Directions: In this task, you are to write an essay on the role of physical exercise in achieveing success at college. You will hava 30 minutes for the task. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 worlds.
With the advancement of education, physical exercise is of extremely importance in achieving success at college. it is of great necessity for us college student to work out regulary. The following reasons can account for my opinion
First and dore most, there is no doublt that physical exercise can help us maintain health both mentally and physically. Based on big data, most successful student elites have admitted that they work out at least once a week. Furthermore, no one can deny that working out can help us have a great networking. Where there is sport, there is communicatioon. Last but not least, I firmly believe that doing sports can add vigor to our lives. Although we are not professional athletes, but a healthy life style is nothing but a choice.
In a world, physical exercise plays an impotant role in college life. if we spare no efforts to be healthy via exercising, the futhure of our study and careers will be both promising and rosy.
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With the advancement of XX, XX is of extremely importance in achieveing success at college. it is great necessity for us college students to XX, The followin reasons can account for my (opinion/application-用于且求职)
First and dore most, there is no doublt that XX can XXX,Based on the big data,
XXX (举例说明). Futhermore, no one can deny that XXX (that从句), As the old saying goes, Where there is XX, there is XX, Last but not least, I firmly believe that XXX (that 从句). Althought XXX, but XXX.
In a word, XX plays a big role in our college life. if we spare no efforts to be XX via XX, the futhure of our study and careers will be both promising and rosy.
注意点:
尽量使用同义词的替换, 如:physical exercise-work out-doing sports, 均可以表明锻炼
regularly-经常地
both mentally and physically-在身体和心理上的
elites-精英(social elites,college elites,student elites)
Base on the big data-基于大数据
have a great net working(make quality friends)-交朋友,社交网
add vigor-增加活力
professional athletes-专业运动员
play an inportant role in XX-在XX上有重大的作用和意义
via-通过
promising-有希望的
rosy-顺利的