部件
eye-catching:引人注目的
skyscraper:摩天大楼
for their own sake:为了他们的利益
Of all the components depicted in the drawing/picture/cartoon ,the most eye-catching is that a man with an axe is trying to chop trees in an already-treeless forest.All those trees are used for building skyscrapers and making vehicles .The intention of the author can be plainly mirrored/reflect in the subtitle:humans are destroying forest for their own sake.
第二段:引申含义+分析原因
metaphorical:隐喻的
shed light on :阐明,解释
spotlight:媒体和公众的注意
digging into it,this metaphorical picture intends to shed light on the phenomenon of deforestation which has emeraged as the spotlight of the public.深入探究,这幅隐喻的图片意在揭示森林砍伐现象,这一现象已成为公众关注的焦点
excessive:过多的,过度的
overlook:忽略
Undoubtedly,many factors are accountable for it.One of the most seeential shaping factors is that excessive focus has been placed on the economic progress while the urgency to protect environment is largely overlooked among the public毫无疑问,许多因素是造成这一现象的原因。其中一个最重要的影响因素是,人们过分关注经济发展,而保护环境的紧迫性却在很大程度上被公众忽视
plus,the absence of necessary punishments for committing those misdeeds should be blamed in the meanwhile
对此,对这些错误行为没有相应惩罚也是原因之一
第三段:建议措施
aggravation:加剧,加重
priority:优先,优先权
To avoid the aggravation of environmental situation, making effective measures and relevant regulations should be among the government priorities.However,rules alone will not be sufficient,which must be accompanied by persuasion and education that help raise public awareness in protecting our forest为避免环境状况恶化,政府应优先采取有效措施,制定相关法规。然而,只有规则是不够的,还必须通过说服和教育来帮助提高公众保护森林的意识
b.科技主题
无人驾驶,共享经济,高科技,代购
主题词
中 | 英 |
---|---|
人工智能 | Artificial Intelligence |
网络暴力 | cyber violence |
共享经济 | sharing economy |
自动驾驶 | auto-pilot |
团购 | group purchasing |
网络购物 | online shopping |
潜在风险 | potential risks |
与时俱进 | keep abreast with the times |
范文:无人驾驶代替人工驾驶
第一段:描述漫画
As is depicted in the picture:漫画描述
emerging:新兴的
A has achieved its replacement of B:A替换了B
As is depicted in the picture,the emerging auto-pilot/driverless car technology has gradually achieved its replacement of manned driving如图所示,新兴的自动驾驶技术逐步实现了人工驾驶的替代
emerge:出现
in an endless stream:层出不穷,络绎不绝
what we call:我们所称的…
This cartoon reveals that in an age where new technologies emerge in an endless stream,human labor(brick-and mortar shopping) are likely to be displaced in the future by what we call artificial intelligence(online shopping)这幅漫画揭示了在一个新技术层出不穷的时代,未来人类的劳动很肯会被我们所称的人工智能所取代
第二段:分析漫画现象的不同观点
According to a survey,the public have adopted/resort to different attitudes towards the application of autonomous cars.
根据一项调查,公众对自动驾驶汽车的应用采取了不同的态度
Those who are in favor of it argue that … while the opposing voices contentd that… 支持的人认为…,而持反对意见的人觉得
Those who are in favor of it argue that auto-piloting will bring much efficiency for them such as saving their time,for they can deal with their work in the car without paying attention to the road conditions. While the opposing voices contentd that the use of autonomous vehicles would deprive many bread-winners of their jobs such as taxi drivers or those chauffeurs.
那些赞成人工智能技术的人认为人工智能技术将为他们带来更多的效率,例如,一个机器人保姆将能够有效地工作而没有任何抱怨。持反对态度的人认为,机器人的使用将剥夺许多养家者的工作,如出租车司机、护士等
第三段:观点总结+展望未来
whether … is good or not :好坏与否
pros and cons=advantages and disadvantage :利与弊
concerning prep:关于
it’s actually difficult to determine whether the use of auto-pilot technology is good or not because there are definitely pros and cons concerning its application实际上,很难确定自动驾驶技术的使用是好还是坏,因为它的应用肯定有利有弊
personally speaking 就我个人来说
advantages outweigh disadvantages :利大于弊
as long as :只要
optimize:使最优化
However,personally speaking ,i think its advantages outweigh its disadvantages as long as we can try to optimize its property to make it safer for us in the future然而,就我个人而言,我认为它的优点大于缺点的,只要我们能努力优化它的性能,使它在未来对我们更安全