- Network traffic detection identifies information security threats by analyzing communication data.
→ \to → 不分析通讯数据,还能分析啥?写具体些.
→ \to → detection 本身是一个比较虚的名词,可以改为实体. 否则要改为 Network traffic detection aims at identifying 好像又不合适
Network traffic detectors identify information security threats by analyzing data streams. - Existing detection methods analyze instances as independent individuals one by one, resulting in unsatisfactory detection efficiency.
→ \to → 不要重复使用一个单词
→ \to → 这里只有数据包的概念,而并没有什么实例
→ \to → 太啰嗦了
Popular detection methods are inefficient when analyzing data packets one by one. - In this paper, we propose a multi-granular network traffic detection framework based on multi-instance learning to address this issue.
→ \to → 还行,暂时不改 - Three major techniques make up the framework as follows.
→ \to → 写得太 low 了,可以直接删除本句 - The bag generation technique assembles the same number of data packets into a bag-granular space according to the protocol type.
→ \to → 这里有空间吗?
The bag generation technique assembles a fixed number of data packets of the same protocol type into a bag. - The bag mapping technique encodes the bag into a new vector through fast clustering and distance computation.
→ \to → 这里才有空间吧?
→ \to → 聚类与距离计算,这两个无法并列吧?明显后者更基础。
→ \to → 可以把你使用的聚类技术写出来,我随便写了个 density clustering, 你可以改。
The bag mapping technique encodes each bag into a new feature space through density clustering. - The multi-granular classification technique filters data at the bag granularity to narrow the detection range, and then performs fraudulent traffic detection at the instance granularity.
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The multi-granular classification technique efficiently filters normal data at the bag granularity, and then detects threats at the packet granularity. - Experiments on the KDD CUP 99 data set show that the detection time of our proposed algorithm is lower than that of the most state-of-the-art algorithms and maintains considerable accuracy.
→ \to → considerable 是什么东东?我暂时也找不到好的词来替换.
→ \to → 如果你的效率并没有明显的改善,投会议还是比较难中.
Experiments on the KDD CUP 99 data set show that our algorithm is more efficient than most state-of-the-art algorithms while maintains good accuracy.
小结:总体而言,中规中矩,不够炫。