TOEFL写作——结构失衡

开头段太短
反例: Friends are big parts of our life. What kind of friends one has definitely reveals what kind of person he is. ( 21字)

 

正确结构：

①社会背景句

②话题引入句

③表明自己的观点

 

反例: Considering the social demand financial difticulties and futurecareer development, gaining work experience dofinitely  contrbules besi to young people, ( 19字)
这一句看起来虽然多了一点，但单词数量反而更少了。

独立写作至少350词。

 

开头段太长
反例: Currently, we are living in a highly-competitive modern society in which people gets used to making up some lies to cheat others in order to merely pursuing their own benefit. Hence, a small proportion of individuals harbor that honesty is the most important factor in selecting a leaderfor a student organization, due to its precious and invaluable. Nevertheless，I hold a negative attitude toward this andI strong insist that there exists others menits Of abities, suchas leadership; communicating skill, and they are much more eritical than honesty in selecting a leader for a student organization. (98字)
考试时间只有30分钟;开头段100+，你的中间段还剩多少时间?
来得及写结尾段吗?
 

开头段，严格按照3句话的内容框架进行写作
1.社会背景2.话题引入3.表明观点
字数控制在60-70个字之间为最佳

中间段：2-3段

结尾段：To conclude，it might be true that……

 

结构失衡的背后:
有限的时间资源=>有限的字数=>限制了各段的字数范围
开头段60字+中间段100-120*3 +结尾段40字