英语四级写作

一、图片

第一句(总体描述):

As is [vividly/ symbolically] shown in the picture, a person is doing +地点

It is shown in the picture that a person is doing + 地点

From the picture above we can see that a person is doing + 地点

Shown替换:demonstrated/illustrated/depicted

Picture 替换:cartoon/drawing

第二句(细节描述/对话):

The student asks/tells the teacher,””

The teacher tells the student to do...

第三句(表层含义):

Obviously,the student/person/mother/girl believes that...

主题段(1中心句+2我的观点+3-9论证(因果/正反/举例)):

中心句

It is such a common thing nowadays that most people/students/parents tend to believe/do/use...

There is a tendency that more and more people/students/parents...

[more and more替换:an increasing number of]

我的观点

  1. In my opinion(),...is of great importance(importance型)
  2. 【In my opinion替换:from my pointof view/ from my perspective】

2、按照提纲2的内容(explain型)

3、It is true that computers make our life convenient. It not a necessity.(comment科技型)

4、 Serveral reasons account for this phenomenon.(comment型没话说,就说现象的原因)

论证,关联词使用

In the first place, in the second place

First of all, in addition

Firstly,secondly

On the one hand, on the other hand

结尾段

  1. 图片让我们获得启示
  2. 建议/结论/展望未来
  1. Accordingly(hency/therefore/in a word), it is necessary for us to derive positive implication from the thought-provoking(引人深思的)(vivid/symbolic) picture.

范文一

       As is vividly demonstrated in the cartoon, a young gril is chatting with her mother. The daughter tells her mother,”Good news mom! I was accepted to the college of your choice.” Obviously, the girl believes that her mother’s choice is the best choice.

       It is such a common thing nowadays that most parents tend to make decisions for their children,including choosing colleges and majors, hunting for a job or getting married. Serveral reasons account for this phenomenon. First of all, parents always think that they are able to make a wiser choice than teenagers. In addition, most parents in China only have one child, so they attach too mach attention to their only child in the family.

       Accordingly, it is necessary for us to derive positive implication from the symbolic picture. Children should be allowed to determine their own future. In the meantime, parents should offer some helpful suggestios for the youngster.

范文二

       From the picture above we can see that a person is using his computer all day, whether he is working, studying or playing. Even when he is sleeping, the computer is also in his dream. Obviously, the person thinks that he can not live without the computer even for a minute.

       It is such a common thing nowadays that people tend to consider the computer as a necessity. From my perspective, computers play an important but not indispensable role in our modern life. On the one hand, it is ture that(there is no denying that) the computer is one of the most helpful tools not only to meet the work’s needs, but also to entertain oneself. But on the other hand, excessive addiction to the computer may have a negative impact(influence) on our health, especially on our eyes.

       Hence, it is necessary for us to derive positive implication from the symbolic picture. Computers are invented to promote our life not to harm our health. Therefore, it is necessary for us to use computers in a reasonable way.

范文三

       As is vividly depicted in the drawing, a student is discussing with his mother. The student(pupil小学生) asks his mother,”why am I going to school if my phone already knows eveverything?” Obviously(apparently), the child believes that he can totally rely(depend) on his phone.

       It is such a common thing nowadays that the young tend to consider the smart phone as a necessity. Form my perspective, the smart phone plays an important role. However it can not replace(take t place of) school education. First of all, schools always organize some activities for students to apply what they learn into practice. In addition, shcools also offer students some opportunities to have face-to-face communication with their classmates and teachers. Actually, it is hard for us to get these precious experiences simply by phone

       In a word, it is necessary for us to derive positive implication from the symbolic picture. Over-dependence on phones does more harm than good. Therefore, we should properly balance the relationship between phones and school education.

短语积累

Vividly/symbolically

Shown/demonstrated/depicted/illustrated

Drawing/picture/cartoon

Accordingly,hence,therefore,in a word

Phenomenon

Dispensable

Nesessity

Account for

Consider...as

It is true that/there is no denying that

Have/exert a negative effect/influence on

In my opinion/from my perspective/from my point of view

Tend to do

词汇积累

AI(artificial intelligence)

VR(virtual reality)=fictitious,virtual reality world虚拟现实世界

Fiction-小说

Literature-文学

Chart(table, graph)

Education pays: 教育的回报/收入

二、图表类作文

开头(总体描述+细节描述(极端值,趋势))

第一句:

The table above clearly reveals(shows/demonstrates) 数字+地点+时间...

