新世纪大学英语三级 作文Travelling in a civilized manner 87分

Travelling in a civilized manner

As it is symbolically displayed in the drawing, a tour guide gives man a warning against doing destruction to scenic spots with meaningless sign. Besides, she makes a gesture in order to motion for him to keep silence and be a civilized tourist.
Recently, an increasingly number of people have the opportunity to travel overseas with possession of money, however, there is a alarming concern that most of tourist is inadequate to the awareness of civilized manner, there are some news criticize the rude Chinese torists. What we have to admit is that we indeed do something uncivilized on the trip, such as throwing away rubbish at will, jumping the queue, speaking loudly in public and drawing graffiti on artifacts. From my perspective, graffiti is a form of vandalism which should no be used to be a symbol of having been traveled to here. There are increasingly people come to realize that special attention should be paid to the inciviliazed behaviour during traveled. As a result, we appear to the Chinese tourists that we should take part in the transformation of the foreigners' impressions of us.
Driving by the patriotic passion, quantity of people behave themselves at all time when traveled.

76.5

keep近义表达有hold/ maintain/ preserve/ sustain   

additionally与Besides意思相

consequence与result意思相近

Travelling in a civilized manner

As it is symbolically displayed in the drawing, a tour guide gives man a warning against doing destruction to scenic spots with meaningless sign. Additionally, she makes a gesture in order to motion for him to maintain quiet and be a civilized traveler.
Recently, an increasing number of people have the opportunity to travel overseas with possession of money, however, there is an alarming concern that most of tourist is inadequate to the awareness of civilized manner, there are some news criticizing the rude Chinese tourists. What we have to admit is that we indeed do something uncivilized on the trip, such as throwing away rubbish at will, jumping the queue, speaking loudly in public and painting graffito on artifacts. From my perspective, graffiti is a form of vandalism which should not be used to be a symbol of having traveled here. There are increasingly people come to realize that special attention should be paid to the unciviliazed behaviour during traveling. As a consequence, we appear to the Chinese tourists that we should take part in the transformation of the foreigners' impressions of us.
Driving by the patriotic passion, quantity of people behave themselves at all times during the journey.

81

 special, especial, specific, particular, exceptional, extraordinary, peculiar 均含“特殊的，特别的”之意

be cognizant of ...与realize that意思相近，可参考学习

in the course of与during意思相近

Travelling in a civilized manner

As it is symbolically displayed in the drawing, a tour guide gives man a warning against doing destruction to scenic spots with meaningless sign. Additionally, she makes a gesture in order to motion for him to maintain quiet and be a civilized traveler.
Recently, an increasing number of people have the opportunity to travel overseas with possession of money, however, there is an alarming concern that most of tourists are inadequate to the awareness of civilized manner, there is some news criticizing the rude Chinese tourists. What we have to admit is that we indeed do something uncivilized on the trip, such as throwing away rubbish at will, jumping the queue, speaking loudly in public and painting graffito on artifacts. From my perspective, graffiti is a form of vandalism which should not be used to be a symbol of having traveled here. There are increasingly people cognizant that special attention should be paid to the uncivilized behaviour in the course of traveling. As a consequence, we appear to the Chinese tourists that we should take participate in the transformation of the foreigners' impressions of us.
Driving by the patriotic passion, quantity of people behave themselves at all times during journey.

