About English Corner in Shenzhen

I have tried three English Corners in shenzhen this weekend. One is in FuTian Building, the other is in FuTian Culture Plaza, and the last one is in Shenzhen Book Town which located opposite DiWang Building. I think the one in  Shenzhen Book Town is the best. I feel it is well organized, and there are many people come here to join in the party. and the organizer has a series program to let vistors talk each other. First, he asked us what happend all the world this week, so we'll answer this question, each person may have a different answer, thus then it will get many answers. after that, he began to talk some important events among them, and made some questions around the events. after showing us each question, he would let us to talk each other for practising English, after practising 15 minutes, he would go on for next question, so we can have topic to talk about all the time. So I feel it is the best corner I have ever visited. and the on in FuTian Culture Plaza, it was organized outdoors, you know, it was very hot these days, the teacher and I would not feel comfortable then, and only one foreigner guy sitting there facing to the others guy such as me, further more, there are many kids there, they are all live nearby, so they can came there easily, and the communication way is that all the candidates talk with the only one foreigner, so I don't think it is a good way.  and the first one is acturly disappoint me, there are no organizer and nice  guys, and  many  persons would begin talk in Chinese, so I think I  won;t  go there again.

That's all  I  can say about the English Corners I have ever visited in Shenzhen, I 'll visit more in the future. if I have found some better place, I 'll let you guys know. and I am learning English, So I am trying to write down what I want to say in English, I will be appreciated if anyone can help me to correct the error or give me some suggestiong in what I wrote.

我这周末去了三个深圳的英语角，一个是在福田大厦， 一个在福田文化广场，一个在深圳书城。我觉得深圳书城这个是最好的，因为他们组织地很好，并且有很多人参加，人气很旺。并且组织者有一系列的活动让大家聊起来。首先，他会问大家这周发生了什么事情，我们就想啊想，就会很多的答案冒出来，并且用英语告诉大家，这个过程就练习了英语。接着组织者会精选出几个话题进行详细的讨论。就每个话题，组织者会提出几个有关这个话题的问题，并且在讲完每个话题后，就会给大家十五分钟的时候互相讨论，这样就大家练习英语的机会。所以我觉得这个真的是我去过的所有英语角中最好的一个。因为其它两个，比如福田文化广场那个是在室外举行的，一个老外坐在中间，大家围着他做，方式是大家轮流跟老外进行对话，并且很多住在附近的孩子也来了，因为他们都住得很近，所以没有一些中心话题来贯穿整个过程，大多是闲扯，不过气氛还是不错的，大家热情都还不错，有时间的话还是可以去试试。至于另外一个英语角，因为没有组织者，没有话题，有些队员就开始用中文聊天了，感觉很不好，我可能都不再去这个了。

这是我这个周末去的英语角的感受，以后我还会再去验证更多的，如果发现更好的，我会告诉大家的。
我在学英语，所以我打算以后写东西先用英语写一遍，再用中文写一遍，如果有好心人看到能帮我改一下文中的错误并且给出一些更好的表达方式，我将万分感谢！