It is clear/apparent from the table that 数字+地点+时间

From the tabel we can clearly see 数字+地点+时间...

词汇:Figure/number, data/statistics,percentage

描述趋势:

increase/rise/grow/jump

decrease/decline/fall/drop/go down

slight/gradual

dramatic/sharp/marked

remain steady保持平稳

stay stable保持平稳

remain unchanged保持不变

主题句

第一句(引出原因的套句)

Several/two/three factors have contributed to his phenomenon/trend.

Several reasons can be identified to account for this phenomenon/trend.

The reasons for this trend are as follows.

第二~九句(原因)

关联词的使用

In the first place, in the second place

First of all, in addition

Firstly, secondly

On the one hand, on the other hand

In the meantime

结尾段

观点/号召/建议/展望未来(可套用图画作文结尾)

     范文一

The bar chart above clearly reverals the statistics of the weekly earnings of people with different educational backgrounds in the Unite States in 2010. According to the data, those who possessed doctoral degree earned 1551 dollars weekly, ranking first among people of other education levels. And there was a steady increase from 444 dollars for people with less than high school degree to 1551 dollars for those with a doctoral degree.

Several factors have contributed to this trend. In the first place, people who have acquired higher education are more likely to possess wider knowledge, more remarkable learning and research ability and greater innovation. These advantages are essential to a high-income work. In addition, the adjustment of industrial structure leads to a dramatic demand of employees with high educational degree. Therefore, it is natural for well-educated people to enjoy a better-paying job.

In a word, education is indeed a worthy investment. We may predict that in order to remain competitive(有竞争力的) in the job market as well as salary, an increasing number of people will return to school to acquire higher education. Undoubtely, there will be more and more well-educated people in the future.

     范文二

       The bar chart above clearly shows the change in the average number of hours a sutdent spent on the computer per week every five years from 1990 to 2000. The number from 1990 to 1995 rose steadily from two hours to five hours. However, there was a markedly increase from 1995 to 2000, with the number jumping from five hours to eighteen hours.

       There are three factors leading to this phenomenon. Firstly, because of the sharp decline in the price of computers, most college students could afford one. Secondly, it is very convenient for them to search for information and finish homework with the help of computers. Finally, with the fast development of the modern society, a computer has become more and more important for many people.

       As for me, computers do bring convenience to studets. However, it is no good for them to spend too much time chatting online or playing computer games. Everyone should use computers in a reasonable way.

词汇积累

Table/chart/graph/diagram

Line graph

Pie chart

Bar/column chart

Possess拥有

Acquire

Remarkable卓越的

Innovation改革

undoubtedly

Education pays: 教育的回报/收入

短语表达

better-paying job/high-income work

competitive

be more likely to do

a demand of 对、、、有需求

the graph shows a three times increase in the number of

the number of A is about five times/twice as much as that of B

A has a highest figure, followed by B and C.

it accounts for 30% of the total...

A is the lowest/highest part,数字

表达练习

  1. 加拿大的工业产值增长了6%

Canada’s industrial output increase by 6%(increase 作动词)

  1. 从1995年到2000年加拿大工业产值增长了6%

Canada’s industrial output increase by 6% from 1995 to 2000.

There was an increase of 6% in Canada’s industrial output from 1995 to 2000.(increase作名词)

  1. 销售额从5千美元急速增长到超过10万美元

Sales increased dramatically from five thousand dollars to over 10 thousand dollars.

  1. 与1980年相比,2010年的年轻人口的占比几乎下降了17%。

The proportion of young population in 2010 amost declined by 17 percent, compared with the year 1980.

5、有博士学位的人收入几乎是高中学历收入人群的4倍。

       The earnings of people with doctoral degree is nearly four times as much as that of people with less than high school degree.

  1. 这个柱状图比较了从1989年来的13年内5大主要城市的房价

The bar chart compares the cost of house in five major cities over a period of 13 years from 1989.

  1. 我们可以发现房价在1990年到1995年下降

We can see that house prices fell between 1990 and 1995.

  1. 在加州,居民用水消耗量占总用水的60%

residential water of consumption accounts for 60% in California State.

