博客学习日记-2014/11/21

英语写作(实验室组会学习收获)

英语作文中尽量不要有一小段一小段的句子，如果两小句之间有关系，多用连词连接，比如as a result, however, and, so, 等等，不要非常愣的直接将两个句子用句号分隔开。

their parents' behavior -->the behavior of their parents

have abundant of experience about their life -->have abundant life experience

they want their children to be successful -->they hope their children succeed

They will tell the children all their experience and lessons to help children behave better during their life. --> As a result, they will teach their children using all their life experience so as to help the children behave better during their life.

farmer农场主 -->peasant农民

less knowledge -->little knowledge

so I become a student of Beihang University eventually(副词用的不合适) -->this is why I currently become a student of a famous university.

... , so ... -->since ... , ...

take the most care of their children -->take most care of their children