IELTS Task2

雅思大作文

1. 重点

• 扣题
• 线性逻辑
• Down to earth

2. 两项评分标准

• Task response = 题型回应 + 限定词回应= 扣题
• Cohesion and coherence = 连贯流畅：核心段的拓展最为重要
  • 核心段必须公式化写作
• 核心段的拓展
  一篇论文包括一下几个部分
• 一个介绍段
• 2-3个核心段
• 一个总阶段
  具体的结论：钱、身体健康、学业、自然环境、某种能力、心情、就业、犯罪、头脑、安全、生活质量、交通、性格、多样性、时间、和平、国防

TS：首先写出直接的结论，再写客观的解释（从物体的角度出发， analyse feature），because，然后写Instance

Pets are beneficial to people， pets can make owners more happy and more relaxed because what kinds of pets selected by owners are cute and beautiful(these are the features of objects) which could make people forget what they have suffered from the whole day. What’s more, pets also can be beneficial to people’s physical health because these pets make owners have more outdoor activities with them, which could increase the amount of physical exercise. For instance, people who have a dog need clear their pet’s excrement and feed them some food at regular times.

In contrast(可以上反例继续论证说明)Controdict（能用反例的时候确实好用，但是宠物这个例子不适用）Controversy
Therefore(改写重复第一句，进行首位呼应), choose to live in … can have less worries on their life.
Therefore, living with a pet is a great choice to have a good life.