  1. 在2001年内伦敦有4万3千居民使用自行车通勤,在2001年,这个数字增长到了超过10万6千人,增长了144%。

In 2001, about 43 thousand residents of inner London commuted by bicycle, and this figure rose to more than 106 thousand in 2011, an increase of 144%.

     三、命题作文

提纲型

二选一型

方案型

什么的什么型(of型)

第一段

(1、2句)

1、Along with the rapid development of the Internet/technology/society/cities,XXX has been a fashion.

2、It is generally agreed that XXX has been playing an increasingly important role in our life.

3、Nowadays, critics have never stopped complaining about the side/negative effects from...

4、In recent years, the number of ___ (一群人) has been increasingly steadily.

5、Nowadays, XXX is becoming increasingly prevalent at an amazing rate.

6、To many students/parents/youngsters/people(一群人), XXX may be their one choice to (do)...

7、Before stepping into the workforce(劳动市场), school graduates are filled with endless curiosities about their new stage of life.

8、Just as a famous saying goes,”...”

9、...... , but opinions vary greatly.

10、People have different attitudes towards this topic/prolem.

(3句)

提纲型(根据提纲一)

二选一型(给出自己的选择)

方案型(套话:挖掘可行措施很重要)

什么的什么型(of型)(点题目:重要就说重要,挑战就说挑战)

第二段

(1~9句)

提纲型(根据提纲二)

二选一型(我做这几个选择有几点原因+具体原因论述 2~3点)

方案型(对其中一方的建议+对另一方的建议)

什么的什么型(of型)(具体原因论述2~3点)

     范文一

       Along with the rapid development of the Internet, shopping online has been a fashion especially among the youngster. Just click your mouse to choose the goods you like and the purchase is done. You don’t even have to step out of the room.

       However people’s opinions vary(变化的、不同的) on this trend. Some believe that online shopping is time and money saving. With plentiful(丰富的)selection options they can buy whatever they like at any time convenient. Others insist that lack of the face to face deal makes online shopping less reliable and trustworthy. In addition, the delivery will increase the risk of item’s damage.

       To sum up, shopping on the Internet has become an irresistible(不可抵抗的) trend in modern society. It is of great urgency that relative(相关的)laws should be made in accordance with the rapid growth of online shopping. Only in this way can we enjoy the pleasure and convenience of online shopping.

相关词汇:

Vary 变化       insist坚持     deal 交易       lack of           reliable(rely on/depend on)          trustworthy值得信赖的   delivery

Risk       irresistible势不可挡的        relative相关的            in accordance with 根据...... , 关于......

     范文二

       Before stepping into the workforce, school graduates are filled with endless curiosities about the new stage of life. In fact, job selection is one of the most important issues for me. If asked me to make a choice between a state-owned business and a joint venture. I will definitely choose the latter one.

       There are three main reasons for my choice. First of all, joint venture appeals to me greatly for its creative and challenging atmosphere. Such enterprise means a place where one can get promoted(一个人可以得到进升) due to his excellent performance. In addition, joint ventures have more contact with the outside world, which may improve my communication skills. Finally, most joint venture have some advance technologies from other countries, which are relatively new to me. These new things always make me excited.

       In conclusion, I do believe that all roads lead to Rome if people choose the most suitable work to do. As for me, a joint venture is more suitable for me and I believe it may offer me more opportunities to realize my dream.

词汇积累:

be filled with 充满

curiosity

definitely 绝对的

appeals to

enterprise

get promoted 得到进升

due to

advance technology

relatively相对的

     范文三(方案型)

       It is generally agreed that teacher-student relationship has been playing an important role in student’s life. However, some teachers find it increasingly difficult to cultivate(培养) a satisfactory relationship in their classrooms. Therefore, it is necessary to explore how to best handle teacher-student relationship under new circumstance(环境).

       On the one hand, teachers have to adjust(适应) themselves to the Information Age(信息时代), which has enable students to obtain easy access(途径) to a vast amount of knowledge outside the classroom. Instead of feeling frustrated(沮丧) by students who sometimes challenge them, techers should provide students with more opportunities to foster(培养) productive discussions. On the other hand, students should give their teachers due(应有的) respect, which is the tradition in China. In addition, students ought to pay more attention in class. It’s essential to raise questions(提问)and work out(解决)problems in new ways with classmates and teachers.

       To sum up, a positive teacher-student relationship benefits both the teachers and the students. How to best handle the relationship between them can be tricky, which requires the joint effort of both teachers and sutdents.

