六级作文笔记

段落

首段

In the contemporary world, __(主题词) have/has become increasingly important.

It's of great necessity for __ to __.

引出第二段

The following solutions can account for this issue properly.

中间段

顺序词

first of all, in the first place

moreover, furthermore

last but not least

结尾段

all in all, to sum up, on the whole

作文类型

1. 分析问题，解决问题

        With the development of the society, with the advent of _____________ (相关事物或现象), we have to face a problem that ______________________ (主题问题). What are the reasons for it? In the following paragraphs, I’ll venture to explore the reasons. To start with, _____________________ (阐述原因1). Moreover, __________________ (阐述原因2). In addition, _______________________ (阐述原因3). In view of the seriousness of the problem, effective measures should be taken. For one thing, it is high time that people all over China realized the importance of __________________ (解决主题问题). For another, the government should issue strict laws and regulations in order to put the situation under control.

范文 

On the Popularity of Microblog

1. 目前微博很流行
2. 微博流行的原因
3. 可能存在的问题

        With the improvement of microblog services and the influence of some “star microbloggers”, most of whom are celebrities, microblog is becoming an important and convenient way for people to express their opinions and communicate with others. Now, more and more people start to use microblog services provided by different websites.
        However, microblog might give rise to some problems as well. Some microbloggers may become so dependent on microblogs that they would rather express their thoughts and feelings by writing them down in the microblog than communicate with family members or friends. Day by day, microblogs tend to draw them away from their real life. What’s worse, lack of face-to-face communication with others might isolate microbloggers from the society, which would do harm to their mental health.
        In my view, microblog is a good platform for people to share their personal experiences and communicate with others. But microbloggers should also have a rational attitude toward it and avoid spending too much time on it. After all, sitting in front of the cold screen for a long period of time does no good to their health.

 On the Losing of Traditional Culture

1. 现在许多传统文化正慢慢消失
2. 传统文化消失的原因
3. 我的看法

        It is widely noted that lots of traditional culture is disappearing along with the development of technology. Many ancient architectures and traditional ways of living have been deserted. It seems that the traditional culture and craftsmanship will be replaced in this modern era.  
        The following reasons can account for the above phenomenon. Firstly, traditional technologies are always considered ineffective while the new sciences are always highly efficient. Secondly, it is costly to protect the traditional culture. If the fund used to protect the ancient culture was instead delivered to the poor, it will be helpful to the improvement of their living standard. Thirdly, modern science and technology facilitate both our daily and academic life a lot. For instance, college students always collect their thesis materials by surfing the Internet instead of borrowing books from the library. 
        In my opinion, although traditional culture is an ancient heritage, it couldn’t keep pace with the development of society. It is the tide of history that the traditional culture and technology will no doubt be eliminated in the end.

False News Reports

1. 目前虚假新闻屡见不鲜
2. 出现这种现象的原¬因
3. 应如何杜绝这种现象

        It’s not uncommon that some journalists make up false or misleading stories about celebrities, illnesses, crimes, etc. Take celebrities for example. The death of the famous writer Jin Yong appeared in several news reports recently, which proved to be false.
        People may wonder why so many journalists cook up false stories. More often than not, the reason is all about personal interests. Most journalists create misleading news in order to draw public attention so as to make themselves more popular or to win certain prizes. To achieve these goals, they try to get something out of nothing and rumour about famous figures regardless of those people’s privacy.
        Now, it’s high time for China’s journalism supervisory bodies to deal with the false news reports. They should take stringent measures to prevent all possible false news. For instance, journalists who are found to manipulate news should be severely punished and could be banned from news writing for ten years or more.

 

2. 对比观点，做出选择

        There is a widespread concern over the issue that (作文题目)___. But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person. A majority of people think that _________（观点1）. In their views there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude as follows: in the first place, __________（原因1）.Furthermore, in the second place, ______（原因2）. So it goes without saying that ________（重复观点1）.

        People, however, differ in their opinions on this matter. Some people hold the idea that __________（观点2）. In their point of view, on the one hand， __________（原因1）. On the other hand, _________（原因2）.
        Therefore, there is no doubt that _________（重复观点2）. As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that ________（观点1或观点2）. It is not only because ________, but also because _________. The more _______, the more _______。（阐述自己选择的原因）

范文 

On the Importance of Imagination

1. 有人说想象力很重要
2. 也有人觉得想象力无关紧要
3. 我认为……

        Imagination is the ability to form a mental image of something that is not perceived through the senses. As to the attitude towards imagination, it varies from person to person. Some people think that imagination is good for many things. First, imagination makes it possible to experience a whole world inside the mind. Secondly, imagination has a great role and value in each one’s life.
        However, some people hold a negative view on it. They think it does not matter whether you have imagination or not. First, imagination is not practical, which makes people daydreamers. Second, people sometimes do not have to be imaginative in life or work. If they follow the step-by-step schedule, they also would succeed. In their eyes, imagination is a creative power but it is not necessary to achieve success in any field. 
        As I am concerned, I think we should recognize the importance of the power of the imagination, maintain, and develop our imagination as time steps. Understanding how to use your imagination correctly will put you on the golden path to success, satisfaction, and happiness.

