0315写作01

1.Young people who have not received higher education can only find low-technology jobs.

 

2.Young people without tertiary education qualifications normally end up working in low-skilled jobs.

 

3.Some people don’t support GM food.

 

4.Some people disapprove of genetically modified food.

 

5.Tourist attractions try to satisfy tourists’ needs and tastes.

 

6.Tourist spots endeavor to cater for tourists’ needs and tastes.

 

7.In competitive society,working adults care about career development.

 

8.In a highly competitive society,working adults usually focus on career advancement.

 

9.Aesthetics vary from culture to culture.

 

10.Perception of beauty differs from culture to culture.

 

11.Because of decline of fee,the aviation industry has developed rapidly in recent decades.

 

12.Because of low-cost carriers,the aviation industry has developed at an astounding pace over the past decades.

 

13.Sometimes,animal experiments can’t test the side effects of drugs.

 

14.Animal experiments sometimes fail to detect the undesirable side effects of drugs.

 

15.Illegal hunting caused extinction of some animals.

 

16.Some animals have died out because of illegal hunting.

 

17.The influence of computers on people’s communication skills varies with age.

 

18.The impact of computers on communication skills varies across ages.

 

19.Many girls don’t want to find jobs in male-dominated industries.

 

20.Many girls are not willing to seek employment in a male-dominated world.

 

21.The main function of school is to impart knowledge to the next generation.

 

22.The main function of schools is to impart knowledge to the next generation.

 

23.The art is not one of schools’ curriculum.

 

24.The arts are not among core subject areas at school.

 

25.Because of the obscurity of economic outlook,many companies are not able to recruit new employees.

 

26.Because of the uncertainty about the economic outlook,many companies are unlikely to recruit new employees.

 

27.The air transportation may produce a lot of greenhouse gases.

 

28.Air freight is likely to create enormous greenhouse gases.

 

29.Some children are likely to have behavioral problems.

 

30.Some children are likely to have behavioral problems.

 

31.The population expansion is the reason why a lot of garbage is produced.

 

32.The rapid population expansion is the main reason for the huge accumulation of waste.

 

33.Strict punishment is an effective way to reduce crimes.

 

34.Imposing stiff punishment is an effective method to reduce crimes.

 

35.Our environment is still terrible.

 

36.Our environment is still in a dire state.

 

37.Because of the high unemployment rate,undergraduates are working hard with pressure.

 

38.Undergraduates feel under increasing pressure to study hard,because of the soaring unemployment rate.

 

39.The problem of racial discrimination is still serious.

 

40.Racial discrimination remains a serious problem.

 

41.Learning multiplication table by rote memorization is not the best way to improve arithmetical abilities.

 

42.Learning the times table by rote is not the best way to improve numeracy.

 

43.The priority of poor countries is to satisfy people’s basic needs for survival.

 

44.The top priority for deprived countries is to satisfy citizens’ basic needs.

 

45.The influence of genetically modified food on health is still unknown.

 

46.The health effect of GM food remains unclear to be known.

 

47.Shopping online has become a common part of many people’s life.

 

48.Online shopping has become a normal part of people’s everyday life.

 

49.In the consumer society,people are no longer satisfied with daily necessities.

 

50.In the consumer society,bare necessities are not able to satisfy people’s needs.

 

51.People’s unhealthy lifestyle is the result of their tendency to rely on technology.

 

52.People’s unhealthy lifestyle is the result of their tendency to rely heavily on technology.

 

53.Poverty is the reason for increase of community crimes.

 

54.Poverty is responsible for the crime wave in many communities.

 

55.The invention of electronic car is a part of our effort to protect the environment.

 

56.The invention of electric vehicles is part of our effort to sustain the environment.

 

 

 

1.Parents’ duty is to give children a good family environment.

 

2.Parents’ duty is to give children a comfortable family environment.

 

3.Many rural people have decided to move to cities.

 

4.Many rural residents have decided to move to cities.

 

5.This accident is similar to the one happened last year.

 

6.The accident was similar to the one that happened last year.

 

7.I don’t agree with those opinions that put forward by supporters of globalization.

 

8.I disagree with many points made by the supporters of globalization.

 

9.The teaching programme consists of main courses and optional courses.

 

10.The curriculum consists of core courses and optional courses.

 

11.Most children seem to be easier to remember bad habits,but not good habits.

 

12.Most children seem to be better at remembering bad habits,instead of good ones.

 

13.Teamwork was proved to be effective in improving students’ behaviour.

 

14.Teamwork has proven effective in improving students’ performance.

 

15.I will discuss this subject in more detail.

 

16.I will discuss this topic in some detail.

 

17.In many countries,income is constant,even falling.

 

18.In many countries,salaries remain unchanged and even drop.

 

19.Education allows young people to find jobs easily after graduation.

 

20.Education can let young people find jobs easily after they finish their education.

 

21.Whether we like it or not,our family decides our life and make us different individuals.

 

22.Whether we like it or not,our families shape our lives and make us what we are.

 

23.Private endowments allow the academic world to survive.

 

24.Private sponsorship has allowed the academic community to survive.

 

25.Consumer confidence should be improved,it’s crucial to the economic recovery.

 

26.Consumer confidence should be improved,as it is crucial to an economic recovery.

 

27.Many smokers are not willing to quit smoking even through they know it’s harmful to health.

 

28.Many smokers are unwilling to cease smoking despite their knowledge of ill health effects.

 

29.Many children rely on their parents’ support.

 

30.Many children depend on their parents’ support.