0315写作02

 

1.The disordered state of society may lead to an economic disaster in the country.

 

2.Public disorder can lead to a country’s economic crisis.

 

3.This problem have many ways to be solved.

 

4.There are many solutions to this problem.

 

5.Traditional constructions are popular sometimes,because of a simple reason------they have economic and cultural values.

 

6.Traditional buildings are desired sometimes,for the simple reason that they are of commercial and cultural values.

 

7.People have different attitudes towards life.

 

8.People have different attitudes towards life.

 

9.Now students are more likely to do assignments on the computer.

 

10.Today,students are more likely to do homework on the computer.

 

11.People can commute to work on foot or by bike every day.

 

12.People can travel to and from duty every day on foot or by bike.

 

13.The problems facing the country is not easy to be solved.

 

14.There are no easy answers to the problems facing this country.

 

15.A balanced diet is an important part of a healthy life.

 

16.A balanced diet is an integral part of a healthy lifestyle.

 

17.Young drivers are more likely to have a accident than old drivers.

 

18.Young drivers are more likely to have accidents than old drivers.

 

19.Cycling is beneficial to our health.

 

20.Cycling is beneficial to our health.

 

21.The importance of education has always been recognized in the society.

 

22.The importance of education for one’s success has long been recognized in society.

 

23.It’s important for students to receive job training.

 

24.It is important for students to receive job training.

 

25.Students will be very competitive in the labor market if they receive job training.

 

26.Students can become competitive in the labor market if they receive job training.

 

27.Although the crime rate has declined in many parts of the world,violent crimes are still rampant.

 

28.Although the crime rate is falling in many parts of the world,violent crimes are constantly rampant.

 

29.Today,more people are able to receive education,but many adults still have problems with writing and numeracy.

 

30.Education has been made available to more people nowadays,however,many adults have some problems with literacy and numeracy.

 

31.People always think being on a diet is healthy,but there are many evidences to prove it is wrong.

 

32.People like to think that being on a diet is healthy,however,there is considerable evidence to the contrary.

 

33.Smoking and drinking are forbidden in many workplaces.

 

34.Smoking and drinking are banned in many places of work.

 

35.If conditions are right,more people will prefer walking or cycling.

 

36.More people would prefer cycling or walking if conditions were right.

 

37.Because it was not very serious,many countries did not take any substantive measure.

 

38.Because it is not serious,many countries do not take any real countermeasure.

 

39.Some countries are not able to solve the environmental problems,although these countries have realized the influence of these problems.

 

40.Some countries are not able to solve environmental problems,although these countries have realized these problems’ devastating effect.

 

41.Tourism has replaced agriculture as a pillar industry in some places.

 

42.Tourism has replaced agriculture as the main industry in many places.

 

43.There are more than 100 million television audiences in China.

 

44.China has more than 100 million subscribers to cable television.

 

45.Is this a serious feeling or a moment of good feeling,this problem still exists.

 

46.The question remains whether it was a serious love affair or a passing fancy.

 

47.Many people don’t realize how serious the environmental problem is.

 

48.Many people do not realize how serious environmental problem can be.

 

49.It is widely recognized that people can improve efficiency by using computes.

 

50.It is widely believed that people can improve efficiency by using computers.

 

51.Government funding is based on a fact that education is the key to a long-term success of the country.

 

52.Government funding is supported by the fact that education is the key to a country’s long-term success.