英语新概念2-回译法-lesson12

第一次翻译 （稀巴烂）

Our neiborhood,Capitain Charles Alison,will sail from P. We will ______ in the _. He will sit in his small boat, Topsail,Topsail is a famous boat. It has been across the A many times. Alison will sail at 8 o’clock,so we have many time. We will visit his boat,and say good bye to him.He will leave two months,and we are really pround of him. He will take part in a important comptetion about acrss _______

• “Our neiborhood” 应该是 “Our neighbor”，表示 “我们的邻居”，而不是 “我们的邻居” 的复数形式。
• “P.” 应该是 “Portsmouth”，表示 “朴次茅斯”。
• “We will ______ in the ______.” 这句话没有完整翻译，应该是 “We will see him off at the pier.”，表示 “我们将在码头为他送行”。
• “Topsail” 应该是 “Topsail”，不需要翻译。
• “It has been across the A_____” 应该是 “It has crossed the Atlantic many times.”，表示 “它已经多次横渡大西洋”。
• “Alison will sail at 8 o’clock,so we have many time.” 中的 “many time” 应该是 “plenty of time” 或 “ample time”，表示 “充裕的时间”。
• “He will take part in a important comptetion about acrss _______” 应该是 “He will take part in an important competition for crossing the Atlantic.”，表示 “他将参加一场关于横渡大西洋的重要比赛”。

Our neighbor, Captain Charles Alison, will set sail from Portsmouth tomorrow. We’ll see him off at the pier bright and early. He’ll be aboard his boat, the “Topsail,” a well-known vessel that has crossed the Atlantic many times. Captain Alison will depart at 8 o’clock, so we have plenty of time. We’ll visit his boat and bid him farewell. He’ll be away for two months, and we’re truly proud of him. He’s participating in a major competition for crossing the Atlantic.