IELTS 作文

Assignment Six

 

青少年犯罪的原因(3个分论点)

 

Segment One

 

argument :The juvenile whose parents has divorced or homeless are easier to commit a crime.

 

evidence: Love from family menbers and friends are very significant to adolescent.It not only

 

                teach them love the misfortune people and take care of elders and children,But also

 

                it can give them an optimistic and positive attitude about the world and their lifes.

 

                The most efficient is love is the communication between heart and heart,it can give

 

                 you ackonwledge and trust from others.

 

Segment Two

 

argument: Media will do negative effect on young people.

 

evidence: As the youngers,their characters and tempers are very instability,Most of them

 

              are like sing popular-music and worship film stars or famous singers.What is the best

 

                way to make them to get closer to the stars?To Imitate them,wear the strange cloth,and

 

               play the baddies in the real society.they may consider it is very exciting and satisfied even

 

               very cool,but all of the illegal things which did by them is beyond their age and beyond

 

               the boundary of laws too.

 

Segment three

 

argument:The yonth who lack of education lean to do illegal cases.

 

evidence: Education can widen younger's outlook and let them touch the new things,

 

                let them master more kownledge and skills,the most important is that it can

 

                cultivate the ability in judge right and wrong and the ability in estimate the

 

                result of something.All of the youngers who had leave school will not get

 

                the benefits which bringed by education,the distance between uneducated

 

                people and educated people will become more and more evidence,Meanwhile.

 

               The distance will make society become more and more instability too.