词汇积累

Cultivate 培养

satisfactory

explore

obtain access to 获取途径

a vast amount of 大量的(后面加不可数n)

productive 有成果性的,有创造性的,有生产性的

raise questions 提问

benefit

tricky难办的,棘手的

     范文四(of型)

       Nowadays, the number of Chinese students going abroad in pursuit(追求...) of higher education has been increasingly steadily. People have different attitudes towards this phenomenon. Studying abroad is fun and exciting, but it is also filled with challenges.

       Firstly, studying abroad can be costly, especially in terms of college tuition(学费) and the cost of living. Secondly, adapting to a different culture can be very difficult. There may be some barriers when overseas students participate in various college activities because of cultural shock(文化冲击). Finally, studying abroad isn’t the ticket to a good job. Some college students optimistically(乐观的) think that having an overseas diploma can help them find a decent(得体的)job. However, remarkable capacity(能力)for work is what employers value more.

       Therefore, think twice before deciding to go abroad. Studying abroad is not the only way to expand future career opportunities. All roads lead to Rome.

词汇积累

in terms of 在......方面

in pursuit of 追求

adapt to 适应

barrier 障碍

paticipate in

curtural shock

optimistically 乐观地

diploma 文凭

decent 得体的

remarkable 杰出的

capacity 能力

expand拓展                 

四、书信作文

申请信、投诉信、道歉信、致谢信、咨询信、建议信、说明信

1、书信格式:

正文

开头段:说明背景/来意

主题段:具体说明,举出实例

结尾段:重申来意,感谢/祝福语

开头段:(2~3)

  1. 自我介绍
  2. 写作目的

I am writing to apply for admission to your college/university/program/institute...

I am writing to express my interest in the position/opening/post/vacancy that you recently advertised.

I am writing in reply to your advertisement in... for someone to...

This letter is to tell you my true feelings from the bottom of my heart.

I am writing the letter for purpose of expressing...

I am writing to you to express my thanks/ appreciation for...

I would like to take this opportunity to express my heartfelt gratitude to you for...

I am writing the letter to give/ propose some useful/ practical suggestions/ recommendations to you.

I am writing the letter to recommend ... to you.

主题段:

  1. 主题句总起套话
  2. 具体说明,举出实例2~3个

结尾段:重申来意,感谢/祝福语(2~3句)

  1. 表示感谢:

My thanks for you to your generous help are beyond words.

Words fail me when I wish to express my sincere gratitude to you.

I take this opportunity to show my heartfelt appraciation to the kind assistance you render me.

  1. 期待回信:

I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Please contact me at your earliest convenience.

  1. 重申来意,感谢/祝福语(2~3)

美好祝福:

May everything go well around you.

Best regards!

Best wishes!

  1. 落款

Sincerely yours,/ Yours sincerely,

落款

      

     范文一

(express your thanks to your parents or any family members upon making memorable achievement)

Dear Mom and Dad,

       This letter is to tell you my true feelings from the bottom of my heart. Although we can keep in virtual touch every day, I still feel it not enough to let you know how much I love you and how much I’ve appreciated what you’ve done for me. You are the best parents in my heart.

       In the past 20 years, you have done a lot for me. Firstly, thank you so much for bringing me up. I can imagine how many difficutlies and obstacles you’ve conquered. Secondly, I want to thank you for your good education on me. Just as an old saying goes,”parents are the first teachers to their children.” Both of you are the typical ones. The most important thing is that you were the first to let me know how to share and are care for others, and I continue to share my blessings with the people around me.

       Words fail me when I wish to express my sincere gratitude to you. Your love is so unselfish that I am deeply affected, so I will study hard to be a useful person and won’t make you disappointed. The only thing I hope you can do for me is to take good care of yourselves.

Yours faithfully,

Li Ming

kepp in virtual touch 网络上的联系

bring sb. up 抚养某人长大

obstacle 障碍、阻碍

blessing 祝福

disappointed

conquer

take good care of 照顾

范文二

(假如你是李明,请你就本校食堂的状况给校长写一封信,内容应涉及食堂的饭菜质量、价格、环境、服务等,可以是表扬,可以是批评建议,也可以兼而有之)

Dear Mr. President,

       I am a junior in English Department. And I am very lucky to be a member of this world-famous university. However, I am afraid I am not content with the canteen service on campus.

