下面是直接从Mac App Store拷贝的最新的代号为Yosemite的Mac OS的版本更新说明,拿来给大家学习一下版本更新信息的写法。
一、What’s New?
提升稳定性,兼容性和Mac系统安全等简明概要的信息。
二、This update
和代码提交采用类命令语态规范相似,采用一般现在时态第三人称单数形式描述版本的重要变更项:
“Resolves an issue that..”
“Fixes an issue that..”
“Adds the ablity to …”
“Improves … performance”
“Addresses an issue that..”
这里用了三个不同动词表示同一个意思”解决了”,分别是Resolves、Fixes、Addresses。
一般说来Resolves表示解决了一个大的问题或矛盾;Fixes就是字面的修复了什么的意思,问题的严重程度稍微低一点;Addresses表示解决还是第一次接触,查了一下资料,翻译为“处理”更贴切一点,当然也是表示issue的严重程度更低。
原文如下:
What’s New in Version 10.10.2
The 10.10.2 update improves the stability, compatibility, and security of your Mac.
This update:
• Resolves an issue that may cause Wi-Fi to disconnect
• Resolves an issue that may cause web pages to load slowly
• Fixes an issue that caused Spotlight to load remote email content when the preference was disabled in Mail
• Improves audio and video sync when using Bluetooth headphones
• Adds the ability to browse iCloud Drive in Time Machine
• Improves VoiceOver speech performance
• Resolves an issue that causes VoiceOver to echo characters when entering text on a web page
• Addresses an issue that may cause the input method to switch languages unexpectedly
• Improves stability and security in Safari