【雅思】雅思写作作业（1）

现象：in some courntries,the criminal trials are shown on TV and the general public can watch them.Do the advantage outweigh the disadvantage?

雅思例文：
It is a common phenomenon[fəˈnɒmɪnən]（现象） that we are surrounded by crime reports transmitted（广播） by a variety of media audits（媒体的审核） like television. Some believe that it is likely to impose negative impact on our society. Personally, whether such publicity of violent scenes['si:nz] （暴力镜头） is positive or negative is still under question（仍在的问题）.
It is of course （当然是这样）the true case （真实案例）that violent information exerts a detrimental[ˌdetrɪˈmentl]（不利的） influence on people subconsciously [ˌsʌb'kɒnʃəslɪ]（潜意识地;）, particularly on children lacking the ability of judgment. In this way, children are of great likelihood（可能性） to mimic[ˈmɪmɪk]（模仿） what they have seen in violent television programs. It is also fair（直接地） to say that this is evident（明显的） for some adults. By that I mean violent images lead people to be more anxious about their safety, since they may automatically presume whatever disastrous（灾难性的） sufferings they saw on screen or newspaper may fall on them. Therefore, being to meticulous[məˈtɪkjələs]（谨小慎微的） about their security（[pəs'pektɪvz]安全）, many perspectives（观点） of their lives such as working efficiency（效率） and life qualities are the collateral [kəˈlætərəl] victims（附带的受害者）.
However, in spite of this（尽管这样）, there is no adequate reason for the eradication of criminality（犯罪行为） on screen. Those who are negatively affected are just a result of the disability to psychologically control themselves properly（适当地）, which cannot be attributed to media, and it is incumbent upon it to inform the massed of what have happened around them, no matter good or bad. In addition, objectively, it is indisputably persuasive that the description of crimes actually serves as a deterrent to these potential criminals, who harbor the conspiracy to break the law.
In conclusion, the appearance of anti-social behaviors on television demonstrates both its upsides and downsides in society. However, age limitation should be carried out in case the very young who lack judgment go astray.

1.eradication [ɪˌrædɪ'keɪʃn]n.摧毁，根除;

2.psychologically[ˌsaɪkə'lɒdʒɪklɪ] adv.心理上地，心理学地;

 

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