小作文思路

英语作文整体思路
一；读标题：三遍后再下笔——明确目的，得到首段素材
开头：熟人：dear 看A， 陌生人 Sir or Madam 看B

A Dear Bob,
一段：寒暄+写作目的（把题目打散柔和进去）
寒暄：很想你，很感谢你,在意你
写作目的：今天我写这封信是为了ｘｘｘ
二段：通过对比，排比，强调句，关联词进行——回忆，感谢，原因，介绍，强调，道歉
三段：再次点题,希望你能ＸＸＸ

B Dear Sir or Madam ,
一段：介绍自己+定语从句产生联系+写作目的（题目打散）
二段：与上同

例题一熟人篇
You have just come back from Canada and Found a music CD in your luggage（行李） that you forgot to return to BoB , your landlord (房东）there. Write him a letter to
(1)make an an apology 道歉 （2） suggest a solution

A熟人（认识他）
Dear Bob，
第一段
寒暄
I am quite delighted to recall the past days when I studied in Canada and lived in your house (我回想起过去那段时间在加拿大住在你家学习的那段时光就很高兴）

转入正题，写作目的：
Today I am writing for the purpose of making an apology , since I found a music CD in my luggage that I forgot to return to you (今天我写这份信的目的是向你道歉，原因是（喜欢你）我发现你的CD忘还给你了，这是题干打散融进自己的内容里）

第二段：
强调句： It was your warmhearted help that enable me to enjoy a comfortable and fruitful trip of study ( 正是你热情的帮助使我享受了一段舒适，并富有成果的学习之旅）

对比：Anyway，compared with your thoughtfulness, I am so careless and I totally forgot to return it
关联词 因此我要XXX
So , I deem that it is advisable for me to send the CD to you by EMS 因此我认为我应该把CD通过EMS快递给你
Of course, provided that you can think of any better solution , please feel free to inform me 当然如果你有更好的解决办法，请不吝赐教

尾：
Once again ，I am sorry for any inconvenience caused (我再次为造成的麻烦表示道歉）
Yours Sincerely
Li Ming

必背句子
1，我写信目的是： I am writing for the purpose of +doing
2，强调句：　It is XX that 正是XX使得　
3，比较句：　compared　with XX
4，排比句：　XX　bring sb sth , arouse sb’s passion of xx ,help sb sth 给某人带来XX，唤醒对XX热爱，帮助某人ＸＸ
5, 条件句： if you can = provided that 假如xx

完整：
亲爱的鲍尔
我非常开心回忆起过去的那段日子，居住在你家并在加拿大学习，然而今天我写这封信的目的是道歉，原因是我发现一个音乐CD在你的行李，就是我忘记归还给你了
正是你热情的帮助使得我享受到舒适和丰富的学习旅程，因此我非常感激你，然而与你的细心相比，我比较粗心，我完全忘记归还给你的CD了，因此我认为我应该立即把cd通过EMS给你，如果你想到更好的想法，可以不吝赐教。
再次表示我的歉意

Dear Bob ,
I am very delighted to recall the past days when I studied in Canada in your house . However , today , I am writing for the purpose of making an apology ,since I found a music CD in my luggage that I forgot to return to you .
It is your warmhearted help that enabled me enjoy an comfortable and fruitful trip of study . Thus I am quite grateful to you . Admittedly , compared with your thoughtfulness , I am so careless that I forgot it. Hence , I deem that it is advisable to send it to you by EMS, Provided that you think of better ideal ,please feel free to intend to me
Once again, I’m sorry for any inconvenience caused

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例题二陌生人篇
Suppose you have just found something wrong with the electronic dictionary that you bought from an online store the other day ,Write a letter to
(1)Make a complaint 投诉 (2)demand a prompt solution 提出及时解决办法

不认识，陌生人
Dear Sir or Madam ,
介绍自己+定语从句产生联系+题干揉进去
I am a customer who bought the electronic dictionary from your online store several days ago.

写作目的：
Today I am writing for the purpose of making a complaint because I have just found something wrong with its power system电力系统

第二段
强调句：正是由于它频繁的问题导致我没准备好研究生考试
It was its frequent problems that caused me to make inadequate preparation for the national entrance examination for postgraduates .
因果：因此我对你们的产品不满意
Thus， I am rather disappointed with the quality of your product
对比：另外，与我的期待相比，你们的售后服务也不行
In addition , with my expectation , your after- sale service is not satisfactory

尾：条件：如果你不能提供及时并令我满意的解决办法，我就打12315继续投诉你
provided that you fail to provide a prompt and satisfactory solution , I will call 12315 for a further complaint.