四六级作文_说明文

一、说明文之因果分析

1. 描写某一社会现象的现状/趋势

• In recent years, there has been a rapid growth in______.
• In recent years, there has been a general / widespread / growing feeling about / concern over / attitude towards______.
• In the past few years, there has been agrowing trend that______.
• Recently ______ has increased drastically / rapidly / greatly.
• At present / Currently / Nowadays, people inincreasing / growing numbers / more and more people are beginning / getting to realize / believe / understand ______.
• Currently, people have to face the problem / phenomenon of ______.

2. 分析产生这一社会现象的原因

• Although there are many causes of______, I think the major ones are as follows.
• The reasons for______are obvious / as follows.
• The rise / drop in______is attributable / maybe attributed to three things.
• Three things contributed to______.

3. 你的结论、建议、措施

• For the sake of______we should take effective measures to______.
• Since there are so many advantages to______, we should spare no efforts / double our efforts to encourage______.
• Since______is such a serious problem, we should take effective measures to______.
• Only by doing so can we______.
• C(原因) creates, causes, produces, bringsabout, results in, gives rise to, accountsfor, contributes to E(结果)
• E(结果) is created by, is caused by, isproduced by, is brought about by, refrom, arises from, is attributable to C(原因).

Directions

• A selfie is a self-portrait photogragh. Selfies are often shared on social networking services such as WeChat.
• 1.自拍照目前非常流行
• 2.自拍照流行的原因是什么
• 3.你的观点

my_ans

• The phenomenon of taking selfies has become increasingly popular in recent years. People everywhere, from celebrities to everyday individuals, are taking pictures of themselves and sharing them on social media platforms.
• There are several reasons why selfies have become so popular. Firstly, they allow people to express themselves in a creative and individual way. By choosing the angle, lighting, and pose, they can create an image that represents their unique personality and style. Secondly, selfies can be a fun and easy way to capture a moment or memory with friends and family. Finally, they can boost self-esteem（自尊） and confidence when people receive positive feedback from others.
• In my opinion, the popularity of selfies is not necessarily a bad thing. It can be a way for people to express themselves and connect with others. However, it is important to be mindful of the potential dangers of oversharing personal information online and to use social media in a responsible and safe way.

最终得分90（100）

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分层评分板子

14 points

• For many people life in a big city can be attractive. But from my perspective, there can also be quite a few challenges.
• Firstly, life in a big city means more peer pressure, compared with life in small towns. No matter who you are, an undergraduate or a white-collar worker, you have fierce competitions in life, which means, to succeed, you’ll have to try harder than most people.
• Additionally, the fast pace of life in a big city can be quite challenging. Typically, one who lives in a big city never has the luxury of spending a whole afternoon over a cup of coffee. To keep with others, they need to be highly efficient and make every minute count.
• Further more, people in big cities have to battle with traffic jams, air pollution and the soaring house prices. They have no choice but to work hard, sometimes at the cost of their health. All in all, life in a big city is challenging, and we have to be diligent if we want to fit in.

11 points

• For those living in a small town, they may think living in a big city is quite comfortable and exciting. However, thereare still many challenges.
• The biggest one among these problems, I think, is about the pollution. Every day. you have to stand the noise, air pollutionwater pollution, and so on. You eat food that is polluted. All these can cause harm for your health.
• Besides, it’s common for people to be always in a hurry. They have so much work to do and barely have free time. As a result, there is less and less communication between people. The third problem is about traffic. People prefer drive cars to go to work. In peak work hours, there are so many traffic jams on the road that you can find it quite hard to travel to work place.
• After all, there are many challenges of living in a big city. If you love living in such a big city, you have to pay for it.

8   points

• Every year there are many people come to the big city. They believed that there are all benefits of living in a big city. However,there are still many challenges for you.
• First, it’s may hard for you to go work. Big city means big population. The underground is crowded in the morning and evening. You may be late just because not choosing the proper way.
• Second, the price of house is high. Even you don’t buy the house, you should pay a lot of money on hire house. What’s worse, not only the house price but also the price of food, knowledge, and so on is more higher than the small city.
• Last but not the least, because the large population, you will face more stress on competition. The challenge is that you should be focus on your own work and keep competition with others.
• I wrote above isn’t all the challenges of living in.a big city. However, we should come over the difficulties and face the challenges.

二、说明文之比较与对照

Directions

Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people’s lives, while others think that adult life brings more happiness in spite of greater responsibilities. Please discuss both these views and give your own opinion. You are required to write at least 120 words, but not more than 150. Please write on the Answer Sheet.

my_ans

• Opinions vary regarding whether the teenage years or adult life brings greater happiness. Some argue that adolescence is the most joyful phase of life, while others contend that despite added responsibilities, adulthood is a happier period.
• On one hand, those who believe that the teenage years are the happiest time of one’s life often highlight to the innocence and carefree nature of adolescence. During this time, one is free from the responsibilities and pressures of adulthood and has more time and freedom to explore the world and pursue personal interests.
• On the other hand, those who argue that adult life is more fulfilling often cite the sense of accomplishment and satisfaction that come with achieving one’s goals and building a successful career and personal life. While responsibilities do accompany adulthood, they also bring a sense of purpose and achievement that can lead to greater happiness overall.
• In my opinion, both stages of life can bring happiness in different ways. Adolescence may offer a sense of freedom and exploration, but adulthood brings a greater sense of purpose and accomplishment. Ultimately, it’s up to the individual to find happiness in every stage of life.

最终得分92（100）