大作文
第一段
有时间对比的:
What seems beyond dispute is that the graph/bie chart/bar chart/table shows that the number/proportion of Chinese car from 2008 to 2009 rocketed/diminished by 8 percent. On the contrary/In the meanwhile the quantity/percentage of cars of Japan shrank/increased to 75 percent. Apparently, more and more people prone to buy Chinese cars.
无可争议的是,图表/bie chart/条形图/表格显示中国汽车从2008年到2009年飙升/下降了8%。例:相反地,日本汽车的数量减少/增加到75%。显然,越来越多的人倾向于购买中国汽车。
无时间对比的:
What seems beyond dispute is that the graph/bie chart/bar chart/table shows that consumer of having dinner in restaurant accounting for 36 percent. By contrast, merely take 8.4 percent of citizens paying attention to having dinner at home. Apparently, more people prone to have dinner in restaurant.
无可争议的是,图表/bie chart/条形图/表格显示,占36%的消费者在餐厅用餐。相比之下,只有8.4%的国民在家吃饭,这就不足为奇了。显然,更多的人倾向于在餐馆吃饭。
一些备用词
there is no obvious gap between … and …
(两者之间差别不大)
Other types are just a minor ratio
(其余的类型占据了一小部分比例)
第二段
When subjected to analysis, it turns out that there are two/three fundamental factors. The main element for the problem is that…In addition,…Finally,…
经过分析,发现有两个/三个基本因素。这个问题的主要原因是……此外,……最后,……
社会氛围
1.With widespread publicity in the media, citizens’ minds have been converted and accepted this way of life
2.Because of the strong influence of the old habit/patriotism, citizens’ mind remain unchanged and cannot accept this new thing
1.随着媒体的广泛宣传,公民的思想发生了转变并接受了
2.由于旧习惯的强烈影响,公民的思想保持不变,不能接受它
经济生活
1.human nature being it is, most people are inclined to enjoy an elegant life. In other words, sth. can precisely capture the need of consumers, it is necessary for people’s satisfaction and beneficial to enrich their lives.(物品)
2.with the society is becoming stabler and more harmonious, more people are inclined to enjoy a convenient life style with sth. , it is necessary for people’s satisfaction and beneficial to enrich their lives.(生活风格)
1.由于人类的本性,大多数人都想要一种优雅的生活。换句话说,某物能准确捕捉消费者的需要,有必要对一个人的/实现和有利于丰富他们的生活。(物品)
2.与中国社会变得更稳定、更和谐,因此,越来越多的人倾向于享受便利的生活方式与某事,它对于一个人的满足是必要的,有利于丰富他们的生活。(生活风格)
科技影响
1.The development of science and technology makes it possible for people to request food/most things via mobile phone apps
科学技术的发展使人们可以通过手机应用程序要求食物/大多数东西
2.People can order food through a mobile app / People can do most things through mobile apps
人们可以通过手机应用点餐
政策影响
the favorable of government supporting, sth. has turned out to be an inevitable trend.
政府的支持已成为不可避免的趋势。
生活压力(负面)
with the tempo of life accelerating,competition goes increasingly fierce in all walks of life,imposing tremendous pressure on all individuals/them/him
随着生活节奏的加快,各行各业的竞争越来越激烈,给每个人都带来了巨大的压力
教育影响
The government should strengthen the education of its people and warn people not to drive after drinking.
政府应该加强对民众的教育
末段
To sum up,this trend/phenomenon will continue, there would be a glorious future in the domestic car market.
Therefore, engineers should also treat their work with a positive attitude and spare more time on meeting the need of public
Ultimately, as Franklin D Roosevelt said “ We were in the midst of shock, but we acted, we acted quickly, boldly, decisively.”
综上所述,国内汽车市场前景广阔。
因此,工程师也应该以积极的态度对待自己的工作,把更多的时间花在国产汽车的开发上。
最终,正如富兰克林·D·罗斯福(Franklin D Roosevelt)所说:“我们处于震惊之中,但我们采取了行动,我们迅速、大胆、果断地采取了行动。”
小作文
Dear Mr. /Dear Ms. /Dear Sir or Madam/Dear Professor Wu
与对方不熟悉
My name is Li Ming, as the member of association on behalf of our association to invite you to join us.
My name is Li Ming, a college student who will graduate soon.
A consumer who has bought something from your store
对方为亲朋好友
How are you getting along well with your life these days.
