【学术英文写作】如何给英文期刊投稿？

 ACADEMIC ENGLISH WRITING  

Directions: In this part of test, you are going to write a text in compliance with academic English writing conventions in a certain academic scenario.

Scenario:

       You are a graduate student in the Department of Computer Science, and you have recently completed a research project on machine learning algorithms for medical image analysis.

        You have identified an upcoming international conference, "Innovative Technologies in Healthcare (ITHC) 2024," which you believe is an appropriate venue to present your findings.

        Draft an email to the conference organizing committee to submit your paper entitled "Enhancing Medical Image Analysis with Advanced Machine Learning Techniques."

Your email should include a clear subject line, a well-structured body, and a proper closing with your signature (including your name, affiliation, and contact information).

• Introduce yourself and briefly describe your research project, highlighting its relevance to the conference theme.
• Attach your paper as a PDF document and any other required documents, such as author bios or conflict of interest disclosures.
• Inquire about the next steps in the submission process and any additional information the committee might need from you.

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Subject Line: Request for Feedback on Manuscript: "The Cognitive Impact of Digital Media on Learning"

Body:

Dear Dr. Johnson,

        I hope this message finds you in good health and spirits. My name is Emily Thompson, and I am a research associate at the Center for Educational Technology and Learning Sciences.

        I am writing to seek your valuable feedback on a manuscript I have been working on, titled "The Cognitive Impact of Digital Media on Learning." Your extensive research on cognitive development and the use of technology in educational settings has been highly influential in shaping my own work.

[Paragraph 1: Introduction and Purpose]

        The manuscript explores the intersection of cognitive science and educational technology, examining how digital media tools affect learning outcomes and cognitive processes in K-12 students. Our study utilizes a mixed-methods approach, combining quantitative data from educational software usage with qualitative interviews to assess the impact on critical thinking skills.

[Paragraph 2: Specific Request]

        As your research has delved into similar areas, I believe your perspective could greatly enhance the quality of our work. Specifically, I would appreciate your insights on the following:

• The theoretical framework we have proposed for understanding cognitive impacts.
• The methodology we have employed and any potential improvements.
• Any recent studies or literature you think we should consider citing.

[Paragraph 3: Attaching the Manuscript and Next Steps]

        I have attached the full manuscript for your review. I understand your schedule is busy, so I am flexible on the timeline for your feedback. If you are available, I would also be grateful for the opportunity to discuss the manuscript over a brief call or meeting to exchange ideas more directly.

[Paragraph 4: Closing and Thanks]

        Thank you in advance for considering my request. Your expertise in this area is highly respected, and any feedback would be immensely beneficial to the development of our research.

Warm regards,

Emily Thompson, PhD

Research Associate

Center for Educational Technology and Learning Sciences

xxx@email.com