英语新概念2-回译法-lesson15

The secretary told me that Mr.Harmsworth would see me.I walked into his office and I felt very nervous.He did not look up from his desk when I entered.He said the bussiness was bad after I sat down.He also told me that the firm could not afford the big salary and there was 20 workers had left.
‘Mr.Harmsworth,’I said in a weak voice.
‘Please don’t interrupt me,’he said.
Then he smiled and told me I would receive an extral 1000 pounds pay a year!

最终订正版本：
The secretary told me that Mr. Harmsworth would see me. I walked into his office and I felt very nervous. He did not look up from his desk when I entered. After I sat down, he said the business was bad. He also told me that the firm could not afford the big salary and that 20 workers had left.
‘Mr. Harmsworth,’ I said in a weak voice.
‘Please don’t interrupt me,’ he said.
Then he smiled and told me I would receive an extra 1000 pounds a year!

具体改正点：

• 标点符号后需要空格：
  “Mr.Harmsworth” 改为 “Mr. Harmsworth”
  “me.I” 改为 “me. I”
  “nervous.He” 改为 “nervous. He”
  “entered.He” 改为 “entered. He”
  “down.He” 改为 “down. He”
  “Mr.Harmsworth” 改为 “Mr. Harmsworth”
  “voice.‘Please” 改为 “voice. ‘Please”
  “said.Then” 改为 “said. Then”

• 语法和句子结构：
  “He said the business was bad after I sat down.” 改为 “After I sat down, he said the business was bad.”
  “there were 20 workers had left” 改为 “that 20 workers had left.”

• 其他细节：
  “receive an extra 1000 pounds pay a year!” 改为 “receive an extra 1000 pounds a year!”