表达目的
The purpose of my letter, to be honest, is to / I’m writting to you to
- express my strong dissatisfaction for your service/device/product(投诉)
- express my heartfelt appreciation for your help and attention(表达衷心的感谢)
- express my sincere apology for my mistake/behavior(道歉)
- express my sincere congratulations on your achievement(祝贺)
- Respond to your request/need and give you some advice about study might be of benefit to you(建议)
- inform you about the decision to resign from my current position(辞职)
- apply the position that you recently advertised on the Internet. I’m particularly interested in this position.
- inquire you about how to (咨询)
- recommend you (推荐)
正文
On the one hand,…
On the other hand,…
常见的转折词有: however、but、nonetheless/nevertheless、whereas、yet、rather than、instead of
常见的让步词有: although、though、even if、even though、despite、in spite of、regardless of
某些副词和介词短语: conversely、contrarily、contrary to、on the contrary、by contrast、in contrast、unfortunately、Instead of
投诉
The quality of the product/service, not as your promised, is far from satisfactory, some parts have lost their function.
despite my repeated complaints/requests that return the product/equipment,however, not only server but also the lead of department was indifferent to my needs. What an arrogant handling/way/attitude.
Therefore, I demand that the issue be solved as soon as possible and compensate my loss
你们的产品/服务质量与你们所承诺的不一样,远不能令人满意。一开始,有些部件失去了功能。
尽管我反复抱怨/要求退货,但相关部门/服务人员似乎对它漠不关心。多么傲慢的处理方式。
因此,我要求尽快解决这个问题,服务器也要向我道歉
感谢
It was really kind of you extend your assistance to me, without which, I’m afraid, I could have still been in a mess
I still remember the time we share,It’s one of my best memories
你对我的帮助真是太好了,没有你的帮助,恐怕我现在还会一团糟
你真是一个难得认识的人,我仍然记得我们在一起的时光,这是我最美好的回忆
道歉/辞职
I wish I could keep the appointment, but I’m extremely sorry that I have to leave (I made a careless problem) because I was asked to attend an important meeting by my teacher (My mind was occupied with other things)
Meanwhile, I will compensate you for the inconvenient I caused,
I sincerely hope that you will be able to think in my position and accept my request
我希望我能如期赴约,但是非常抱歉因为某些原因我不得不离开
同时,为了补偿我给您带来的不便,我准备采取一切可能的补救措施
我真诚地希望您能站在我的立场考虑一下,接受我的请求
祝贺/咨询
I’ve always appreciated how much you put into something and firmly believe that it was only a matter of time before your efforts were rewarded
Your achievement speaks well for the truth that nothing is impossible for a willing heart
What’s more, I would be highly appreciated if you could introduce the way of your learning and thinking
我一直很欣赏你对某件事的付出,我坚信你的付出得到回报只是时间问题
你的成就很好地说明了这样一个真理:心之所愿,无所不成
如果你可以介绍自己的思维方式和学习方法我会很感激的
建议
You should practice some methods and it’s necessary to find the right way to learn English that suits yourself from these methods
Above all, you can go a long way if you have a positive/polite attitude and keep more diligent during this process/in life
你应该/有必要找到适合你的正确的学习英语的方法
最重要的是,如果你在生活的这一过程中保持积极/礼貌的态度和更加努力,你会大有作为
求职/推荐
My practice experience is similar to this position, so I have some understanding about its routines and duties
I’m sure that I can make an ideal candidate because I’m often regarded as a diligent and easy-going student with team work spirit
我的实习经历与这个职位类似,所以对这个职位的日常工作和职责有一定的了解
我相信我能成为一个理想的候选人,因为我经常被认为是一个勤奋、随和和有团队合作精神的学生
通知/通告
The activity/meeting/seminar, sponsored by our association,will be held at 8:00pm in college meeting room/school hall on the 8th of this month/tomorrow
to begin with, we will take part in an array of games including ice-breaking games, treasure hunt, micro-society game. this can help you make friends with other people
Your active participation can help broaden your horizons and this provides a greater advantage in the future
由我们协会主办的活动/会议/研讨会将于本月8日/明天晚上8点在学院会议室/学校礼堂举行
首先,分组完毕后,一连串精彩活动正式开始?破冰游戏、校园寻宝游戏、模拟社会游戏「大学之旅」和营火会等。
你的积极参与可以帮助你开阔眼界,这对你的未来有更大的好处
末段
In the end,
万能
I would be highly appreciated if you could reply
投诉
I sincerely hope that you will be able to think in my position and accept my request
道歉
I hope you will pardon me for troubling you
祝贺/道歉
I show my sincere appreciation/apology/congratulations again for you
辞职/求职/推荐/建议/投诉
I would be highly appreciated that if you can seriously consider my above ideas
通知
So don’t hesitate to join in us if you are interested in our association