雅思写作 大作文(自用)

目录

一、审题思路

   1.一边倒

    2.让步转折

二、写作结构

1.开头段:Introduction

background 背景引入句

paraphrase the topic 改写题目句

two sides’ opinion 双方观点句

your position 观点立场句

2.主体段:Body

主体段段首的连接词

一边倒

让步转折

中立

主体段段内的连接词

表事实

表详细解释

表因果

表比较

表并列

3.结尾段:Conclusion

三、真题范文


一、审题思路

   1.一边倒:

选择单一立场,完全同意或者不同意

只陈述优点(2个)或者只陈述缺点(2个)

    2.让步转折:

同意:承认存在缺点,但是优点>缺点

不同意:承认存在优点,但是缺点>优点

二、写作结构

1.开头段:Introduction

(1)background 背景引入句

It is quite common in this day and age that...

As the society keeps advancing,there is a phenomenon that...

(2)paraphrase the topic 改写题目句

Whether or not it is wise to do...has ignited a heated debate.

When it comes to the question of...,people’s notions may vary from one to another.

(3)two sides’ opinion 双方观点句

Some are inclined to think that...,but others argue that...

Some people state that.. However,there are people who hold the opposite opinion.

(4)your position 观点立场句

As far as I concern,I share the former/latter point of view and my position will be elaborated as follows.

To the best of my knowledge,I tend to believe that...,and this essay will analyse the reasons in the subsequent paragraphs.

I would like to embrace the opinion that...,and this essay will discuss why in the following paragraphs.

2.主体段:Body

主体段段首的连接词
一边倒:

To begin with/First of all/In addition/Besides/Moreover

让步转折:

Admittedly,it is indisputable that...

Plausible though it seems,however,it has to be realized that...

中立:

On the one hand/For one thing

On the other hand/For another thing

主体段段内的连接词
(1)表事实

As is common sense,...

As we all know,...

As is known to all,...

As is substantiated/proved by many researches,...

(2)表详细解释

To be (more)specific,...

To state it more clearly,...

More precisely,...

In other words,...

That is to say,...

Which means.../,meaning that...

(3)表因果

This is because...

Due to the fact that...

Given/considering that...

Be responsible for...

As a result,...

In this case/situation,...

With the consequence that...

Therefore/thus/hence/consequently

(4)表比较

In comparison...

Compared with...

In/by contrast,

On the contrary

However/conversely/nevertheless/but/yet/while

(5)表并列

In addition/Additionally/Besides/moreover/furthermore/Even better/worse/Worse still

3.结尾段:Conclusion

In conclusion,I once again restate my belief that...

To conclude,for the reasons stated above,I maintain that...

For my part,after considering all the arguments presented,I insist that...

From what has been discussed above,we may safely draw the conclusion that...

In retrospect,from what have been mentioned above,we have every reason to draw the conclusion that...

On the basis of all the aspects discussed,i think that...

三、真题范文

话题:出国学习和生活一段时间来学习语言和文化

(背景引入)It is quite common in this day and age that an increasing number of people choose to go abroad for further education.

(题目改写)Whether or not it is wise for students to experience overseas life to learn the language and culture of the host country has ignited a heated debate.

(观点立场)To the best of my knowledge,I tend to believe that this is a reasonable decision,and this essay will analyse the reasons in the subsequent paragraphs.

To begin with,having first-hand exposure to the local language is a better way to learn it.Due to the fact that the foreign environment can provide students with an immersive (沉浸的,身临其境的)learning experience,which means all the people in this environment have to use the target language in their daily communication.In other words,this daily communicative situation will force the students to use the local language more frequently,thus contributed to the improvement of their linguistic acquisition/language learning.On the contrary,the truth is,no matter how much students excellent in foreign language courses,they do not master the language completely.For example,there are never enough English native speakers in schools to provide a real English speaking community,which may result in students knowing English very well in terms of grammar or reading,but speaking and listening are big obstacles for them.

Furthermore,studying and living in a foreign nation is very advantageous to experience a different culture and form a more critical/objective judgement about the local culture.This is because students studying and living abroad have the opportunity to engage in various activities and directly contact with the local residents.Therefore,they are more likely to have more authentic and thorough understanding of the outside world than those students who do not have these experiences.In contrast,without actually experiencing local cultures in person,students who learn the cultural values of foreign countries from books and media are very easy to get misled into stereotyping.Besides,students who have studied and lived abroad also tend to have more open minds to differences in culture and so become more tolerant to other groups of people.

For my part,after considering all the arguments presented,I insist that living in another country for educational purposes is beneficial to students’ language and cultural learning.

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