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It is my,there app my
  It is a sea of elements that there exist() to be responsible for my perspective.
There appear a multitude of causes lead to my viewpoint.

强调句：
It is the gene of innovation that builds a glorious company which brings great changes to our lives.

As the picture shows,we have witnessed a huge development in information technology during the past decades,which has reshaped the way we live,learn and play.（正如图片所示，在过去的几十年里，我们见证了信息技术的巨大发展，这改变了我们的生活、学习和娱乐方式。）Indeed,the mobile Internet and other inventions enhance,promote and boost our life quality,（独立主格）with our daily events made more convenient.（事实上，移动互联网和其他发明促进、提升和提升我们的生活质量，我们的日常活动更方便。）

There are many factors contributing to this sorry state of affairs.（有很多因素导致了这种糟糕的状况）

Living in such a bad environment, what can we do to protect t ourselves? （生活在这样一个糟糕的环境中，我们能做些什么来保护自己呢？）The following tips provide some effective methods to fight against the haze. （下面的建议提供了一些有效的方法来对抗雾霾。）

There exist/appear/seem/remain
be可以用所有的感官动词。用在第一段最后一句话或者第三段第一句话。
There appear many reasons explaining my idea.
there exist 替换 
第二段第一句话用there exist，或者是最后一句喊口号。
many替换
A sea of
A train of
A host of
A multitude of
immense amounts of
numerous
abundant
plentiful
reason替换
causes
factors
elements
explain替换
account for
lead to
give rise to
contribute to
be responsible for
idea替换
point
viewpoint
outlook
perspective