1025作文更正

这篇作文存在以下错误及改正：

一、语法错误

1. 固定搭配错误

   • “Let me tell for you”应改为“Let me tell you”。
   • 叙述内容优化：
     Let me tell you——First, animals. ==
     改为：
     == Let me tell you about them. First, there are animals.

2. 单复数错误

   • “sheep”拼写注意，应为“sheep”，且sheep单复数同形，这里不需要加“s”。
   • “strawberrys”和“blueberrys”的复数形式错误，应分别为“strawberries”和“blueberries”。
   • “It’svery”注意，写清楚空格，应为“It’s very”。

3. 名词所有格错误

   • “grandpa”拼写注意，应为“grandpa”，“my grandpa’s”才是正确的名词所有格形式。
   • For example 注意，原文拼写错了

二、标点符号错误

• 在列举蔬菜和水果时，“tomatoes、carrots”中的顿号使用错误，英语中应使用逗号“tomatoes, carrots”。

修改后的作文如下：

My grandpa’s farm is very big and beautiful. It has a lot of things. Let me tell you——First, animals. My grandpa has many kinds of animals. For example, many cute and white sheep. The sheep is my favourite animal. And some brown horses. They’re very big and strong. My grandpa always rides them. My grandpa’s farm also has some vegetables: potatoes, tomatoes, carrots… And my grandpa has some fruits: grapes, watermelons, strawberries, blueberries…I love watermelons very much. Do you like my grandpa’s farm?