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In the passage, the author claims that …. He/She also cites various other evidence that…. Therefore, he/she draws a quick conclusion: …. Unfortunately, underlying this reasoning are unwarranted assumptions: 1) … 2) .. 3)… Close scrutiny of those assumptions, however, reveals none of them lend credible support to the conclusion.
First of all,/Secondly/Thirdly,
A does not necessarily indicate that B/ A has little indication about that …
To support his/her conclusion, author claims that …
In the passage, the author does not contains evidence of the …. to support his/her conclusion. / Moreover, the author provides no evidence that ...
In fact, it is more likely …/The fact that….
Since ….., his/her claim that … is untenable.
… might appear to lead support to the author’s claim However, it is entirely possible that …
… would lend support to the author’s claim only if …. However, the author provides no credible evidence that this is the case.
Thus, in order to fully support author’s conclusion, the author should provide more specific and detailed evidence to make his/her conclusion more sound: 1).. 2).. 3)…
… statistics/survey/assurances