声明:本人英语废,仅自学用。
1 单词(word list1)
convince skeptics that such cultures exit | provide convincing examples |
are destined to emerge victorious | 必定获得胜利 |
convict | 宣判(有罪),囚犯 |
conviction | 坚信,定罪 |
want | 缺少 |
merge | 合并,two parties merged into one |
the emergence of idea | a public health emergency |
submerge | 浸没,掩盖 |
submerge sb in sth | |
marked | 显著的 |
margin | 边缘,余地 |
tighten their profit margins | on the margins边缘地位 |
ignorant | 无知的 |
respondent | 回答问题的人,被告 |
correspondence | 通信 |
responsive | 反应积极的 |
spontaneous | 自发的,天真率直的 |
attendant | 服务人员 |
contend | 竞争,声称 |
contention | 争辩、论点 |
extensive | 大规模的 |
an intensive care unit | deprive people of liberty |
2 范文学习(来源英语六级考试作文范文分享(2019年真题) - 知乎 (zhihu.com))
【六级原文】
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on the importance of having a sense of social responsibility. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
【范文背默】
There is no doubt in saying that bearing a sence of social responsiibility is of great significance for social harmony, which should not be ignored by the young generation.
However, with the increasingly fierce competition in modern society, a growing number of younsters tend to be under tremendous pressure. As a result, they are more likely to focus on their own short-term interests, ignoring the value of taking responsibiilities. A case in point is the decline in social ethics and morality. As the matter of fact, nowadays, a few citizens are not willing to give a hand to others in dilemma and indifferent to their suffering. If we leave the current situation alone, hardly could we live in a harmonious and loving society.
In conclusion, it's imperative to take corresponding measures. On one hand, the mass media should enhance publicy, enlighting the young as to cultivating the sence of responsibility. On another, it is advisible that individuals should pay more attention on the responsibilities on their shoulder.
【亮点解析】
1、There is no doubt in saying that...
2、is of great significance for ....介词注意
3、which should not be ignored by the young generations.针对性
4、with the increasingly fierce competition in modern society,万用
5、youngsters tend to be under tremendous pressure
6、own short-term interests, ignoring the value of
7、A case in point is the decline of
8、social ethics and morality
9、be indifferent to their suffering
10、If we leave the current situation alone, hardly could we live in a harmonious and loving society.如果我们任由现状发展下去
11、In conclusion, it is imperative to take some corresponding measures
12、the mass media should enhance the publicity, enlighting the young as to cultivating
13、it is advisible that individuals should
【改进】
1、怎么harmony了逻辑不通,缺少不负责和负责的例子,少动词
2、只有一个原因,较为单薄