       Firstly, the quality of the dishes should be improve. There is no denying that a lot of delicious dishes are provied but all the year round, they are the same. More and more students are complaining about eating the same food every day. Therefore I think the most urgent problem is food variety. Secondly, the price is a bit too high. Many of us hope that the canteen can provide us with not only delicious but also cheaper food. Finally, the enviroment is so noisy that we can’t enjoy our meals in good mood. Some soft music may be helpful for us to relax.

       We hope our respectable president will pay attention to our suggestions. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Thank you so much! May everything go well around you.

Yours sincerely,

         Li Ming      

词汇:

be content with 对、、、满意

canteen 餐厅

all the year around一整年

complain about抱怨

urgent紧急的

variety 多样性

in good mood 好的心情    

范文三

(write a letter to express your thanks to one of your friends who helped you most when you were in difficulty)

申请信范文

(write a letter to apply for a program for postgraduate studies)

 Dear Sir/Madam

       I am writing to apply for admission to your program for postgraduate studies. (写作意图)Enclosed with this letter are my academic record, proof of my language ability and my resume, which further detail my qualifications.(提供详细个人资料)

       Currently, I am a senior in the Department of Economics at NanJing University. For the past three years, my GPA(grade point average) has ranked top three in my college. Last year, my paper was admitted by one of the best journals in the field of Economics and will be published next mouth. My diligence and love for challenges have earned me sereral awards in our university. In addition, I have taken the TOEFL test and obtained a satisfactory grade. Therefore, I believe I will not have difficulty in either academic studies or communication in your country.

       I would appreciate it if you could take my application into serious consideration. Please contact me at your earliest convenience. Best wishes!

Yours faithfully,

Li Ming

       词汇:

enclosed 随信附着的,在附件中的

academic 学术的

proof 证明

resume 简历

senior 大四

journals 报刊、杂志

in the field of 在、、、的领域

diligence 勤奋

earn 赢得、挣(钱)

have difficulty in  sth/doing sth 在、、、方面有困难

五、图画作文

(brief account of the impact if the Internet on learning and then explain why education doesn’t simply mean learning to obtain information.)

       It is generally agreed that the Internet has been playing an increasingly important role in learning. Just like the student in the picture asks his teacher,”once I learn how to use Google, isn’t that all the education I really need?” Obviously, the boy believes that he can get all the education on the Internet.

       It is such a common thing nowadays that a large number of individuals contend that education just means acquiring information. From my perspective, education is not limited to the hard facts or theories students can learn from their textbooks or Internet. First of all, education relates to a wider scope ranging from the obtainment of practical skills to the development of critical thinking, which are hard for students to learn simply by googling. In addition, education in school also provides students opportunities to communicate with peers, which is essential for students to develop their social skills and characters.

       In a word, it is necessary for us to derive positive implication from the symbolic picture. The Internet does provide valuable information for learners, but people should be fully aware of the essence of education.

词汇:

think/contend(认为)/believe

acquiring/obtain

a wider scope ranging from ... to ... 一个宽广的范围,从、、、到、、、

peers同龄人

character:人格、品格

essential

hard facts 事实

书信作文

(write a letter to express your thanks to one of your friends who helpde you must when you were in difficulty)

Dear Susan,

       I would like to take this opportunity to express my heartfelt gratitude to you for your help when I was in difficulty. You have been very kind and helpful since we knew each other.

       Last week, I caught a bad cold and had to stay at home for a week. When I was worrying about the lessons, you came to my home after school and helped me with every subject. With your help, I didn’t fall behind. In addition, I always remember when we first met, I was very shy, but with your help, I could get along with our classmates. I will always remember your kindness and painstaking labor. Besides, it is really an honor for me to be your good friend and I will cherish the goodwill you showed to me wherever I go.

       Words fail me when I wish to express my sincere gratitude to you. I wish you every success in the future and I hope we can exchange more viewpoints(观点) on study.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua       

词汇:

stay at home

fall behind 落后

get along well with

painstaking 辛苦的,劳苦的

labor 劳动、劳动力

cherish珍惜、珍藏

goodwill友善

viewpoints观点

I wish you every success in the future.

六、说明文

思路:

结构:命题作文二选一

内容:

Who

What

When

Where

Why

How

顺序

范文一

(suppose a foreign friend of yours is coming to visit your campus, what is the most interesting place you would like to take him/her to see and why?)