3. 分析利弊，给出观点

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        Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over (the issue that) _________（作文题目）. In fact, there are both advantages and disadvantages in _______（题目议题）. Generally speaking, it is widely believed there are several positive aspects as follows. Firstly, _________（优点1）. And secondly ________（优点2）.
        Just As a popular saying goes, “every coin has two sides”, ________ （所讨论的话题）is no exception, and in another word, it still has negative aspects. To begin with, _________（缺点1）. In addition, __________（缺点2）.
        To sum up, we should try to bring the advantages of ______ （所讨论的话题）into full play, and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same time. In that case, we will definitely make a better use of the _______（所讨论的话题）.

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        With the development of science and human civilization, many formerly unimaginable things come into reality. Some of them have positive effects on our life, but some are distasteful. The phenomenon of ________ （所讨论的话题） is an example of the former / latter one.
        There are many factors that may account for it, and the following are the most conspicuous aspects. To start with, ________(原因1). Furthermore, ______ (原因2). Eventually, ________(原因3).
Good as ________（所讨论的话题）is, it has, unfortunately, its disadvantages. The apparent example is that _______(缺点例子1). In addition, _______ (缺点例子2).
        On the whole, the phenomenon is one of the results of the progress of the modern society. There is still a long way for us to improve / eliminate _______（所讨论的话题）and make our life more comfortable.

范文 

College Students and Luxuries

1. 现在不少大学生都拥有奢侈品
2. 大学生获得奢侈品的途径有……
3. 我认为……

        Walking on the campus, you’ll find luxuries are not far away for students. Some wear CK clothes and some carry LV bags. According to an online survey conducted by Tencent in May this year, there are 37 percent students claiming to have a certain luxury. 
        On the basis of the survey, the way of obtaining luxuries is quite different. Some students get them from their parents, as their families are in good financial condition. Some take part-time jobs to buy luxuries by themselves. For example, a college student named Xiao Mei said she worked as a tutor for three months in order to get a bottle of Dior perfume. Some receive luxuries as a gift from their friends or relatives.
        As for me, I object to students’ using luxuries. It is known that luxuries are notable for their super prices. However, students are not economically independent and their attention should be paid to study. In this sense, using luxuries is improper for students.

 

4. 答题性议论文

如何解决某个问题或某种现象

        Currently, there is a widespread concern over （the issue that）_________（作文题目） .It is really an important concern to every one of us. As a result, we must spare no efforts to take some measures to solve this problem.（阐述题目所述话题）
As we know that there are many steps which can be taken to undo this problem. First of all, ________（途径1）. In addition, another way contributing to success of the solving problem is ________（途径2）.
        Above all, to solve the problem of _________（作文题目）, we should find a number of various ways. But as far as I am concerned, I would prefer to solve the problem in this way, that is to say, _________（方法）.

 范文

How to Enhance Etiquette Education?

1. 礼仪教育很重要
2. 现在许多大学生都不懂礼仪
3. 为加强礼仪教育，家长和学校应该……

        Etiquette education, which plays an important role in moral education, has caught more and more people’s attention. Because it is an integral part of quality-oriented education and contributes to the construction of a harmonious society.
        However, due to the lack of etiquette education in schools and families as well as the bad influence of the social environment, many college students have little knowledge of etiquette, thus it is quite common to see their bad behaviors. For example, they have no respect for their professors and the old, they talk to each other loudly in the library and don’t care about what they should wear in public places.
        Regarding the seriousness of this phenomenon, I think we should take the following measures to arouse university students’ etiquette awareness. First, parents should set a good example for their children at home. Second, colleges should pay attention to students’ etiquette education and open some courses relating to etiquette, and they ought to try their best to create a good campus environment at the same time.

评价解决方案的优缺点并给出自己的解决方案

        In recent days, we have to face I problem_____A, which is becoming more and more serious. First, ____________（说明Ａ的现状）．Second, _______________（举例进一步说明现状） Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. For one thing, _______________（解决方法一）. For another ________（解决方法二）. Finally, _______（解决方法三）.
        Personally, I believe that ________（我的解决方法）. Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because _________（带来的好处）.

5. 名言警句型议论文

        It is well know to us that the proverb: " __________"（名言） has a profound significance and value not only in our job but also in our study. It means __________（名言的含义）. The saying can be illustrated through a series of examples as follows.
A case in point is _________（举例说明）. Therefore, it is goes without saying that it is of great of importance to practice the proverb _________（名言）.
With the rapid development of science and technology in China, an increasing number of people come to realize that it is also of practical use to stick to the saying: _________（名言）. The more we are aware of the significance of this famous saying, the more benefits we will get in our daily study and job.

