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亮点为：
all-round 全方位的
take the advantage of：利用
high-tech products高科技产品
draw a conclusion 得出结论
proper path 、approach正确的方式

范文：
With the development of technology, there is an increasingly wiespread phenomenon that children spend more time on the electronic devices than before. This might lead some impressional individuals to obtain a conclusion that children are addicted to the entertainment brought by high-tech equipments, and that will do harm to their education. However, as far as the following consideration should be included, I, personally approve of that students are much easier to be educated nowadays.

Admittedly, with a electronic devices in their hand, children are more likely to spend plenty of time on playing games or worthless social communication. However, the smart phones, or laptops, are created to contribute to the effeciency of human beings. Children can also take the advantage from these devices such as browsing the netpage of a library, watching some educational or documental movies, and searching for documents relative to their courses. Youngsters are more likely to be attracted by the allure of colorful net world, neverthelss, they can be guided by their parents and teachers to the right use of these high-tech devices. Besides the convenience on studying today, two measurements are also deserved to be taken into consideration.

For one thing, high-tech edevices strengthen the bound between children and their parents. For example, the cell phone, which is of great significance when parents need to contact with their students. According to a survey conducted by Hunan University, more than 75 percent of respondents, the parents of students, say they have equiped their children with a smart watch, which does contribution to their communication. Moreover, if their children are lost, parents could easily find their location by the smart watch. Besides, teachers can assign the homework to their students and get feedback immediately, compared with handing out the homework next morning, teachers today can check students’ homework after they finished. That undoubtly enhace the efficiency for education.

Additionally，children can also aquire benefits from the social networking websites. It is the goal of education that cultivating students all-rounded rather than merely focusing on studying. By surfing the internet, children could get access to numerous of experiences and new knowledges. Social communication, for example, is really essential for their future career, so after their studying, do some relax and be exposed to various of barnd new stuffs semms like more helpful for their growing up.

In a nutshell, children in contemporary society are much easier to be educated with the help of high-tech devices. Anyway, there are a thousand Hamlte in a thousand people’s eyes, I hope people who hold the opponet opinions might somehow ompromise after exposed to this article.