雅思大作文观点

1 animal

• 素食主义者vagetarian
• 动物的产品(remain product)应不应该被禁止？
• 保护濒危动物

1 animal testing

• necessary to do medical test for new drug
• animal testing help to advance scientific knowledge
• aim to reduce the suffering that animals experience
• i expressed agreement for using animals to test.firstly,it's necessary to do some medical test for new drug.aim is to reduce the suffering of animal.advance the scientific knowlege 

2 素食

• a healthy habit is possible without animal or meat
• to kill animals for food
• reduce the risk of disease like cancer
• quit high-fat
• 避免高脂肪、降低染病风险、更健康、杀害更少动物

3 不支持素食主义

• eat a balanced diet
• meat is traditional ingredient
• animals are below human in food chains
• 饮食均衡+肉很主要在传统饮食+动物低阶于人类

4 动物园的优点

• is considered the best place for visitors to appreciate a variety of animals
• serve as a shelter for endangered species/playing a vital role in wildlife conservation
• raising money by animals themselves
• raising the awareness of public about preserving biodiversity
• offer job opportunities
• contribute significantly to tourism industry ,attracting visitors who are eager to  encounter exotic species .

5 动物园的缺点

• is an artificial environment
• kept animals in the captivity and they only have limited space
• wild animals become dependent on humans for their basic needs,such as food ,water.it's impossible for them to survive if released back to the wild.
• disrupt their instinct and behaviors
• forced animals to perform for entertain and profit,such as in circuses and marine parks,raising some ethical concerns.these performances involve training techniques like publishment,deprivation, which caused psychological and physical harm for animals.

6 有益于

• be beneficial for 
• promote
• contribute to 
• foster
• facilitates
• supports
• Result in positive impacts
• generate positive result

7 有害

• be adverse for
• can damage to
• is unsafe to
• is injurious to

8 the positives of advertising

• enhance the popularity of product,raising more profit
• more people can know the function of product 
• serve as a powerful tools for educating comsumer about the features of a product
• play an crucial role in providing with a diverse range of choices in the marketplace.
• 最关键的贡献one of the primary advantage of advertising is to enhance the popularity of products
• 带来盈利leading to increased sales adn profitablities of businesses.

9观点型 

• what extent are you agree or disagree?
• do you think positive or negative development?
• 都是第一视角

10 双边型

discuss both views and give your own opinion

• 开头段
• 展开段1，some prople think论证正确性
• 展开段2，other prople think论证正确性
• 我的结论

11 讨论型

• do you think the advantage of this trend outweigh the disadvantage?
• 一定是第一视角
• 一定不能使用一边倒，最好用让步型，在展开段1写虽然，37分但是，展开段2再论述

12 报告型--原因和解决方案

• why has this happened?what can be done to deal with this?
• 直接根据指令的两个问题点构建问题即可
• 开头段预告即可

13 开头段

• 复述观点
• 给出总观点（我们自己的立场）
• 但是report类型要对总观点先复述，复述完以后进行预告（先预告1 再预告2，最好只挑两个话题点的一个预告即可）
• 疑问句改陈述句即可（indeed,young people living in big cities are faced with many pressing problems,and appropriate solutions need to be implemented）
• in modern epoch,the issue of xxx has always been a matter of public interest(当代社会，xxx问题一直是公众利益的问题)
• the issue of xxx have always been a matter of public interest
• in modern epoch,the issue of xxx have always been a matter of pubic interest
• some individuals champion the notion that,but a number of others reckon
• despite recognizing the merit and drawbacks of viewpoint,i still inclined supp

14 总结段

• 不能原封不动的照抄已经写好的总观点，分论点
• 但需要概括和同义改写

15 展开段开头

• some individuals champion the notion that ,while a significant number of others reckon that
• it could be obviously witnessed a phenomenon that
• despite recognizing the merit and drawbacks behind the viewpoint,i am inclined to support/opposite it（尽管认识到这一观点的优点和缺点，我还是倾向于支持/反对这一观点）
• despite the validities of both sides, i am inclined to support the former/latter it.
• are faced pressing pressure