6. 图表作文

        Clearly as it is shown/indicated/illustrated in the figure/（graph/picture/pie/chart）that________。（描述图片内容）
        There are at least two good reasons accounting for ______. On the one hand, ________. On the other hand, _______ is due to the fact that ________. In addition, ________ is responsible for _______. Maybe there are some other reasons to show ________. But it is generally believed that the above mentioned reasons are .（分析图片现象的原因）
        As far as I am concerned, I hold the point of view that _______. I am sure my opinion is both sound and well_grounded.（发表个人观点）

热点话题型 （对当前热点话题发表自己的看法）

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        With the development of modern industry, more and more people are concerned about the problem that ______________ (主题问题). Accordingly, _______________________________ (伴随主题问题出现的新问题) is becoming more and more serious.
        Confronted with _______(主题问题), we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. For one thing, _______(解决方法1). For another, __________(解决方法2). Finally, ____________ (解决方法3).
        As far as I am concerned, the best way out is ________ (解决方法3). Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because ____________(解决方法3的优点和好处).

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        With the development of the society, with the advent of _____________ (相关事物或现象), we have to face a problem that ______________________ (主题问题).
        What are the reasons for it? In the following paragraphs, I’ll venture to explore the reasons. To start with, _____________________ (阐述原因1). Moreover, __________________ (阐述原因2). In addition, _______________________ (阐述原因3）
        In view of the seriousness of the problem, effective measures should be taken. For one thing, it is high time that people all over China realized the importance of __________________ (解决主题问题). For another, the government should issue strict laws and regulations in order to put the situation under control.

7. 提纲式

对立观点式

A. 有人认为X 是好事,赞成X,为什么?

B. 有人认为X 是坏事,反对X,为什么?

C. 我的看法。

Some people are in favor of the idea of doing X. They point out the fact that 支持X 的第一个原因。They also argue that 支持X 的另一个原因。However, other people stand on a different ground. They consider it harmful to do X. They firmly point out that 反对X 的第一个理由。 An example can give the details of this argument: There is some truth in both arguments. But I think the advantages of X overweigh the disadvantages. In addition to the above-mentioned negative effects it might bring about, X also may X 的有一个坏处。

批驳观点式

A.一个错误观点。

B.我不同意。

Many people argue that 错误观点。By saying that, they mean 对这个观点的进一步解释。An example they have presented is that 一个例子。(According to a survey performed by X on a group of Y, almost 80% of them 赞成这个错误观点或者受到这个错误观点的影响)。 There might be some element of truth in these people’s belief. But if we consider it in depth, we will feel no reservation to conclude that 与错误观点相反的观点。There are a number of reasons behind my belief. (以下参照辩论文的.议论文写法)。

社会问题(现象)

A.一个社会问题或者现象

B.产生的原因

C.对社会和我们生活的影响

D.如何杜绝。(如果是问题的话)

E.前景的预测。

Nowadays, there exists an increasingly serious social/economic/environmental problem. (X has increasingly become a common concern of the public). According to a survey, 调查内容说明这种现象的情况。(或者是一个例子)。 There are a couple of reasons booming this problem/phenomenon.下面参照辩论式议论文写法。 X has caused substantial impact on the society and our daily life, which has been articulated in the following aspects. 参照辩论式议论文的写法。 A dozen of measures are supposed to take to prevent X from bringing us more harm. 同上Based on the above discussions, I can easily forecast that more and more people will……

8. 说明原因型

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        Nowadays ,there are more and more XX in some big cities . It is estimated that (用具体数据说明XX现象). Why have there been so many XX ? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows.The first one is that (原因一). Besides, (原因二). The third reason is (原因三).To sum up ,the main cause of XX is due to (指出主要原因).

        It is high time that something were done upon it. For one thing, (解决建议一).On the other hand, (解决建议二). All these measures will certainly reduce the number of XX .

范文

Generation gap between parents and children

        Nowadays , there are more and more misunderstanding between parents and children which is so- called generation gap . It is estimated that (用具体数据说明XX现象75 percentages of parents often complain their childrens unreasonable behavior while children usually think their parents too old fashioned).

        Why have there been so much misunderstanding between parents and children?Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows . The first one is that (原因一the two generations,having grown up at different times, have different likes and dislikes ,and common to talk abothus the disagreement often rises between them). Besides (原因二due to having little in ut , they are not willing to sit face to face ). The third reason is (原因三with the pace of modern life becoming faster and faster , both of them are so busy with their work or study that they dont spare enough time to exchange ideas ).To sum up ,the main cause of XX is due to (指出主要原因lack of communication and understanding each other).

        It is high time that something were done upon it. For one thing (解决建议一children should respect their parents ).On the other hand ,(解决建议二parents also should show solicitude for their children). All these measures will certainly bridge the generation gap.

8. 指出现象或争议话题

        Ever since…, there have been ongoing disputes over…

        With the increasing concerns about…, people are calling for…

        …draws the public’s attention once again to…, a repeatedly discussed yet constantly unsolved social issue.
        ……再一次吸引公众的注意力至……,这是一个经常讨论但一直未得到解决的社会问题。