写作(接http://blog.csdn.net/csuhoward/article/details/8553367)
第二段:原因或危害陈述段
文章第4句话:
原因过渡句:
①Several reasons could account for this phenomenon and the following might be the most critical ones.
②Why might that be? The account are varied.
危害过渡句:
The problem mentioned above will definitely result in severe consequences if we keep turning a blind eye to it.
文章第5、6句话:具体原因或危害
First and foremost...
More over...
文章第7句:过渡句
①To conclude, the situation may be depressing but not hopeless. A combination of steps can turn things around.
②The problem being exceedingly serious, down-to-earth measures should be urgently implemented before things got worse.
第8句:具体措施 三个层面:个人->集体->国家
句型:It's high time that we... 过去式
It's imperative/essential/urgent that (we) should do...
文章第9句: 对问题解决的美好愿景
①Only in these ways can we finalize this thorny issue successfully and effectively.
②Only with these measures taken can we ensure that this problem can be perfectly solved in the near future.
③With proper laws and an alert public, it will only be a matter of time for... to become things of the past.
补充词汇:
put strains on使...紧张
go against违背
traditional virtue传统美德
be adverse to...不利于...
be harmful to
has a negative impact on
pose a threat to 造成威胁
名词+现在分词、过去分词=状语
Weathering permitting, we are going to visit you tomorrow.
对立观点型:
文章结构
一、提出对立观点段
第一句话: 提出对立观点
①To.. or to..., that is a question.
②Recently, there has been a heated discussion regarding whether ... one should do sth. or not.
③Recently, the topic of "__" has sparked a storm of controversy online and in the press and aroused wide concern among the public.
第2句话:提出人们对比看法不同
①People's opinions differ sharply on this issue.
②People's opinions vary from individual to individual.
③No unanimous agreement has been reached.
④There is no consensus of opinion toward such phenomenon.(unanimous: consensus 一致的)
补充词汇: University Ranking
Job-Hopping 跳槽
第二段: 对立观点论述段
文章第三句话:提出正方观点
①It's evidently reasonable for some to argue that...
②Those who are in favor of the idea that...(句子) have their convincing arguments.
语法.
一、从句: 有that/wh- 特殊疑问词
1.定语从句:不完整的句子
n. + that/wh-
There is no agreement whether... or...
引导词:-ing/ -ed/ 不定式/ 介词短语/ 动词短语
2.名词从句:完整 (主、宾、表、同位语)
同位语 n. + n. :I believe that he is a liar, a fact that can never be denied.
不产生歧义的情况下,重复的地方可省略。
强调: All the nations, big or small, rich or poor, enjoy equal rights in the international affairs. (摘自“和平共处五项原则”)
3.状语从句
若不重要,可缩写
补充词汇:
despise 鄙视
补充知识点:
优秀作文注意五要点——逻辑、简洁、多样、押韵、同位语(显得严谨):friend and foe; merits and defects.