TPO31

亮点： small proportion of people who cannot keep up with this trend or resist the world for the fittest, may hold a viewpoint that a mutable society leads people to less satisfaction and mitigation of sense of happiness since such a world might cause the alienation between good fellows and contamination of our environment;

mutable 表里比兴
how can we blame on the changing world while enjoying happiness and satisfactions originated from them?

范文：
In modern society, there is no denying that our paces speed up. A small proportion of people who cannot keep up with this trend or resist the world for the fittest, may hold a viewpoint that a mutable society leads people to less satisfaction and mitigation of sense of happiness since such a world might cause the alienation between good fellows and contamination of our environment; however, in my view, it is not the case. As a matter of fact, in a world changing more rapidly, people tend to become satisfied much more easily.

First illustration which can demonstrate my opinion can be the trail of technological development. In the past five decades, millions of new inventions had appeared, entering our daily life, making it much more convenient. To name a good example, in 1896,Benz assembled the first three-wheel car in the world. Though it brought accidents and mortality to the world, we cannot deny the enjoyment of ferocious speed brought by cars, which made our jaunt convenient. We can simply drop by a old friend 100 miles, a distance taking at least half day before, away in one hour. Another good instance is the invention of smart phone. in 1972, Martin, the chief engineer in Moto devised the first portable telephone. Then, this innovation revolutionized out life. Just simply imagine what our life looked like without cell phones: people could not keep contact with their friends and exigent messages might be blocked. Then in 2007, Steve Jobs brought iPhone with Facetime to the world. The most significant aspect of Facetime is that this app allows us to communicate with actual image, not just voices. Then, how can we state that modern society steals the sense of fraternity among people?

Second demonstration which can help me develop my view that a rapidly changing society makes people more satisfied is the use of new energy resources. We may still remember the Great Smog, one of the gravest air pollution accidents in our history due to the heavily gathered inversion layer of sulfur dioxide originated with burning of coal in 1950s, London. People died of respiratory diseases after inhalation of poisonous air. How can they live happily in a world brimmed with pollutions? But nowadays, we have developed new energy resources to tackle this problem such as hydropower and wind power. To name an example, in 2007, nuclear power plants generate 14% of the total electricity of the US, thus saving tons of coals and reducing the level of inhalable particles. Recently, governments and organizations have taken measures to support researches of renewable resources and to find substitutes for fossil fuels. Natural reserves and sanctuaries are established, places of interest and spots are refurbished, and factories and manufacturers with pestilent exhaust are shut down. People therefore are provided with much more opportunities to relax by enjoying the beauty of nature.

To draw a conclusion, in a world that is rapidly changing, we are offered a variety of brand-new experiences and highly evolved products, which make life much easier than before. We are in a world filled with convenience brought by high technologies that develop so fast. Then, how can we blame on the changing world while enjoying happiness and satisfactions originated from them?

改进后：

In contemporary society, it is a increasingly widespread argument about the pressure brought by the development in both tecnological and social is so heavy and unbearable. However, this statement suffers from under both logical and factical fallacies. Adittedly we are exposed to the high-speed changing world, but considering that the improvement on infrastructure and the convinient high-tech devices, as well as the widely admitted spirit of liberty, I formly approve of that people are under more happiness and satisfoactory nowadays.

For one thing, the development on social infrastrcture has made our life much more convinient and favorable. For example, compared with the rapidly high-speed raliways and airlines, the traffic methods several years ago are undoubtly unefficient and time-wasting. It takes me about one day from my hometown to university in the past, however, I can easily have a breakfast at home and hanging out with my classmates in the afternoon now. Besides the traffic, the infrastructure of parks and hospitals both contribute to our phisical and mental health, which to a great extent enriches our life.

For another thing, the advancement on the electronic devices provides us more chances to experience more other lifestyles. With a laptop or smart-phone in our hand, even olds and children could take get to know the culture and unstoms over the otehr side of the earth, and even communicate with the locals. Social evelopment also brings some potential influence in some other entertainments; taking advantages of colorful part-time activities such as skiing, skarting, or computer games make our life full of hapiness and joyment.

Additionally, with the development of social productive forces and the enhancement of people life standard, the awareness of liberty is much widely accepted and planted. According to a survey conducted by Tsinghua University, one of the most prestiguous campus in China, 80 percent of the responds, the students claim that parents are not strict and influencial to their own life now than before. With a harmony family and relaxing social atmosphere, as well as so much kinds of entertainments, it is hard to image that people are less satisfied and happy than the past.

In a nutshell, I definitely believe that people today are happier and easier than before. As every one ha their own opinion, I also hope that they might compromise after exposed to this article.