(write a short essay about a course that has impressed you most in college)

       In college, we take a variety of courses to develop different Skills. Some courses are meant to broaden our horizon; others are designed to cultivate our thinking abilities. Among all those courses, Literature Appreciation(鉴赏) has impressed me most.

       There are three main reasons for my choice. This course is unique in that the teacher has his own way to encourage students to become better readers. He calls it all”ABC”approach to literature. “ABC”stands for “apprecitive but critical”. Whenever we are assigned a poem, or a short story, he first asks us to appreciate the beauty of the literary works, in terms of diction, plots, rhythm. Then he asks us to be critical, trying to find fault with the literary works. Everyone in class must make one appreciative comment and one critical comment; and no one shall repeat what has been said.

       From my perspective, this approach is quite beneficial as well as impressive, because it cultivates my analytical thinking and critical thinking skills. Thanks to this course, I am now an attentive and alert reader.

词汇:

in that = because

a variety of

broaden one’s horizon 拓展某人的视野

literature

approach方式、方法 = way

appreciate 赞美、欣赏/appreciative欣赏的、喜欢的

literary work文学作品

plot剧情

find fault with找到、、、的瑕疵

beneficial

attentive留心的、小心的

unique

assign分配

diction遣词造句、用词

rhythm节奏、韵律

analytical分析的analyze(v)

alert谨慎的

句型:

Among ... , the one that has impressed me most is... 、、、之中,令我印象最深刻的是

Among... , ... has been very impressive on me.

... is quite beneficial as well as impressive, because...

... is not only very beneficial but also impressive in that... 、、、不仅令人印象深刻,同时还让人受益匪浅原因在于、、、

七、告示类(通知+广告)

内容:招聘通知(Recruitment Notice);寻物通知(Lost Notice);招领通知(Found Notice);活动通知(Activity Notice);演讲或讲座通知(Lecture Notice)

叫法:Notivce、Announcement、Advertisement

who

what

when

where

why

how

格式:

词汇:

purpose、content、arrangement、organize、brand、specification(特征)、feature(特征)、contact information(联系信息)、

范文一

(write a poster recruiting volunteers)

( 1、校学生会将组织一次暑假志愿者活动、现招募志愿者

2、本次志愿者活动的目的、内容、安排等

3、报名条件及联系方式

)

Volinteers Needed

July 8,2019

       Our students’ is organizing a school-wide voluntary program during this summer vacation. Now volunteers are wanted. We are looking forward to your active participation.

       The following is the introduction to this program. First, this program is designed to improve students’ ability and enrich after-class activities. Second, the Students’ Union will offer the young kids from a certain poverty-stricken area if Yun Nan Province an opportunity of free English education, which means a two-mouth stay there. Currently, we will recruit five volunteers to works as English teachers.

       Those who are willing to take part in the activity, please send your resume to the email address studentsunion@edu.com before July 15th. We will contact the chosen candidate before July 29th. If you are interested, please do not hesitate to contact us.

The Students’ Union

词汇:

voluntary program 志愿者项目

vacation

poverty-stricken贫困的、贫穷的

recruit 招聘

candidate

if ... , please do not hesitate to contact us

范文二

(write an advertisement on your campus website to sell a computer you used at college. Your advertisment may include its brand, specifications/features, condition and price, and your contact information)

Advertisement

       Do you have any need for a computer in this new semester(学期)? As I am about to graduate and leave the compus, I am going to sell my personal laptop at a low price.

       The detailed information is listed as follows. First, the brand of the computer is HP, in black color. Second, the laptop is at good condition. All software and hardware on this computer function nomally and quickly, so you can write papers, watch videos or listen to music and so on with it. Moreover, the storage space is big enough for you to do any specific(特殊的) assignments(任务), including editing and drawing. The last but not least, I would like to sell the laptop at 1500 yuan, an attractive price. You would love it!

       If you have any questions concerning the laptop, please do not hesitate to contact me. And I can be reached at 1367890 or liming @126.com. Or to know more details about the laptop, you could also visit me at my dorm: 985Room at Dorm 2. Please contact me by telephone before visit. Thank you very much!

