托福写作4-the entertainer or athlete you most want meet

If you could meet a famous entertainer or athlete, who would that be , and why?

 

If given the chance[傅晓东1]  to meet a famous a entertainer or athlete, I would definitely[傅晓东2]  choose Norah Jones, winner of 8 Grammy Award in 2003.[傅晓东3] 

 

In the first place, as an amateur in jazz music, I would like to ask her for some tips in jazz performance[傅晓东4] . Since [傅晓东5] I first heard her voice over the radio, I have been deeply attracted by her unique voice, a wonderful mixture of ease, leisure, laziness, a bit of everything together. I’ve always been wondering[傅晓东6]  how to effectively convey my feelings through my voice. A talk with Norah Jones might hopefully give me some inkling and teach me how to make my songs sing for my soul.

 

Second,having previously known that Norah Jones has been performing in a pub as a teenager, I would like to know more about her opinions on teenage working, both full-time and part-time. As a university student[tM7] , I’m still struggling between my major and my true calling, which is music. I appreciate her opinions on whether I should follow my music dreams or shall I just keep it a hobby.[tM8]  And if I were to [tM9] chase my dream, is playing for pubs the best choice? Since[tM10]  Norah Jones has more experience on this topic,a meet with her might very well set my future road towards a steady direction.

 

Third,since I personally admire Norah Jones to a great extent,[tM11]  I would like to take her on a trip of my own country, China. [tM12] China abounds with natural scenery that differs from that of the States, a diversity of architecture styles, different Chinese cuisines, and a host of passionate people. Taking a tour of our wonderful country and its distinct culture may give Norah Jones some inspiration on musical creation. I would be overjoyed if her trip to China would contribute more or less to her next album. If not, I would still feel satisfied, since few people can enjoy a trip with their idols. And what’s best, I can practice my oral English with her along the trip!

 

That’s why[tM13]  I look forward to meeting Norah Jones, my favorite jazz singer and composer.

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 [傅晓东1]同义句转换

 [傅晓东2]明确表态

 [傅晓东3]后置定语

 [傅晓东4]咨询技巧

 [傅晓东5]原因是我的声音不够传神

 [傅晓东6]现在完成进行时，表示一直

 [tM7]引出自己大学生的矛盾点

 [tM8]Whether ……or, should 和 shall

 [tM9]虚拟语气

 [tM10]表原因

 [tM11]非常

 [tM12]介绍China来作为一个原因，机智

 [tM13]点题