六级作文–418
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格言类
侧重概括与抽象能力 -
图片类
漫画+对话
图表 -
议论式d
Q.A
- 大多数不用写标题,除非题目特别要求
- 格式:每段顶格写,写完空一行
- 段落:
首段:现象展开,引入中心
主题段:分析题目,详述what/why/how
尾段:题目要求/自行补充逻辑
首段模版
- 矛盾类–非矛盾类也可以主动创造矛盾
In the contemporary/current/modern society,especially for this increasingly XXX world
there has been a heated debate/controversy(热烈的讨论) over whether sb should do sth.
Some believe that…,while others harbour(持有) the idea that…题目具体内容
From my perspective,i stand for the former(前)/latter(后) one
例子:In the modern world,especially for this increasingly globalised world,there has been a heated debate over whether students should go to a dometic university or study abroad.Some believe that studing in China give them a better career prospect(展望),while others harbour the idea that studying overseas could offer them an unforgettable experience.From my perspective,i stand for the former one.
例子:In the modern world,especially for this increasingly stressing world,there has been a heated debate over whether the working adults should cultivate(develop) sense of family responsibility.Some believe that the cultivation of family responsibilty can be conducive(有利) to a closed family bonds,while others harbour the idea that one should focus more on work or social life.From my perpsective,i stand for the former one. - 本质是“重要性”的题目
It is widely accepted that sth plays a key role in…Were it not for sth(前面提到的),it would be harder for sb to do…
例子:it is widely accepted that the trust between students and teachers plays a key roly in the process of teaching and learing.Were it not for trust,it would be harder for teachers to guarantee the effect of teaching and learning. - 针对"名言性"的题目
It is widely accepted that sth palys a key role in…
As a famous saying goes,“…”
From my perspective,this proverb(谚语) tells us that we cannot do sth unless…
例子:题目"seek(寻求) to understand others,and you will be understood"
It is widely accepted that matual understanding(相互理解) plays a key role in our social life.As a famous saying goes,“seek to understand others,and you will be understood.”.From my perspective,this proverb tells us that we cannot build uo a supportive society unless we are willing to put ourselves in other’s positions. - 针对"社会现象"的题目
In the contemporary society,there is a prevalent phenomenon that an increasing number of people …
To illustrate(说明),We can often see that…
Obviously,some immediate actions should be taken to address this issue.
例子:the methods of balancing academic study and extracurricular activities
In the contemporary society,there is a prevalent phenomenon that an increasing number of people find that it is hard to balance academic study and extracurricular activities(juggle A with B:A和B平衡).To illustrate,we can often see that many students may fail in the exams because the extracurricular activities took them time.Obviously,some immediate actions should be taken to address this issue. - 针对"漫画类"的题目
As is explicitly(清晰地) demonstrated(展示) in the cartoon,A is doing sth and B says with doubt/irony(嘲讽)/certainty…
Then,A looks rather embarrassed/frustrated/disappointed.
Apparently,this cartoon aims to tell us that in order to…,sb should…
As is explicitly demonstrated in the cartoon,they are talking about their favourite books and the young man says that his favourate book is Facebook.Then,the woman looks rather speechless.Apparently,this cartoon aims to tell us that is in order to keep in touch with others in our daily life,we shouldn’t be addicted to the virtual world. - 图表类
As is explicitly illustrated by the figures in the table(line graph/picture/pie chart),
xxx has been on rise/decrease significantly(显著的)/dramatically/steadily from__in 时间 to__in 时间.From the sharp decline/rise in the chart,it goes without saying that+文章主题
as is explicity illustrate by figure in the graph,rural population in proverty has been decrease significantly from eighty million in 2012 to almost 0 million in 2020.From the sharp decline in the chart,it goes without saying that the gap between the rich and the poor becomes larger in China.
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回答问题
There are a multitude-number of reasons accounting for+n. -
回答结果
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措施
政府:
launch a campaign for+主题+to arouse people’s awareness of sth.
invest(投资) in sth(与主题有关)
enact laws to force sb to do
个人:
endeavor(努力) to form a good habit on+(主题)
be more passionate and positive about life
家长与学校:
parents/schools should set a good example for their children to guide their children in a right way
attach great importance to childrens’s moral education and develop their practical skills -
若题目要求分析原因
反证假设:
If some groups of people can have+主题,this means…
对未成年人:1.高效学习 2.求知精神 3.变得受欢迎
- 高效学习:their efficiency is study will be improved and thus they will become academically successful.At the same time,their asiration and persistence in study can ensure them a better career prospects,meaning that there is a high possibility for them to find a decent job and earn a high salary.
