In such a apperance-first society,you could't blame it that other judge you only the first impression.Therefore, you have to be patient and careful well papered.Most importantly, Confidence is the key to success.You can take various way to show it, but there is a best way all the time. The three prior problem in my ppt is that too much words rather than picture, which I mainly want to show my attitude rather than throw myself on the ground, That's so terrible. So goes with the minis speech reflecting my bad spoken English.Especially, the spoken english is the most power part of language and raise your language from bottom to top.
The second weekness is that lake of communication with my teamates, and the context can't flow to other smoothly.