It seems that I still have to make some changes to my common app essay. I did not choose a wise topic and my first impression on this topic is not correct. Ike reminds me that I should pay attention to trivial things in life and take it as a cause for my deeper thoughts to be shown. I already chosen a topic but it is a little bit hard to think of an incidence that can give rise to my meditation.
I would like to take the crash my site as an example and emphasize on the change before and after the incident happens. I still don't think it will be easy. Even Ike edited his essay for seventeen times and eventually one of his essays is not that good. As long as I know the trend and ways to write a qualified application essay, I have an orientation at least. I need to work harder on that.
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