- 求知精神:they tend to become more motivated to explore the unknow academic areas and thus they can be cultivated the abilitity of overcoming difficulties independently.At the same time,this merit(价值) can be applied to their working life,which will benefit them a lot in terms of promotion and salary increase.
- 变得受欢迎:they will become popular among their peers and in schools,and thus they can gain more confidence in socializing with different people.At the same time,this merit can be applied to their working life,which will benefit them a lot in terms of promotion and salary increase.
对成年人:1.工作高效 2.创新精神 3.变得受欢迎
4. 工作高效:their working efficency will be improved and thus they can greatly increase the productivity.In the case,on top of helping companies keep costs
5. 创新精神:they tend to become more motivated and innovative to figure out the demanding problems in their work and thus great efforts will be made by them to overcome difficulities independently.In this case,on top of helping companies keep costs down,they can bring huge economic benifits,meaning that there is a high possibility for them to be promoted.
6. 变得受欢迎:they will become popular among their peers and in workpalce,and thus they can gain more confidence in socializing with different people.At the same time,this merit can gain them a good reputation and recoginition from their colleagues,both of which can offer exellent XX prospects(前景).
万能好处:
they will have a positive outlook on life and would always make every endeavour(努力) in life.After all,nobody would refuse to make friends with such a man with so much positive energy and enthusiasm.
尾段
- (讲措施类)in short,+主题
it is high time that people should take full advantage of existing opportunities advocate(主张)/curb(压制) this social phenomenon.Only in this way can we live in a harmonious and liveable society with supportive atmosphere and loving citizens(选择性加+where 文章主题). - (讲原因类)Given the factors that I have just outlined,the fundamental method in which the government addresses the problem(坏事就解决)/advocates this phenomenon(好事就拥护) is to raise the public awareness of xx by launching campaigns in society.In addition,the mass media should also join in the efforts in educating the citizens to…Only through concerted(齐心协力的) steps,can our society make progress in…
- (双刃剑)To sum up,while xx can…,it is just like a double-edged sword if people cannot make use of it properly.We must bear in mind that we should avoid the undesirable
effects of…,when taking advantage of it.Only in this way can we…
in short,it is no denying that job responsibities and personal interests are both extremely important factors to people’s happiness.It is high time that people should take full advantage of existing opportunities to advocate this social phenomenon.Only in this way can we live a harmonious and liveable society where people can keep a balance between work and interests.
积累
- technology
contribute to the development of technology → \to → technological innovations
provide talents for the country and they can contribute to country’s development - traval
broaden one’s horizons → \to → be more open-minded and embrace the different cultures. - right/responsibility
enhance(提高) the awareness of law to defend their basic right.
cultivate the sense of responsibility and learn to take up the responsibility independently → \to →grow into a mature individual(成熟的个人) - education
be equipped with the professional knowledge and practical skills → \to →find a decent job
narrow the disparity(不平等) between the rich and the poor → \to →social equality - environment
maintain the balance of ecosystem → \to → prevent animals from extinction
keep the air clean → \to →reduce the incidence(发生率) of developing respiratory(呼吸) diseases. - economy
boost the national economy → \to →people’s living standard will be improved and international status will be improved
government can allocate(分配) more funds to scientific research so as to make technological breakthroughs - health
people will keep in a good conditions → \to →they can ensure their working efficiency so that the society can operate smoothly.
if people are all in good conditions,the financial burden of medical services(医疗经济压力) on governments will be greatly reduced. - culture
cultural diversity(多元化) can be enhanced → \to →people will have a colorful life and experience exotic(异域的) customs and traditions in their own country.
cultural diversity can be enhanced → \to → reduce the cultural misunderstanding and conflicts,which is a symbol of social progress. - crime
high moral standards so that the crime rates will be controlled → \to → the public will have a sense of security(保护)
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关键词
- 有专有先挑专有定位(时间,地点,数字,人物,大写,标点)
- 无专有挑名字(不可以是标题/题目反复词语)
匹配题
- 选取定位词
- 易定位题与暗示段落题(时间状语:recent/today/future → \to →后几段;early/ancestor → \to →前几段;cost → \to →货币符号,数字;stage → \to →序数;different → \to →信息罗列;air pollution → \to →carbon dioxide,nitrogen,sulfur)先做–进行扫读
- 剩下段落优先查找未出题段落
- 检查有没有两个原词或同转则为答案
结构:问题描述+问题解决1+问题解决2+…+未来/展望/要求