84.5

rough, coarse, harsh, rude, crude 均有“粗糙的”之意

]the majority of与most

]individuals/characters/folks/citizen/the public与people

emerge与appear意思相近，可参考学习

be cognizant of ...与realize that意思相近，可参考学习。

nevertheless与however意思相近，可参考学习。

Travelling in a civilized manner

As it is symbolically displayed in the drawing, a tour guide gives man a warning against doing destruction to scenic spots with meaningless sign. Additionally, she makes a gesture in order to motion for him to maintain quiet and be a civilized traveler.
Recently, an increasing number of individuals have the opportunity to travel overseas with possession of money, nevertheless, there is an alarming concern that the majority of tourists are inadequate to the awareness of civilized manner, there is some news making a criticism to the rude Chinese tourists. What we have to admit is that we indeed do something uncivilized on the trip, such as throwing away rubbish at will, jumping the queue, speaking loudly in public and painting graffito on artifacts. From my perspective, graffiti is a form of vandalism which should not be used to be a symbol of having traveled here. Increasing citizens come to realize that special attention should be paid to the uncivilized behaviour in the course of traveling. As a consequence, we appear to the Chinese tourists that we should participate in the transformation of the foreigners' impressions of us.
Driving by patriotic passion, quantity of characters behave themselves at all times in the course of journey.

86

 

Travelling in a civilized manner

As it is symbolically displayed in the drawing, a tour guide gives man a warning against doing destruction to scenic spots with meaningless sign. Additionally, she makes a gesture in order to motion for him to maintain quiet and be a civilized traveler.
Recently, an increasing number of individuals have the opportunity to travel overseas with possession of money, nevertheless, there is an alarming concern that the majority of tourists are inadequate to the awareness of civilized manner, there is some news making a criticism to the rude Chinese tourists. What we have to admit is that we indeed do something uncivilized on the trip, such as throwing away rubbish at will, jumping the queue, speaking loudly in public and painting graffito on artifacts. From my perspective, graffiti or engraving words on cultural relics is a form of vandalism which should not be used to be a symbol of having traveled here. Increasing citizens come to realize that special attention should be paid to the uncivilized behaviour in the course of traveling. As a consequence, we appear to the Chinese tourists that we should participate in the transformation of the foreigners' impressions of us.
Driving by patriotic passion, quantity of characters behave themselves at all times in the course of journey. Our tourists also give other countries an impression of civilization.

86.5

Travelling in a civilized manner

As it is symbolically displayed in the drawing, a tour guide gives man a warning against doing destruction to scenic spots with meaningless sign. Additionally, she makes a gesture in order to motion for him to maintain quiet and be a civilized traveler.
Recently, an increasing number of individuals have the opportunity to travel overseas with possession of money, nevertheless, there is an alarming concern that the majority of tourists are inadequate to the awareness of civilized manner, there is some news making a criticism to the rude Chinese tourists. What we have to admit is that we indeed do something uncivilized on the trip, such as throwing away rubbish at will, jumping the queue, speaking loudly in public and painting graffito on artifacts. From my perspective, graffiti or engraving words on cultural relics is a form of vandalism which should not be used to be a symbol of having traveled here. Increasing citizens come to realize that special attention should be paid to the uncivilized behaviour in the course of traveling. As a consequence, we appear to the Chinese tourists that we should participate in the transformation of the foreigners' impressions of us.
Driving by patriotic passion, quantity of characters behave themselves at all times in the course of journey. In summary, we should travel in a civilized manner owing to that we are representative of China when we are in foreign countries.

87

Travelling in a civilized manner 

As it is symbolically displayed in the drawing, a tour guide gives man a warning against doing destruction to scenic spots with meaningless sign. Additionally, she makes a gesture in order to motion for him to maintain quiet and be a civilized traveler.
Recently, an increasing number of individuals have the opportunity to travel overseas with possession of money, nevertheless, there is an alarming concern that the majority of tourists are inadequate to the awareness of civilized manner, there is some news making a criticism to the rude Chinese tourists. What we have to admit is that we indeed do something uncivilized on the trip, such as throwing away rubbish at will, jumping the queue, speaking loudly in public and painting graffito on artifacts. From my perspective, graffiti or engraving words on cultural relics is a form of vandalism which should not be used to be a symbol of having traveled here. Increasing citizens come to realize that special attention should be paid to the uncivilized behaviour in the course of traveling. As a consequence, we appear to the Chinese tourists that we should participate in the transformation of the foreigners' impressions of us.
Driving by patriotic passion, quantity of characters behave themselves at all times in the course of journey. In summary, we should travel in a civilized manner owing to that we are representative of China when we are in foreign countries.