词汇:

semester学期

be about to 将要

laptop电脑

at a low price低价

brand

be at good condition

function(v(运行、运作)/n(功能))

storage储存

specific特殊的

时间、地点的规范表达:

  1. 英文先地点后时间;先说地点是去颐和园再说具体时间
  2. 地点如果有多个,要从小到大书写

青羊区小南路125号201室

Room201,No.125 Xiaonan Road, Qingyang District

  1. 时间中的星期和日期的顺序是:先星期再日期,具体的星期和日期之前用介词on;如果同一句中同时涉及到日期、星期、和时刻,其顺序是:时刻+星期+日期,例如:

At 8:30 am., Saturday, September 24th

八、新闻稿:

思路:

结构:

  1. 标题
  2. 总述活动(who + what + when + where + purpose)
  3. (背景介绍)+展开详细描述活动经过
  4. 评价活动效果,收获

·内容:

who

what

when

where

why

how

时间顺序、人称、时态

Visiting a local Farm

On June 15th,50 students paid a visit to a farmland. This activity was organized by the Student Union of our school, aiming to let us leave textbooks, get close to nature and experience life.

The farm is one hour’s drive from our school. Upon our arrival that day, we were warmly welcomed by the farmers on the farm. Firstly, these friendly farmers took us to visit the stables(马厩), where we saw modern ways of feeding horses. Then, we got a chance to ride a horse. For many students, it was their first time to ride a horse. Although they were afraid, everyone was more and more excited. Finally we helped farmers do basic tasks, such as collecting eggs, feeding pigs. After finishing the work, a girl proudly told us that she cried when she was feeding pigs, but in the end, she overcame fear and mastered(驾驭、拥有) a new skill.

After this meaningful day, we all know that we need to cherish(珍惜) every product we purchase from the market, because every single grain(谷粒,颗粒) means hardship(辛苦). And we really appreciate the hard work of farmers!

固定表达:

aiming to sth

upon our arrival在我们到达的时候

be warmly welcomed by被热情的欢迎

stabel 稳固的,马厩

ways of

ride a horse

overcome

master拥有

cherish珍惜

purchase购买

grain谷物,谷粒

A Visit to Hope Elementary(小学) School

On July 16th, the Student Union organized an activity of visiting a Hope Elementary School, aiming to improve education in poor areas. 30 volunteers participated in it. They said that it made a deep impression on them.

Volunteers prepared books and school supplies(学习用品) for those kids. Upon arrival(我们到的时候), they saw many kids sitting in the classroom with eyes following the teacher. Those children studied really hard. In the same time, volunteers found that a host of(多数) boys and girls have a variety of difficulties in their English  learning. Then, our Studennt Union held some activities to help those kids and also asked them to try their best to use English to discuss with their partners. Finally, these pupils(小学生) invited our volunteers to play hide-and-seek with them. All of them enjoyed the day!

The Hope Elementary School can contribute to(贡献) the improvement of national quality(国民素质). More and more children can have the chance to enjoy high-quality education resources. Paticipants(参与者) sincerely hope that more Hope Elementary School can be built to benefit more and more children.

搭配:

supply供应

a host of 大量

a variety of大量

have a difficulties in (doing) sth做某事有困难

try one’s best to do

hide-and-seek

contribute to贡献

paticipants参与者

national quality国民素质

Assisting Elderly People

       Last week, Student Union in our school held a volunteer activity, which was to help elderly people in the neighborhood. 30 volunteers participated in this activity and they benefited a lot.

       (It is a common phenomenon nowadays for many senior citizens to stay at home. However, they need youngsters’ care and help. Therefore,) on July 16th, our volunteers set out(出发) early with fruits and flowers to assist those lonely elderly people in the neighborhood. Upon arrival, the volunteers were warmly welcomed. Then, the young started working by helping these aged people wash the clothes and clean the room and talked with them happily. Besides, volunteers also taught them how to use computers, which made the elders very excited. When it was time for the young to leave, the elderly people thanked them for their kindness. All of them said it was such a beautiful day that they would remember it forever.

       In conclusion, the volunteers activity is of great significance. Compared with better living conditions, youngsters’ company is what the aged really need. It is no exaggeration to say that the volunteer activity not only brought joy to the elderly people, but also enriched the life experience of volunteers.

句型:

assist

set out 出发

elderly people/elders/senior citizens/aged people

it it time for sth./sb. to do sth.

Compared with better living conditions, youngsters’ company is what the aged really need.

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