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文章目录
文章概要
Part one 六级作文的形式
1.开放式写作
2.图画写作
3.名言哲理
4.提纲
Part two 写作的三要素
1.华丽的辞藻
2.复杂的句式
3.逻辑的框架
Part one 六级作文的形式
1.开放式写作
2.图画写作
3.名言哲理
4.提纲
Part two 写作的三要素
1.华丽的辞藻
2.复杂的句式
3.逻辑的框架
一、词汇的升级
1.think
1)我认为
观点词汇:
hold / maintain / deem / argue / allege / assert that
短语:
consider / rate / view / see A as B
e.g. Irate self-confidence as a key element for our personal growth.
词组:
for my part; from my perspective
插入结构:
主语,I+观点词汇,谓语
固定句式:
I harbor the view / notification / assertion / allegation that +观点内容
2)越来越多的人认为
person in an increasing number / in an mouting number + 观点词汇
3)大家认为(形式主语)
公式:It is +冠词+ adj + n +do/that 主从
adj: widely - accepted;universally-shared;widely - acknowledged
n: view;truth;belief; fact
e.g. It is widely-accepted truth that citizens,especially the youngster,should have a strong sense of accountability / liability / duty / obligation.
2.people
1)群体(大主体) (提建议;分析原因)
政府: government;authority; Administration
媒体:the mass media; newspaper; journalism;
社会:society
相关机构:the relevant agency / organization / institution
2)个体
年轻人:
the + adj.=the young
the youngsters
the under- aged
the adolescent/ juvenile
the fledging adult
老年人:
the old
aging population
senior citizen
the infirm and elder population
成功人士
social elites
high achievers
expert performers
各种各样的人
strong-willed
grey-haired
poor-looking
be-deeply-loved
干什么的人
固定句式:those / people + doing sth.(后置定语)
those owning critical mind (创新型头脑的人)
people gain success
those persistently adhering to strict plan in the daily life may gain ultimate / maximum success.
those escaping the accountability of supporting and caring their infirm parents hold the view that it may enhance / aggravate their economic burden.(academic burden;life burden)
3.good
1)adj.
decent (job); physical wellness;a promising future ; an ever-bright / prospect future ; a positive mind; outstanding; splendid;
2)擅长
excel in doing sth.
be expert in
be sophisticated at doing sth.
have a good command of
4.bad
- adj.
terrible ; awful ; pity ; shame ;
harmful = toxic = poisonous
nasty
ruinous = damaging = disastrous
hazardous = detrimental
- 动词结构
be + adj. +to =vt.
be harmful to;
be hazardous to
3)短语
have / exert a/an + adj. + effect on sth.
pose a threat to sth
例子(总结建议句子)
what we do above is beneficial , not detrimental , is to (+名词/ doing) to protecting our living circumstances / the cultivation of students’ practical and problem - solving abilities / sustainable development of traditional cultures.
5.should(问题解决)
1)短语
be supposed to ; deserve to do; be bound to do; be obliged to
2)形式主语
it is imperative / indispensable / pivotal for sb to do sth.(主从)
doing sth/ to do sth. be + of +great +benefic/significance
it is no denying that
it is no exaggeration(夸张) to say that
二、复杂的句式结构
1.利用定语
1)后置定语
**公式:**n(人/物)+后置定语(doing sth./ done sth / 介词短语 / adj 短语)
e.g. the fresh graduates lacking working experience can not hunt for decent jobs.
a drop-out(辍学) girl coming from poverty-striking area in southwest China
2) 黄金公式
公式: 冠词+ adj./量词短语+ n. +后置定语
e.g. the high quality (of self-confidence) is a valuable element necessary for us to succeed in life journey , intellectual pursuit and career prospect.
Standing on the road are a group of fresh graduates who are confronted with multiple choices including …
1.同位语
1) 身份地位的介绍
公式: 人,身份地位(名词/as + 名词),谓语+其他
举例:I,as an advocator of sustainable development, intend to write a letter with respect to white pollution caused by the misuse of plastic bags in our daily life.
The picture aims to sound an alarm about the investable inevitable issue of physical conditions in our university.
2)名人名言
公式: as sb. 身份地位介绍 , has put it
As Bacon, the greatest British philosher , has put it: “knowledge is power”.
3.it 形式主语
1)固定搭配
it is said that
it is reported that
it is no exaggeration to say that 毫不夸张地说
it is no denying that (提建议)
2)形式主语公式
it is + adv. + adj. / n / done + for sb + to do / that 主语从句
举例:it is imperative(至关重要的) for us to utilize(利用) internet in a reasonable way / manner (方式) , avoiding online indulgence(上网成瘾).
it is extremely obvious that the quality of (collaboration(合作) / confidence / perseverance) plays an important role in life journey whenever we meet adversity / challenges / loneliness and setbacks .
4.倒装
1)完全倒装(描述图片)
公式: 表语前置(doing + 其他 / 过去分词 + 其他 / adj.)+ be +主语 + 其他
举例:
four youngsters are sitting around the table
倒装:
sitting around the table are four youngsters who are indulged in(沉迷于) their smart phones.
2)部分倒装(only 结构)
1 only by this
2 only doing so
3 only through doing sth
4 only + 状语从句(不倒装) , can we / may it be of much possibility for us to do.
举例:
Only through undergoing(经历) more challenges and adversity , may it be of much possibily for us to cultivate / nurture (培养) strong will and marvelous (不同寻常的) capability.
对比
公式:
A is to B as C is to D
water is to duck as bread to me
moral degradation is to state as physical illness is to individual.