The road to learning English-Writing

句子改错

六、

In present-day society,cultures were becoming very similar.

错误：时态错误

改：In present-day society,cultures are becoming very similar.

在当今社会，文化正变得非常相似。

七、

Intelligent students should not be treated different by their teachers.

错误：修饰动词用副词+ly

改： Intelligent students should not be treated differently by their teachers.

聪明的学生不应该受到老师的不同对待。

八、

Countries should pay attention on the disadvantages globalization may create.

错误：pay attention to 固定语句

改：Countries should pay attention to the disadvantages globalization may create.

各国应注意全球化可能造成的不利影响。

九、

The Internet has instead of teachers in many classrooms.

错误：instead of 代替     介词不能当动词使用 用replaced 替换

改：The Internet has replaced teachers in many classrooms.

在许多教室里，互联网代替了老师。

十、

Some parents do not obey traffic rules himself.

错误：反身代词使用错误

改：Some parents do not obey traffic rules themselves.

有些父母自己不遵守交通规则。

十一、

Some people think the Internet only has positive impact,other people think it also has negative influence on our lives.

错误：逗号后不能直接加句子，如果需要加连词（and，but，while）

改：Some people think the Internet only has positive impact while other people think it also has negative influence on our lives.

有些人认为互联网只会产生积极的影响，而其他人则认为它对我们的生活也有负面影响。

十二、

There are a great many children think the main purpose of education should be to afford them pleasure and enjoyment.

错误：一个句子只能有一个谓语但是可以用连词 

改：①A great many children think the main purpose of education should be to afford them pleasure and enjoyment.

　　②There are a great many children thinking the main purpose of education should be to afford them pleasure and enjoyment.

 有许多孩子认为教育的主要目的应该是给他们带来快乐和享受。

 

 

1. 在当今社会，文化正变得非常相似。
2. 有许多孩子认为教育的主要目的应该是给他们带来快乐和享受。
3. 有些人认为互联网只会产生积极的影响，而其他人则认为它对我们的生活也有负面影响。
4. 有些父母自己不遵守交通规则。
5. 在许多教室里，互联网代替了老师。
6. 各国应注意全球化可能造成的不利影响。
7. 聪明的学生不应该受到老师的不同对待。

转载于:https://www.cnblogs.com/zafir/p/9721504.html