初中英语优秀作文分析-004My favorite Chinese traditional story-我最喜欢的中国传统故事

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1 There are many traditional stories in China.

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中国有很多传统故事

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传统故事

句子结构

There be句型

many traditional stories 名词短语 很多传统故事，in China 介词短语，在中国

2 Among all of the stories,I like YuGong moves the mountains best.

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在所有故事中，我最喜欢《愚公移山》

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愚公移山

句子结构

Among all of the stories 介词短语 状语 在所有故事中

I 主语 我，like 谓语 喜欢，YuGong moves the mountains 宾语从句

YuGong 主语，moves 谓语 移动，the mountains 宾语 山

best 程度副词 状语 最

3 Once upon a time, there was an old man called YuGong.

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从前，有一位老人叫愚公

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愚公

句子结构

Once upon a time 时间状语 从前

there be结构 +名词性短语

an old man 名词性短语 一位老人 ，called YuGong 过去分词短语作定语 修饰 an old man

4 There were two high mountains near his home.

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他家附近有两座高山

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两座高山

句子结构

there be结构+名词性短语

two high mountains 名词性短语，2座山，near his home 介词短语 状语 家附件

5 They were so high that it took him a long time to walk to the other side.

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它们非常高，以至于他走到另一边花了很长时间。

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非常高

句子结构

They 主语 他们，were 系动词，so high 表语 非常高

that it took him a long time to walk to the other side 结果状语从句

that引导词，it 形式主语，took 谓语 花费，him间接宾语 他，a long time 直接宾语

to walk to the other side 是不定式短语，作为真正的主语 走到另一边

6 So he decided to move the mountains.

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所以他决定移山

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移山

句子结构

So 副词，用作连词，表示因果关系

he 主语 他，decided 谓语 决定， to move the mountains 宾语 移山

move the mountains 动宾结构 move 移动，the mountains 宾语 山

7 YuGong and his family began to move the mountains.

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愚公和他的家人开始移山

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开始移山

句子结构

YuGong and his family 主语 愚公和他的家人

began 谓语 开始， to move the mountains 不定式短语 宾语 移山

8 They kept moving them day after day, year after year.

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他们日复一日，年复一年地持续移山

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持续移山

句子结构

They 主语 他们 ， kept moving 谓语 持续移动，them 宾语 它们， day after day, year after year 时间状语 日复一日，年复一年

9 Finally,a god was so moved that he took the mountains away.

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最后，一位神仙被感动了，他把山带走了

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把山带走

句子结构

Finally 是副词，作为句子的时间状语，表示动作发生的时间顺序

a god 主语 上帝 中国的神仙，was 系动词，so moved表语 如此感动

that he took the mountains away 结果状语从句

that 引导词，he 主语 他 ，took谓语 带走， the mountains 宾语 那2座山

away 副词，与动词 “took” 一起构成短语 “take away”，表示“带走”的意思

10 The story reminds us that nothing is impossible as long as we work hard.

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这个故事提醒我们，只要我们努力工作，没有什么是不可能的

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故事

句子结构

The story 主语 这个故事，reminds 谓语 提醒，us 宾语 我们

that nothing is impossible as long as we work hard 宾语从句

that 引导词，nothing 主语 没用什么 ，is系动词，impossible 是不可能的

as long as we work hard 条件状语从句

as long as 引导词 只要

we 主语 我们，work hard 谓语 努力工作

11 We should not give up.

翻译

我们不应该放弃

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不放弃

句子结构

We 主语 我们，should not 情态动词 不应该，give up 谓语 放弃

原文

My favorite Chinese traditional story

There are many traditional stories in China. Among all of the stories, I like YuGong moves the mountains best.

Once upon a time, there was an old man called YuGong. There were two high mountains near his home. They were so high that it took him a long time to walk to the other side. So he decided to move the mountains. YuGong and his family began to move the mountains. They kept moving them day after day, year after year. Finally, a god was so moved that he took the mountains away.

The story reminds us that nothing is impossible as long as we work hard. We should not give up.