IELTS writing 范文精度

evaluate  v.评价；评估   evaluate an employee’s ability 评价一个员工的能力

 

so as to   phrase. 为的是；以便   （不能用于句首，in order to 可以用于句首）

whereas   conj. 然而；鉴于   （whereas = however ;  whereby由此= therefore）

practice   n. 练习；实践；惯常做法   v. 练习；从事；习惯做

give rise to   phrase. 引起；造成  = lead to \ bring about \ give occasion to

Students should be encouraged to evaluate or even criticize their teachers so as to improve the quality of education, whereas others fear that such a practice might give rise to indiscipline and disrespect for teachers.           

 

form   v. 组成；建立    n. 形式；表格；形状

voice   v. 表达；发噪音   n. 噪音；呼声；意见

be able to    phrase. 能够；有能力

so that    phrase. 以便于

optimize   v.使最优化；充分利用

Proponents of such a change hold that, by encouraging students to form and voice their own opinions of their teachers and what they teach, the latter would be able to timely receive student’s feedback so that they could adjust and optimize their teaching.

 

whether or not    phrase.是否；无论是…或… （可用于句首）

a little more     phrase. 多一点

demonstrative   adj.明白表示的；证实的；公然表示情绪的  n.指示词

For example, whether or not they should slow down, speak louder, be a little more demonstrative and patient.

 

further   adv.进一步；更远；此外   v.促进；增进    adj. 更多的；更进一步的

original ideas    phrase. adj.+n.  创意

master   v.掌握；精通  n.主人；硕士

the art of disagreeing   掌握不同意的艺术 = “懂得如何拒绝” disagreeing 非谓语当名词用

Secondly, this practice could further encourage students to have original ideas and gain deeper understanding and master the art of disagreeing.

 

eliminate v.消除；淘汰  eliminate poverty 消除贫困

unqualified adj.不合格的；没资格的；完全的；绝对的

irresponsible adj.不负责任的；无责任感的

Furthermore, feedback from the students may also eliminate unqualified and irresponsible teachers.

 

come to   phrase.苏醒；到达；总计；突然想起  （得出<结论>）

hence   adv.因此；从此以后

in this way  phrase.这样；用这种方式

thus   adv.因此；如此；从而

as a whole  phrase.整体来看；总体上

Hence, proponents come to happy conclusion that in this way students and teachers would have better communication with each other, and thus the quality of education as a whole would be greatly enhanced.

 

adopt v.收养；采用；采纳；正式通过

Opponents of such a practice argue that by adopting this ‘critical’ method, students might be encouraged to be a little too eager to argue, to disagree and to criticize.

 

take advantage of   phrase.利用；欺骗；占便宜

well-meant   adj.处于好意的

attempt   n.企图；试图  v.企图；试图

petty adj.琐碎的；微不足道的；心胸狭窄的

petty purpose 卑鄙的目的

They might even take advantage of this well-meant attempt to achieve their petty purposes such as having less homework, making fun of the teachers, etc.

 

in that case   phrase. 在那种情况下；如是那样的话

In that case, the goal of teaching students to be well-behaved and polite would only be a dream.

 

at the end of the day  phrase.在那一天的最后；到头来，不管怎么说

maintain   v.维护；保持；供养

At the end of the day, the opponents maintain that, as formal education is a serious matter, such a practice, though well-intended, should not be allowed.

 

个人观点段：

开头：表明立场

both sides of the argument  争论的双方

strong points  长处

Although both sides of the argument have their strong points, I personally agree with the former view.

 

to err is human  人非圣贤，孰能无过

As ‘to err is human’, so it is the case with teacher.  教师也是如此。

 

not only…but also…

liberal adj.开明的；自由主义的；慷慨的。  （自由的）   n.自由主义者

stimulus-response process 应激反应过程

If the students have the chance to voice their opinion, not only will there be a cozy and liberal atmosphere in class, but both parties will benefit from the stimulus-response process.

如果学生们有机会发表自己的意见，不仅课堂上会有一个舒适和自由的气氛，而且双方都将从刺激反应过程中受益。