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a friend is in need is friend indeed 患难见真情

record today something:

xiaoyu interview the product line of zte, and prepare a lot,then pass the exam

fluent(顺利）

bean is failed in exam,she is very dispointted and frustrated(受挫）

there are fifty days to colleage exam,there are opertiunity ,let's try,let's work hard,we will success in the end.

the final success will belong to us.

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使用文心一言检查文章问题：

这篇英文日记中有几处语法和拼写错误，下面我逐一指出并给出修改建议：

标题中的表达“a friend is in need is friend indeed”语法上是有问题的，正确的表达应该是“A friend in need is a friend indeed”。意思是“患难见真情”。a friend in need is a friend indeed
“record today something”中的词序不正确，应该是“Record something today”。record something today
“xiaoyu interview the product line of zte”中，“interview”应该用过去时，表示已经发生的事情，应改为“Xiaoyu interviewed the product line of ZTE”。xiaoyu interviewed the product line of ZTE
“then pass the exam”缺少了主语，根据上下文，应该是指“Xiaoyu”，所以完整的句子是“then she passed the exam”。then he passed the exam
“fluent”在这里作为形容词使用是不合适的，因为它通常用来描述语言流畅，而不是描述事件顺利。如果要表达事情顺利，可以使用“smoothly”。顺利smoothly
“bean is failed in exam”中，“failed”作为形容词使用不需要加“is”，正确的表达是“Bean failed the exam”。bean failed in exam
“she is very dispointted”中，“dispointted”拼写错误，应该是“disappointed”。disappointed
“there are fifty days to colleage exam”中，“colleage”拼写错误，应该是“college”。高考应该是national college entrance examination ;colleague同事 There are still 50 days left before the college entrance examination, and we still have opportunities.there are still 50 days left before the college entrance examination, and we still have opportunites.
“there are opertiunity”中，“opertiunity”拼写错误，应该是“opportunity”。opportunity
“we will success in the end”中，“success”作为动词使用应该是“succeed”，所以应该改为“we will succeed in the end”。we will succeed in the end.