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Admittedly, I may not be able to become a professional player if I only have a small amount of time practicing it. On the other hand, the possibility of master a simple but delicious food seems pretty fascinating. Additionally, make somethings by hand such as clothing or jewelry really sounds but challenging and intriguing. However, in my opinion, learn a sport that I never learn before is a more appropriate choice for me when I am busy studying and only have little free time.

 

First of all, learning a new sport can provide an opportunity to make new friends with others. So, not only can I learn something pretty interesting, such as basketball, but I would also share the experience of learning the sport game together with some new friends who make come from different areas and have different backgrounds. Whenever we have a rest, causal conversations between the team members can also broaden my horizon in some way. Additionally, I may feel worry or upset about my courses as I prepare it all day. So, it's really a nice choice for me to ease myself with the encouragement given by these new friends.

 

Secondly, a little bit headache may happen to my if keep busy and tension when I have been constantly concentrating and focusing on the papers and books to try to learn new and review the knowledge. Sometimes it may even boring to keep one thing all day long. However, sport games can really give me more energy to go on with the fresh air in out outsider, cool and sunny. It really an amazing thing that run and jump with other peer to play some sport and interact with others. Sports activities all is a valuable thing to keep me fit during the time of tough and exhausted study, which is prominent important to keep a strong body at this time.

 

Thirdly, it's just not the best time to learn that kind of things when I have so tight schedule. It is very believable that I may need a quiet place to learn in order to keep focus. So, I would try to find somewhere I can learn myself as a result I may not communicate with others all the day. It would be quite unhappy to just continue learn something from YouTube or some website on how to cook dishes in my kitchen. What's more, to create delicate clothes or beautiful jewelry must be time consuming. So, I may finally get somethings that was not so well-looking, which would make me even more tried and nervous when I also need to handle to the busy studies.

 

In conclusion, it is feasible and intriguing to learn a sport that I never learn before than cooking food or make something by hand with the new friends who I can relieve my stress with and the wonderful relaxation time when I am also keep myself fit.

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Admittedly, I may not be able to become a professional player if I only have a small amount of time practicing it. On the other hand, the possibility of mastering a simple cooking skill seems fascinating. Additionally, make somethings by hand such as clothing or jewelry really sounds but challenging and intriguing. However, in my opinion, learning a sport that I never learn before is a more appropriate choice for me when I am busy studying and only have little free time.

 

First of all, learning a new sport can provide an opportunity to make new friends with others. So, not only can I learn something pretty interesting, such as basketball, but I would also share the experience of learning the sport game together with some new friends who come from different areas and have different backgrounds. During the break, causal conversations between the team members can also broaden my horizon in some way. Additionally, I may feel worry or upset about my courses as I prepare it all day. So, it's really a nice choice for me to ease myself with the encouragement given by these new friends.

 

Secondly, a little bit headache may happen to me if I keep busy and tension when I have been constantly concentrating and focusing on the papers and books to try to learn new and review the knowledge. Sometimes it may even boring to keep one thing all day long. However, sport games can really give me more energy to go on with the fresh air, cool and sunny. It really an amazing thing that run and jump with other peer to play some sport and interact with others. Sports activities are valuable thing to keep me fit during the time of tough and exhausted study, which is prominent important to keep a strong body at this time.

 

Thirdly, it's just not the best time to learn that kind of things when I have so tight schedule. It is very believable that I may need a quiet place to learn in order to keep focus. So, I would try to find somewhere I can learn myself as a result I may not communicate with others all the day. It would be quite unhappy to just continue learn something from YouTube or some website on how to cook dishes in my kitchen. What's more, to create delicate clothes or beautiful jewelry must be time consuming. So, I may finally get somethings that was not so well-looking, which would make me even more tired and nervous when I also need to handle to the busy studies.

 

In conclusion, it is feasible and intriguing to learn a sport that I never learn before than cooking food or making something by hand with the new friends who I can relieve my stress with and the wonderful relaxation time when I am also keep myself fit.